/ Book&Literature / A Fourth Lion
摘要
Reincarnated into the twin brother of Tyrion, watch as Cerion Lannister deals with plots, schemes and war. Will he live or die in this game of thrones?
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It’s my first time writing so dialogue may seem a bit awkward. Also I’m just writing for fun because I’m bored of reading. Updates may be inconsistent.
I would also like to add that Cerion will not be a dwarf.
I would also like to point out that a character can only be as smart as the author.
[The cover art isn’t mine]
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You may not be the best but you have to do your best to be proficient with a sword, shield, and bow. The chances of dying increase too much if it doesn't. The most important thing to get are people who are loyal to him and who also know how to fight. And perhaps train women to be Bodyguards, Secretaries, and Personal Maids from childhood. Poisoning is common. Also no one would expect a woman to stab him.
Very nice fanfic, congrats. It's pretty cool frankly when you like to stay politically correct, a logical and believable story, a friendly Mc (at least for now, who knows), etc. This is a pretty nice way of writing, I must say. It's easy and pleasant to read, but also well described. I'm also doing a Lannister fanfic, being a beginner as well. From what I've been able to see, I think that we're headed in different directions for the rest of our respective fanfics. But I'm trying to get better at my writing, which is only starting to get a little better now I think. In any case, reading your fanfic, I don't have the impression at all of seeing an amateur's work. I'm pretty impressed, and I'll be sure to read this fanfic to the end. It's also rare to see a Game of Thrones fanfic that isn't dropped at some point (yet), so I sincerely hope that you don't quit. I'll try to finish mine too. Good continuation and good luck for the future, author :)
Started well, but with the following chapters it started to get Bad, forced situation, character is useless and kinda stupid😓😪.................................................................,
Little too early for a review but I like this fan fic. Usually most ASOIAF/GOT fanfic's threw the 4 year old SI MC into combat and have him kill like 40 fully grown men in this it's much more realistic with he mc focusing on internal affairs as he is too weak for war currently, I am also very hyped to see what tywin will do when he feel's he has an a least semi-suitable heir.
I don’t know if mc is a midget or not, even what he looks like hasn’t been explained apart from that this novel is really good
It's good, so far he's a true Lannister, he's not a moralist who tries to save the Targayens for no reason, very good, I hope he continues and his wife isn't a Targayen It's also realistic, with no 2-year-olds fighting karate and managing territory, or that story of kids dreaming of things and adults believing in nonsense.
So far, so good. I'm waiting to see how this story unfolds and it looks promising, the update times can improve, but other than that everything is great. I like that there is a story about the lannisters
overall cringe ....................................................................................................................................................
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I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It getting good though there is one semi forced scene it seems that the author heard the criticism there so I have a lot of hope for the story
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I just discovered this story and i read the 10 chapter in one go. I will be quick, that has the potential to be a pretty good fanfic of GOT. I hope that the story will continue
I like it 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's boring, the cool part of a GOT fanfic is being able to see the MC grow in power in general. But here the MC doesn't grow up, everything he does, whoever is winning is his father, it annoys me, does he not have an inkling of who the father is? And this MC who seems to be a saint? Please, you're not in the right world for this. "Dad I have an idea!" "Ok do it" Idea work "Congratulations son for giving me more power and wealth you are a great pawn" . Exactly for this reason that choosing to be from the house of Lannister doesn't work out, because the MC is totally arrested until he takes office, which until home is a long time and the Lannisters would have already entered the war. I've lost interest in this work, I find it boring, irritating, disappointing and incredibly clueless. Goodbye.