One piece: Establishing a Pirate Family

LV 14

Dani

Charlotte is a 100% woman name.... Better luck next time in choosing a translate name. Feel kind of confusing.

LV 4

Nuh_Uhh

Please change his name bro, Charolette is definetly a girls name. Unless that’s his last name like Charolette Katakuri or Charolette Linlin. Other then that it’s good

LV 4

Jploui93

Can't anymore, not only is MC turning into an arrogant asshole every time gets the smallest of power, but his going around kidnapping or just raping girls to have his kids and it's turns into this whole stockholm syndrome thing with the girls. WTF

LV 3

kugi45443

This can be called a family fanfic, after I saw the Chinese version, MC has a total of 29 children, 2 children have the aura of a king, emperor and esdhet, but MC is more directed towards the development of the story,so it looks good, unlike the MC Harem pokemon where the story is more about sex with the Harem, and I think this image is more suitable for the MC with yellow hair and a big sword😂

LV 15

Robel_Isaac

you have zero excuses to justify keeping the name Charlotte. i can't read it like this. literally any name would be better. seriously.

LV 14

Passerby_Venne

The first 40-50 chapters are good, at that point the mc is one of the strongest and it felt like it was time for the story to progress, but the author drags on and on endlessly with boring things instead of developing the plot. I'm at 72 chapters, the time si still at the Rocks era and he is still part of their crew, and for the last 10-20 chapters he has been on a trip to get a sword from one of the weakest seas, it's boring, uninteresting and just wasting chapters. I'll skip ahead, maybe the story gets interesting later on. I'm waiting for what was promised in the synopsis, that he will establish a crew of his own family and children.

LV 4

MAJUNEPea

I am loving this fic It has almost all the things I want from a one piece fan fic

LV 4

hairyniggaballs343

good story with proper strength development liked it.

LV 4

BoredCrow

you shoild probably twll how shitty of a person he is in the summary or tags because he is a hypocritical murder hobo who has "morality". Congratulations dude you dont kill civilians, you just steal from them faint them and probably leave them to die. Not to mentiob what he did to that poor shrine maiden.

LV 14

Ancient_

That definitely is a woman's name and not the correct translation

LV 15

Louis_reader_00001

the First 40-50 chapters are good but Afterwards IT fest To short and there IS Not so much Story development and the chapters are shorter it's okay give IT a read

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=disgusted][img=More pls][img=Shocked][img=Moneybags][img=coins][img=coins][img=Smitten][img=Smug][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=Out of it][img=Smug][img=coins]

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=Feeling it][img=Moneybags][img=Mad][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=In a daze][img=Sigh][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Good night][img=More pls][img=Smug][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags]

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=Out of it][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Smug][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Why][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Sigh][img=Smug][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=Out of it][img=Smug][img=More pls][img=Sigh]

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=Good night][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Good night][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Smitten][img=Sigh][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Smug][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags]

LV 4

Ali_Karamnejad

I feel that the story is moving fast. It would be best if it went a little slower and more work was done on relationships and emotions. But overall it's fun

LV 2

Mathaw

A fantastic One Piece fict. The mc's character is compelling, and their growth is written in a engaging and natural way, as natural as One Piece's posible. The story captures the lively, adventurous spirit characteristic of OP, making it feel authentic to the original while still adding its own unique perspective, i think that the premise of building a pirate family has already been used but is not burned tho, this story is not bad at all. The pacing is smooth, and the narrative keeps you hooked with every chapter. So far, I’m completely invested, and I can’t wait to see how the story develops further. Highly recommended.

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

LV 4

Lizrock

[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

LV 1

DaoistpcwvIa

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]