/ Anime & Comics / Adventure Time: Shadow Elemental(Ownership has been handed over)
摘要
I knew that day felt weird but I ignored it and I died, but I never imagined I would be thrown into the world of Adventure Time almost 800 years before the events of the show as a shadow, a shadow will some neat tricks.
Now that I'm here guess I should adventure.
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This will be kingdom building and slice of life story for almost all the time before the events of the show, there will be action whenever I can make up a scenario that makes some inkling of sense.
There will be time skips alot as I doubt you guys want me to write 700 years worth of content, and I'm incapable of coming up with enough content for that anyway. I aint creative enough for that
Very fast paced romance too, not good at writing sappy stuff and just want to get it out of the way, oh and one more thing- NO HAREM. I hate harem with an undying passion, don't even ask for it.
[Note: The ownership of this fanfic has been handed over to a friend of mine, who is currently rewriting it. So look out for that]
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this is the second Adventure time fic on this app and for that tage these five stars
more!!!! I'm obsessed with this fanfic especially the relationship of the mc and bubble gum
allthough it's too early to review i will just give you 5 stars, since i haven't seen any adventure time fanfics before and i hope you continue writing it and i will be checking out your other works on TheCartoonist
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Everything but update ability is good, am just waiting for more updates to get into this story more so I can judge if I want to give it a perfect 5/5.
I like the story it's going on a slow path but that's good I hope it doesn't jump too fast in the timeline and has more development We just have to wait for other chapters and see what comes out.
there aren't many adventure time fanfictions, but I'm happy that the few that are out there have this one with them
Well this has been a true breath of fresh air to read. The main character feels like he belongs in the world of Adventure Time, like he was always meant to be part of the story. The grammar is pretty good and the author is paying attention to the background of the series.
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author can you give name of the account of your friend so I find it. is the fanfic name the same?
my lord if you could Grace this peasant with more chapters from your noble and magnificent hands I will be infinitely grateful for your endless kindness oh my great king. Jokes aside please give me more chapters I'm quite unhealthily obsessed with this story[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
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Its been a long time and I've gotten much better at writing, but the first 15 or so chapters(some not posted yet) are kinda... bad(?), like they're ok, but just that, ok. I can write better now, when I say I've gotten better I mean it, to the point where I cant read other peoples stories without automatically being conscious of every mistake, inconsistency, bad piece of dialogue, bland character design and so on. Its a curse.