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Game of thrones: A storm is coming

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作者: Virtuosso

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A guy from the modern world is transported into the world of Game of Thrones before the Dance of the Dragons era as an 8-year-old boy named Daeron Stone. But sadly, he doesn't know much about this period, as his knowledge is based on the GoT original TV series and mostly from random online arguments. On top of that , he's a bastard without any known parents.

This story will have a humorous undertone and smart MC without much drama.
Mc does not have cheats except a Valyrian steel sword he gets (basically a survival starter pack), but he will be smart . He will try to make the best decisions that give him the most benefits, with a few exceptions because things always don't go our way.

I'm going to try to capture the vibe if a random dude like one of us gets isekai'd without cheats; what would he do?

What would he do in this world of dragons, knights, and magic ? How will he reach the top without any foreknowledge or cheats ? Find out next time on Dragon Ball Z... Ooppss, wrong fic!

Give it a read; you won't be disappointed.

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Vikram_Bij

i really like the story and the concept but when i hear the conversations of rhaenys and corlys, it's like they keep saying same shit again and again, their observations and conversation with mc and etc. are too repatative and it becomes quite annoying to read. i mean it's 8-10 year old mc, so too much philosophy for him, so please keep the interactions logical. i really liked the first chapter in that regard.

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CaptainMorga

I really love this story and I hope you don’t drop it. I highly recommend it for anyone reading this review.

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Mr_Minotaur

Lotta ai involved. Decent story so far but the heavy ai usage makes me just skip all the nonsense and only read dialogue since that’s the original stuff. Everything gets repetitive and gives me a headache since chatgpt is pretty bad at writing something compelling. Plot seems kinda amateurish, but it’s good enough for a popcorn fic. Mc seems pretty juvenile, but he just got a dose of reality so hopefully he gets better, ptherwise he’s kinda naive and annoying.

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Choejhulkp

Loving this story so far. Glad to see a good HOTD story with some good writing and a different idea giving us Aemon Targaryen's Bastard instead of Daemon or Viserys or Baelon's. Can't wait to read more.

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travion_bell

I need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Daniel_Obeso

It’s one of the better stories I’ve read in recent times and has a unique plot and writing that make it really stand apart from stories I’ve read. It’s fun, intriguing, and really has kept my attention throughout the 10 chapters that are out so far, I am very excited for what’s to come. Cheers man 🍻.

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infinitysword

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Isaias_Santos

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Marko_Albajarmamas

It is a good read, I have nothing to criticize about this book, author excellent work. 🗿👌👌 10/10 I hope you follow it champion machine, if I'm writing filler because this requires 140 characters it seems funny to me.🗿🗿👌👌

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Daoista09FpJ

Все идеально от мира до главного героя,сюжет отлично раскрыт.А то что нет комментариев,по мне это потому что люди очень сильно увлеклись сюжетом)

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Kaheem_Edmonds_3166

please keep up the good work it's very interesting love the fact that he is daemon cousin and creagans nephew

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Isaias_Santos

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Isaias_Santos

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Virtuosso

My honest opinion for the story, It could use more polishing and details to properly set up the final ending. I could have just continued writing as I pleased without holding any poll or shit xD. I have other stories ongoing which also plays a factor in it. Now for plot and mc, If you want something different from the regular trope and plot exploration of unknown places, this will be perfect for you. There will be many new characters merged into the story to make it flow smoothly. Romance will not be a priority, but it will be explored and set up well. There will be some things that might annoy you, but read a bit ahead before crucifying me ! All in all, enjoy!

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Isaias_Santos

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SugarHoneyIceTea

Day 1 Trying to find FL Emporio Ivankov in All FF

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Blah1_blah2_blah3

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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TheAuthorKami

I don’t know how to start this review. First, I want to say: who transmigrates into the world of Game of Thrones and the first thing they think is, “Oh, I’m going to go after the sexy dragon queen Daenerys!” or “I must have an attractive face; otherwise, I won’t be able to charm women.” Author, if you like harem so much, just put it in the tags. The second issue is also related to the protagonist and realism: who, honestly, transmigrates into a medieval fantasy world, far from everything they know, and reacts with such calmness and indifference? (And the first thing they think about is how to get a wife with three dragons…) At least give him some panic, even if only momentary. The protagonist also thinks way too ambitiously upon transmigrating, instead of considering, “I’m in a new world, how am I going to survive?” he thinks, “I’m in a new world, how can I advance my new home (lands)?” At that moment, the guy is a weak eight-year-old orphan, one who could die at any moment, one who doesn’t even have a source of food or money, and one who doesn’t even fully understand the situation around him. Honestly, aside from the fact that his brain circuits seem faulty, I can’t think of any other way to justify how he starts thinking in such an… overconfident way when he doesn’t even have a home (lands). I also don’t understand how, just by seeing his reflection, he was so sure that he is a Targaryen bastard… he even started planning how to sneak in and get a dragon. You know, author, the Targaryens aren’t the only people with white hair. There is also no sufficiently convincing reason for why he wants to reach the top, even considering risking his life for it. I have so many things to complain about that they don’t fit in a single review. This story has potential, but the protagonist, the narrative, and the lack of logic are not just ruining it—they are destroying its potential.

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