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LV 13 ![Badge]()
the story is confusing. the characters are weird and different without explanation. personalities are also weird. the tone and feeling of the story while not bad is also wrong in my opinion. very slow paced story.
LV 11 ![Badge]()
From the first chapter we understand that the story will not go well when Hayley Marshall calls Klaus master twice and behaves like a slave. j'ai lu deux chapitre et c'est deja horrible, tout le monde comprends en un regard qu'il n'est plus lui même c'est ridicule.
LV 13 ![Badge]()
the story is confusing. the characters are weird and different without explanation. personalities are also weird. the tone and feeling of the story while not bad is also wrong in my opinion. very slow paced story.
From the first chapter we understand that the story will not go well when Hayley Marshall calls Klaus master twice and behaves like a slave. j'ai lu deux chapitre et c'est deja horrible, tout le monde comprends en un regard qu'il n'est plus lui même c'est ridicule.