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摘要
Miku Hara was your typical goal-orientated and driven kind of person. She was the CEO of her own small company and was living her best life when one day tragically while out for a jog she got killed by a falling piece of space debris. Now finds herself in a warm dark space with no idea of what's going on except a strange dark instinct to feed.
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Hello, peeps Author here.
A few things to start with I don't own anything except the generic fantasy world, if you own the cover image and don't want me to use it just send a message to me.
With that, all done this will be one of my first ever stories like ever XD so I don't mind constructive criticism Key word is Constructive! I understand that some stories aren't for everyone so if this isn't yours then so be it. There's going to be 700-1000 words per chapter (hopefully) the story will be sporadic at first as I figure out a release schedule.
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pretty interesting so far. ..........................................................................................................................................
This looks really great and your writing is very good. Don't abandon this, so keep up the good work.
my main thing about this is the perspective I prefer a first person type but the concept was too good to me I'm a big fan of alien stuff because of that your book is nice there could be more detailed description on the senses for the mc as to really drive home the unique biology of a alien I would like to point out I'm not that educated in literature so take it how you want but pls don't stress about the book you do you and keep it up very nice so far[img=update][img=recommend]