67評論
4.73
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
The story is flowing nicely, and the dynamic between Sukuna and the main character is getting better with each chapter. Their evolving relationship adds depth and keeps things engaging. Excited to see where this goes. 😊😊😊😊😊
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Meh, la historia está sobrevalorada, no es la gran cosa , aunque entiendo porque a algunos le gusta la historia, esto no es para mi.........................................
Охуенно надеюсь скоро будет продолжение [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
very good story , one of the best FanFiction I ever read it has a lot of potential for future growth and the mc was very cool and smart. I am eagerly waiting for new updates
your fic is in level with meta essence gacha in Marvel fic. I don't need to say more.
Absolutely amazing piece of fanficiton, I love the main character especially. Also the mix in with Sukuna as a being trapped inside the main character like a Jinchuriki with the main character siphoning his Jjk powers also adds into the amazing factors on how good this fanfic is. Cant wait for him too soon release the Divine General
Guys, I'll be honest with you—it's better to avoid reading the raw novel. It’s a mess, and I’d strongly recommend sticking to the translated version rather than dealing with the heavily influenced and chaotic Chinese raws. Thanks to the author for their hard work—keep it up! Hopefully, someday, someone develops an AI that can properly translate raw novels and turn them into something truly readable.
Finally an interesting story with a good translation. Main character is reborn into konoha and is the same age as Kakashi and Obito. Cold and ruthless to everyone but the uchiha clan. Looks like we won't be having any annoying harems, here's hoping we don't go down the dragon route. So far no signs of it
I thought it would be embarrassing due to his addition as Sukuna's Jinchuuriki, but this part is well done, it really turned out good, the only thing that bothered me deeply was Sakumo's part, he wouldn't be as naive as he was portrayed here (my opinion)
A really good fanfic for 1 the mc is powerful for his age but not overly overpowered 2 the mc is confident, arrogant, and ruthless with leadership qualities 3 the mc’s abilities are actually unique and reasonable not because it was given by a certain ROB while his cheat is from an unknown source at least it was not given im not sure if its just me it just irks me that the mc is just given op or strange abilities because GOD suddenly felt pity on him and last but not the least 0 romance i hate romance especially harem i detest those stuff
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
solid logical analysis of situations n well it's good n very engaging so yeah.
[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
If this doesn't get dropped and has regular updates. It's good enough that I'll definitely read it to the end
Muito boa história, estou muito envolvido com ela e espero q continue com ela..ultimamente estão em falta boas fanfics de naruto , essa até agora está sendo uma das melhores que eu li nas últimas semanas
Pretty nice. Grammer is good. I could read the story with little problems. The main character is interesting, and his little speeches further develop the kind of person he is. He's an actual character. He doesn't follow the original main characters but has his own goal. His actions have real effects in contrast with fanfics making no changes in the stories. In addition, the combination of the Naruto Universe and Sukuna is well done. I thought it would be terrible, as I don't favor cross-universe fanfics often, but this idea of the authors was done well. The main character is also different from the norm. He isn't full of just nor is he pure evil. He's a man who cherishes his clan and remains true to his principles. This is peak fanfiction. A character who affects the story and characters without having to be a mindless follower.
One of the best Naruto fics I’ve ever read bro keep up the good work $20 Patreon is sick work tho
It's pretty good. It's has some deeper qualities to it than most Chinese novels which can't even be called skin deep. I read most of the mtl so I can tell you that this is probably one of the top 10 mtl Naruto fanfiction I've read. Probably at the bottom of the 10 but still there. Worth a read. The cover art brought it from a 4 to a 5
Read my Reviews! I rarely give above 4 Stars, but this FanFiction is truly a gem amongst all the trash we get to read!
火影：宿傩人柱力，在下宇智波 No need to thank me........ . .. ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .
i only know naruto, but what i understood is the entity sealed inside him has yin chakra and some soul power attack knowledge. its good. mc is OP for his age. i like it, give it a try
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This shit is fire[img=update][img=recommend]🔥🔥🔥[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best!! This history is one of the best I have ever read. Please continue with the novel.
The story is flowing nicely, and the dynamic between Sukuna and the main character is getting better with each chapter. Their evolving relationship adds depth and keeps things engaging. Excited to see where this goes. 😊😊😊😊😊
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Meh, la historia está sobrevalorada, no es la gran cosa , aunque entiendo porque a algunos le gusta la historia, esto no es para mi.........................................
Охуенно надеюсь скоро будет продолжение [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
very good story , one of the best FanFiction I ever read it has a lot of potential for future growth and the mc was very cool and smart. I am eagerly waiting for new updates
your fic is in level with meta essence gacha in Marvel fic. I don't need to say more.
Absolutely amazing piece of fanficiton, I love the main character especially. Also the mix in with Sukuna as a being trapped inside the main character like a Jinchuriki with the main character siphoning his Jjk powers also adds into the amazing factors on how good this fanfic is. Cant wait for him too soon release the Divine General
Guys, I'll be honest with you—it's better to avoid reading the raw novel. It’s a mess, and I’d strongly recommend sticking to the translated version rather than dealing with the heavily influenced and chaotic Chinese raws. Thanks to the author for their hard work—keep it up! Hopefully, someday, someone develops an AI that can properly translate raw novels and turn them into something truly readable.
Finally an interesting story with a good translation. Main character is reborn into konoha and is the same age as Kakashi and Obito. Cold and ruthless to everyone but the uchiha clan. Looks like we won't be having any annoying harems, here's hoping we don't go down the dragon route. So far no signs of it
I thought it would be embarrassing due to his addition as Sukuna's Jinchuuriki, but this part is well done, it really turned out good, the only thing that bothered me deeply was Sakumo's part, he wouldn't be as naive as he was portrayed here (my opinion)
A really good fanfic for 1 the mc is powerful for his age but not overly overpowered 2 the mc is confident, arrogant, and ruthless with leadership qualities 3 the mc’s abilities are actually unique and reasonable not because it was given by a certain ROB while his cheat is from an unknown source at least it was not given im not sure if its just me it just irks me that the mc is just given op or strange abilities because GOD suddenly felt pity on him and last but not the least 0 romance i hate romance especially harem i detest those stuff
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
solid logical analysis of situations n well it's good n very engaging so yeah.
[img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
If this doesn't get dropped and has regular updates. It's good enough that I'll definitely read it to the end
Muito boa história, estou muito envolvido com ela e espero q continue com ela..ultimamente estão em falta boas fanfics de naruto , essa até agora está sendo uma das melhores que eu li nas últimas semanas
Pretty nice. Grammer is good. I could read the story with little problems. The main character is interesting, and his little speeches further develop the kind of person he is. He's an actual character. He doesn't follow the original main characters but has his own goal. His actions have real effects in contrast with fanfics making no changes in the stories. In addition, the combination of the Naruto Universe and Sukuna is well done. I thought it would be terrible, as I don't favor cross-universe fanfics often, but this idea of the authors was done well. The main character is also different from the norm. He isn't full of just nor is he pure evil. He's a man who cherishes his clan and remains true to his principles. This is peak fanfiction. A character who affects the story and characters without having to be a mindless follower.
One of the best Naruto fics I’ve ever read bro keep up the good work $20 Patreon is sick work tho
It's pretty good. It's has some deeper qualities to it than most Chinese novels which can't even be called skin deep. I read most of the mtl so I can tell you that this is probably one of the top 10 mtl Naruto fanfiction I've read. Probably at the bottom of the 10 but still there. Worth a read. The cover art brought it from a 4 to a 5
Read my Reviews! I rarely give above 4 Stars, but this FanFiction is truly a gem amongst all the trash we get to read!
火影：宿傩人柱力，在下宇智波 No need to thank me........ . .. ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .
i only know naruto, but what i understood is the entity sealed inside him has yin chakra and some soul power attack knowledge. its good. mc is OP for his age. i like it, give it a try
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
This shit is fire[img=update][img=recommend]🔥🔥🔥[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The best!! This history is one of the best I have ever read. Please continue with the novel.