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A Young Sorcerer in Douluo Dalu I don't own I am the sorcerer King neither Douluo Dalu nor the COVER
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I'll let you know here I'm totally new to writing so I probably won't be listening to many comments because I won't be able to meet the demands on writing so it may be that after a while I'll get better at writing but for now it's going to be pretty bad.
THIS IS A FULFILLMENT OF A WISH.
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I'm a total newbie so thank you all for continuing to follow me Thank you. I'm Brazilian and I use the Translator to switch to English so sometimes it can get weird but be patient.
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The novel is beautiful, but you have mistakes in writing dialogues, so please don't drop it..... ............................. ِ...............................
Nice novel with good background magic side has inheritance so no need for teacher for the douluo dalu spirit master side he can create an inheritance stone in his dimension so no need to get a teacher hence no need to over interact with Tang San or grandmaster I hope it continues looking forward to it
*add ( " " ) if there talking,( ' ' ) for thinking on thoughts, ( [ ] ) if two person talking through thoughts *it's weird to read the fanfic with little space on the chapter