/ TV / American Dad: Kevin Smith
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You know I don't own shit
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I love the way the story is going so far, this is a great story man with huge HUGE comedy and story potential yunno. Has grammar errors but those can easily be fixed so besides the grammar the story is great bro and can be one of the funniest stories out there. P.s- for readers the story is still readable so y’all can still read it
Te pongo 5 estrellas. Era un poco confuso de leer para mi ya que el ingles no es mi idiomas natal. Los dialogos estan masomenos. Espero que no lo dejes ya que es el primer fanfic de american dad que leí. Ahora las cosas. ¿Quien es el protagonista de tu fanfic.? ¿Es una reencarnación?
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Rly like it so far. I hope the updates would be faster if you fulfill this wish then Everything just BRAVO. Keep it up Author <3 :*
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