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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Estás haciendo un buen trabajo me gusta que el protagonista sea op solo espero que no hagas a los enemigos súper op porque entonces no tendría mucho sentido hacerlo op además por favor no hagas que vuele tipo Superman le quitaría la gracia por supuesto este es tu fic solo son recomendaciones
A.O.T Got a solid Story every little details is connected to each so seeing a fanfiction about this masterpiece I kinda do n'twanna read due lack of creativity especially if the story got SYSTEM 😒 welf ganna read it later
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I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)
the writing quality is fine, but if you're going to do the same ending as the anime, tell me, let's not bother reading at all, the attack on a titan has already brought a lot of frustration
Author san try to remove some of the Chinese parts, and also make it more human-like. overall the story is good and has potential. Just keep up the good work and read some of the books which are slices of life.
I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj
5 STAR No doubt loved all of your works and thanks for writing an Aot fanfic as there are literally none like I have read many of them they just ditch in middle I really hope you will not drop this
I love the flow with the book so far.Wish it would post more, but other than that. It's a great book keep going
Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Estás haciendo un buen trabajo me gusta que el protagonista sea op solo espero que no hagas a los enemigos súper op porque entonces no tendría mucho sentido hacerlo op además por favor no hagas que vuele tipo Superman le quitaría la gracia por supuesto este es tu fic solo son recomendaciones
A.O.T Got a solid Story every little details is connected to each so seeing a fanfiction about this masterpiece I kinda do n'twanna read due lack of creativity especially if the story got SYSTEM 😒 welf ganna read it later
揭示劇透 I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)
the writing quality is fine, but if you're going to do the same ending as the anime, tell me, let's not bother reading at all, the attack on a titan has already brought a lot of frustration
Author san try to remove some of the Chinese parts, and also make it more human-like. overall the story is good and has potential. Just keep up the good work and read some of the books which are slices of life.
I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj
5 STAR No doubt loved all of your works and thanks for writing an Aot fanfic as there are literally none like I have read many of them they just ditch in middle I really hope you will not drop this
I love the flow with the book so far.Wish it would post more, but other than that. It's a great book keep going
Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.