/ Fantasy / Age of Primals
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when an archeologist is thrust into a new world full of magic but is parallel to earth Prehistoric era what will he do, will he survive and speed up the development of humanity or will he fail and fall prey to the many dangers of this new world
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Hi, this is the author and I would like to say I hope you all enjoy my book and disclaimer I am a 16 yr old novel writing newbie so I hope you all like it, and feedback is much appreciated
(Sorry for the hiatus but I’ve hit a writers block with this story so I’ll be taking a break for a bit, sorry once again.)
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omg im in love with this book. the pacings good and the storys complicated enough to get me thinking and the interactions between character is so nice and clean to read as well as the grammar being almost perfect. in general this is a great story from the design to the writing. the author is amazing for choosing such an intricant topic as well. the prehistoric times are such a cool story topic as well. i hope the author continues this book and wishes for him to get more recognition. thank you author.
Not really a pre-historic novel, it's fantasy with ice age animals. mc just accepts that he went to another world and despite not being a hunter or farmer just goes hunting and making tools like it's something a 20 year old can do nowadays or it's something school teaches. The presence of a system, as usual, makes the mc into a god by doing minimal things, like kill a half dead wolf and boom have some super powers, kill harmless rabbits boom have some levels, make a simple tool boom have some skills. it has magic so there are fewer reasons to use modern day knowledge to make stuff, like why make a bow if you can just throw lightning or fire around? why make roads or carts and tame pack animals if you have an inventory? i guess it's just not for me, stay strong author!
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so far this novel is fun to read and interesting, it's also nice to see someone doing a prehistoric story, great job, and keep writing author, hope to see more!
I like the "Primal" concept. I haven't read any books like this yet. it's unique... I look forward for the MC to tame more beasts, e.i. woolly mammoth, woolly rhino, megaloceros, megatherium, and other Pleistocene Megafauna/Beasts.
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There’s no problems with the novels that I have seen so far and I really like that somebody is doing their own like original take on a primal tribal building for once because there’s only a couple i have seen/read and they’re not that Good so give this a read you won’t regret it.