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摘要
Took concept from Ben 10,000
You know I wasn't expecting to have my DNA all scrambled in one day and then getting captured by the space police. Than it all ending with talking to a small grey man.
My life is about to get freaky and about to see a whole new version of Earth and the universe.
Hope you enjoy
I don't own anything except my oc all rights to the owner.
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