/ Book&Literature / A Helping Hand - a RtW fanfiction
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Steven Wang, a college student in America, dies and is transported to the world of Release that Witch. Now in the world of his favorite webnovel, Steven goes out to change the future of the world.
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Great much better as a short version of the original. Thanks for the fanfic author I hope you do more different novels. 👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏👍🙌🙏
This is fucking amazing. For some reason the moment Zero and Steven started working together I started to ship them so fucking hard. It is more fun to read than the original for some odd reason, and although theres not much details (expect for Steven going full retard with knowledge) it is still fun. In fact, the original has areas in chapters which are overfilled by knowledge and facts which actually make the chapters really tiring to read. Although that is what primarily makes the novel, too much is bad, while too little makes it seem bland. This spinoff novel is more fun to read, has the right amount of facts and knowledge and still mixes in something that entice me to read more without any cliff hangers or 'find out more next time' scenarios. I love Zero. Like I want some rule34 kind of love. Ignore I said that. This is too damn good. You gotta continue writing this even after the contest is over. Please. This is superior to the original lmao.
Its one of those stories where the MC wanders around like an idiot attracting attention until someone takes enough interest in his strange language and clothing to arrest and interregate him. Then he just spits out everything without holding anything back. You like your MC to keep their secrets? Their cards close to their chest so no one can take advantage of them? An MC that isn't naive? This isn't for us I guess. I'm just glad it was established early that the MC was like this and didn't waste much time.
Thanks for your hard work, i can fell how much time and effort you spend in this. This is the first time i like a story without the MC having some kind of power or knowledge. (And this is one of the hardest things to do in this field) Also almost all fanfics have the MC replace the original MC, so with you having them meeting and making a good story overall, i would give you a thumbsup. I wish i have more stones... anyway, i'll give it 5 Stars, definitely worth reading ;)
The romance is heartwarming and realistic. It is developed well and not rushed. The author does a good job in making the emotions real. The story is well paced and interesting.
This is by the best RTW fanfic I have read although its sad af ending its by far the most stunning and best experience I have read. To be honest I kinda wish they made Roland, along with his wives and steven immortal it was heartbreaking to read about them dying especially with all the things they have done and all the love they gave people the only thing I wish is that someone theirs a second fanfic where they discover they can travel worlds and zero somehow uses technology and her magic soul magic to reincarnate them all so they can conquer the multiverse just so I dont have to feel so sad about the stories ending but besides that I have mad respect for the author hes a good writer and a great storyteller. You my friend have earned a reader for life :P
That was a pretty good story. Sometimes, it feels that maybe it goes a little too fast with some things, but it nicely avoid the opposite effect of becoming too sluggish and never ending. A good story, preferable to save that witch if you like fast-paced stories.
Aaah, I miss my daily review yesterday. Oh well, eventually I might be only gonna do weekly review or at least monthly review. 😆 Well, anyway, for this story its the second non translation work that I have finish reading from start till end. For the rtw fan or reader, this story would give an alternate probability. Its rtw fan-fiction, of course its suppose to be like that. But I also have read some rtw "fan-fiction" but almost no correlation with rtw at all. 😅 In short, this story is great, especially if you already read rtw until the corresponding chapter number amount.
finally a fanfic of RTW that's worth reading finally a fanfic of RTW that's worth reading finally a fanfic of RTW that's worth reading finally a fanfic of RTW that's worth reading finally a fanfic of RTW that's worth reading
Now all we have to do to make this novel even better is to make another different novel of another person transmigrating to this novel and mindfucking everthing to hell.
i can say, this fanfic is better than the original, yes you need to read the original first, but this gaved a whole new better ending. truly made me cry and i hope that all of you get to binge this in a 2-3 day reading with utmost pleasure. WARNING: Tears will start forming on chapter 96, slowly increasing till it burst on 99 and remnants will flow at 100
As far as i've read, it indeed lives up to the name of the book 'a helping hand' meaning the mc is given little importance and mostly focuses on what would have happened it ronald had the knowlegde of the future and the mc is simply a side character who helped with that knowledge. The story so far is interesting and casual so all in all a good read
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Excellently written novel. Highlights of this novel are Pacing of the Plot and The Climax of the Plot. Mc's characterization is good. Plot premise and plot progression are very good. Character interactions are above average. Climax of this story is the part, i really liked. The reason for liking it is that most of novels I recently read had convoluted and complicated Endings. Thanks for completing this novel.
The novel has an interesting title hope to read it soon and I wish its niçe just as the name implies,webnovel rocks kudos to all the author's you are A-mazing
I feel like the MC, as in Steven is a McGuffin. He's a plot device that makes the original plot go faster thru heavy application of future knowledge. As of 30 chapters, the story doesn't really focus on him. Probably around 5%. Still fun times.
Thank you Thank you for taking a fanfic for release that witch Thank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank youThank you
Well, I just discovered that I can review my own story, so I guess I will do that now. I feel quite proud of this work, I put a lot of work into it and I think that the end result was pretty good.It might not be perfect but it exceeded my own expectations that I had for it in the beginning. I encourage all of you to read it. I am thinking about writing another RtW fic, but I am still hesitant about it. This fic was very tiring for me to write, and I was stressful at times. I am not sure whether I want to go through it again, but I know that by the end I will see that it is worth it. If any of you would like to see more from me, let me know.