/ Anime & Comics / Atata
摘要
The avatar of the Twilight Creator has entered the World of the Avatar. Although the events take place during the time of the Legend of Aang, but I decided to replace the bald annoying Avatar of Aang with the dark-skinned cutie Avatar Korra.
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Interessting and rly good so far but I rly hate that you call them "mages" instead of "benders" xD but well keep it up :*
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I honestly tried to read this FanFic, but these massive paragraphs in each chapter are unbearable!! The story's premise is interesting, but these massive paragraphs completely spoil the story. If author-san fixes this issue I will see this FanFic again.