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A psycho gets reincarnated but there's more to his existence than one would think on a typical glance.
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A technically troll fic that I got shoved onto me over halfway through. Practically a dumpster fire the first 6 chapters and somewhat readable the first 30 chapters.
Those chapters also have highly unrealistic romance
You have been warned.
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As you probably read from the other reviews, the writing quality does get better. Just power through it and you'll get to the really good parts. There are a few things that came to my attention though. The first would be the terrible synopsis you have written. I mean seriously, you get no information out of this. And Please Put More Words In Each Line Anyway, the story is pretty interesting. A dude who gets reincarnated into Tensura and gets OP real fast is always a good combination in my books. He also goes into other universes too. (Danmachi, highschool of the dead and Campione or whatever it's called) The MC is a crazy and cold blooded killer, so be aware of that. Being calm and nonchalant when committing genocide kind of crazy, to be specific. I like it but some don't. To each their own I guess. Just give it a try if you're interested and don't get discouraged by the worse grammar in the first few chapters, trust me it truly gets better.
The Great Author Reviewing Himself. I'm going to be honest this was basically a dumpster fire for the first 20 chapters I read it myself and it sucked but I can confidently say that after 25 or 30 chapters it was pretty good and as of now the quality of everything is unimaginable folds better, Do with that as you will
I hate that authors realise that there first few chapters are bad and expect us new viewers to suffer instead of actually fixing it to make it easier to get into because realistically if the the first few chapters have awful grammar and is a pain to read people will just not bother with the series, if the future chapters do improve with grammar i would recommend to take a break to rewrite the earlier chapters and make it better, it would help your story a lot to have a good start to it. Sorry if i come off as being harsh or simply being wrong because to be honest i haven’t read the first chapter yet, this is just my thoughts from reading the synopsis, i hope you read this and it helps.
a change a little better than when he was before a robot type protagonist who only followed the same steps to get stronger xD. -It would be better if there was a Pov of the sister, to know what she is doing and the protagonist socializing with more people (of course she has to be strong and a girl xD, since with her personality she would not pay attention to anyone ). - It would also be good for you to learn more defense and detection techniques, to strengthen your body so that when by chance it runs out of its powers (it would not be vulnerable, it would be like a saitama that solves everything with fists, or as a "one piece" that has weapons haki or dxd who can use toki to strengthen his body (like a certain demon that uses regulus xD)).
wha happen? you ok author? did the acc get hacked or something???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It was an amazing story, but if you're reading this on a new account author, why was your account deleted? Just out of interest...................................................
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This story is good, but you know..... the torture scene here is not realistic, for example, the author doesn't describe the pain of the victim, also for the POV of everyone in the harem when Asahi isn't around.
It's one of the best fanfic in this site. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . No need to say anymore it's enough[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]
I Think this is the only "Good" Fanfiction that were here in Webnovel as the there is still plot wven though i personally think that this novel has few plot holes like How the primmordial demon act and thats it and i recommend you to also read this.
I like how the concept of authorities from the rezero anime were added into the slime anime. Yes, they do make him pretty OP but it’s not like there aren’t any strong powerhouses in the world. The main character looks like Edmond Dantes which in my opinion deserves 5 stars alone since I haven’t seen anyone use his appearance yet until this FF popped up. If I were to have any complains then it would have to be the lack of interactions. Like he would say a few short sentences which would he brief and then tell them not to disturb him while he finds a tree branch and pretends to sleep. If anything, I find that weird. I’m not sure how long he’ll be in this world but if he’s staying for quite some time then perhaps he could build connections and make friends. For that he would need to interact more instead of isolating himself after he’s done with whatever.
Honestly speaking as the author has said them selves the first 20ish chapters are completely nonsensical HOWEVER! if you get past those few chapters it only becomes more nonsensical so much so that it actually makes sense. This is fanfic for real men.
Realy cool book I dont have anthing to criticize Its super here have a Teddy bear: ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ
Great book, it delves into insanity and romance mainly but I do think that it needs longer and more chapters. over all great book though xxxx
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Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5 Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Don't know if this will be good as I'm only in the early chapters, but since there is a lot of good reviews of this fanfic, I guess I'll just read and enjoy it.
I'm sorry, normally I give a reasoning for my review and rating but I'm mentally exhausted so all I'm going to say is that this is a very good work and I highly recommend it.
for those hesitating to read because of people saying the writing is bad or read themselves the start but then stopped you should know that after chapter 25 it gets WAY better so read until then at least before deciding to drop please because it's the author's first work and he put a lot of effort into it, and it's sad to see bad reviews and the loss of readers just because they judged a book by it's cover. *for the author only* go to dxd pls