/ Others / As Bill Cipher in the Multiverse
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A 35 Year old man gets caught in a car accident and dies from blood loss.After travelling through a black void he finds himself in another strange dimension one filled with weird spheres and.....His body feels weird...
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as of right now very interesting concept and good chapters altough a bit short but writing is hard anyways only thing i dont like as of right now is the human Form BUT IT IS only teased as of now. give it a try
this is very good the story is short but I can tell that this story will be very good, please make more chapters
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i like it so far very interesting. :) ......................................,.................................................booo 👻 (i hate how it makes you put 140 on the review )