/ Video Games / Arcane: Wrath of the damned
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Scum, rat, plague...typical adjectives with which pilties would describe Zaunites, words not alien to Deyn, words he has heard since he learned to crawl on the floor of the rotten streets of the subway city Zaun, but he wants more, needs more and will do whatever it takes to get it....
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Honestly the premise of the story and the story line the author has written is awesome, I simply love the idea he has had, but getting past the grammar is quite difficult, considering the authors first language isn’t English, it is understandable, However it makes it hard to enjoy the story with how bad it is. I would suggest that the author workshops and edits his current chapters before upploading anymore. Possibly by having an English speaking friend to edit it, or a willing person who would like to edit it for free or using a free grammar check website such as grammarly.
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A shameless review of the author is traditional, not pretentious don't be mad just enjoy and tell me every mistake for correction.
till now i think the story is great. Mc is not super OP, please no harem.... Great Great GreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreat
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is a good fic waiting for more 👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👍✌️👍👏👍👏👍✌️👍👏👍✌️👍👏👏👍✌️👍👏👍👍✌️👍👏👍👏👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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