摘要
“This is the system? This is my trump card? Why did you only give it to me after I died?” Lu Qing crossed over to the cultivation world and spent 200 years to become a Golden Core cultivator. He married, had children, and created a clan.
He only activated the “Clan Development System” after he died from serious injuries. [Spiritual Root Enhancement], [Resource Scouting], [Pure-yang Body]... Which option do you want?
I’ll give it all to you! I truly am your ancestor. Listen to me and I’ll take you to the skies!
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The cultivation in this novel follows the standard. Qi Gathering > Foundation Establishment > Ardorous Gold Core > Nascent Soul Stage > Immortal/deity. The protagonist reincarnated into the world from earth and spends hundreds of years cultivating to the core stage and then dying. He finds himself with a system but 'dead'. He uses his system to lead his clan to greatness. Good novel please support it.
What the heck?! Why did you take this out of the trial read?! This is one of the best in the trial novel!!! Web Novel your making a big mistake, so please place this back on the trial read and then into the voting pool.
Bland. Bland as heck. The dialogue is just weird and the sentences seemed forced. Info dumps don't help and the MC is basically a robot. It was a chore to read this.
TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ. TRANSLATION IS MTL DONT READ.
It's a pain to read with all the info dumping, but you can overlook that with skimming skills, the real problem aside from the slow pace and the story getting a little bit boring because of that, it's the translation. It's just switched like that to MTL shamelessly after the pay wall. I don't get the logic behind that. Shouldn't the premium chapters be even more quality!
They really took it off the trials... Come on webnovel! Good book, premise is basically MC transmigrates, cultivates to Golden Core then dies and gets a system. Clan/Sect management. Interesting characters and the world building is pretty nice. If you want to continue reading, head over to MTLNovel. Sad I can't read a properly translated version but I guess that's Qidian for you.
It is good and refreshing for a wuxia novel. The system is new and development pace is good too. The story is well balanced ................
I am really enjoying a story where the "MC" can only influence things for his clan. Also the passage of time will be fun I think. The development of the first generation of kids is pretty good, and you get a sense this story has a solid foundation for the future.
Not entirely new, but the novel has a fresh approach on xianxia story. Pacing is good. System is not overpowered. Enemy has a real feeling of danger which are commonly missing. Read till ch. 35. So Far, So Good.
DO NOT READ! After wasting days reading +500 chapters all you will get is an unfinished rushed ending and so many plotholes at the end. Wasted potential the author just decided to stop writing halfway through the story
One of the best clan cultivation stories I have seen in a very long time. The characters are mostly family members and so far none of the annoying cliches like face smacking have happened. Story has great potential and I will certainly continue reading it.
So far so good but it has typical xianxia plots save for the somewhat "rare" system. .
too much trash talk to fill up word count 2 fast pass for only a few sentences worth of actual story progression
I'm already catch up the raw so far 465 chap, ask me anything that you want to know. I'm marathon this 400 chap, so still have fresh memories will help you to clarify something u want to know. One thing for sure the progress is real, u can spot so much change from after chapter 60, very fast paced
I love this book. the translation is very good. I hope this book will get picked because I cant find any decent translations online. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like the story simply because it's a faction building genre. I saw somebody that rate it low saying what's the point of reading a novel when the Mc is already dead and there's no clear way of reviving him, and all I could say is that he was just a new who haven't read enough of cn webnovel. !!! SPOILERS BELOW !!! I've read ahead by mtl which surprisingly readable and by chapter 80ish he got a reward where he could revive for 3 hours with his cultivation at his peak again. Not only that, after the lu chaoxi breakthrough to the next major realm, he could now continue to cultivate. The story might be slower than your usual cultivation webnovel but I think it's not slow enough to bore you, at least that's my opinion. All in all, I recommend anyone who wish read a more faction development based novel. *I made the review after reading till chapter 130 in mtl*
wasn't bad till the last 100 chapters, it was unreadable and occasionally got random chapters from other novels show up
the author sucks at describing the fights... it's even at the level where it's frustrating to read... in addition there are too many useless descriptions which already make the fight not so well described more difficult to read, and besides the author stops redefining the description of the technique as well as the weapons each time one of your characters makes a attack, and above all we already know that water represses fire, no need to give such a detailed and boring description in each paragraph... for me it's the worst novel I've seen in terms of combat description! just too frustrating!
I claim first to rate the novel, just the fact that its a faction development type system made me hooked, we need more novels like this, i the eternal celestial immortal approve of this novel!![img=update][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap]