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Excellent. one of the better Naruto fanfics out there. literally nothing to complain about, the power system is well integrated and I like that the mc is a little bit of a hypocrite but still wants his clan to succeed. the power creep is pretty crazy as well but I like, the only thing is that I am not really sure of the mcs age so I struggle to picture him while reading but overall good work author-san.
Plsssssssssssssssssss suggest me more like this I want more evil mc, got bored of genric world and beauty saving,i want blood pumping storyline
5 staaaaaaar........................ if only there wea more entertaining ones like this
The Story itself is really good but the translation gets worse over time. Past Chapter 30 it feels like it is just MTL (Machine Translated) wich mekes it really frustrating even tho the storry itself is still good.
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This story is significantly held back by the fact the mc is just annoying and unlikable. He gets reborn in Naruto and immediately becomes the most stereotypical generic uchiha clansman ever, arrogant, and caring for no one except the people of his clan. The story itself is pretty well written and I think the way he’s making sukuna basically a tailed beast is interesting but the mcs personality really drags the story down for me.
Very well done created by someone who really knows the world of Naruto and studied to create this fanfic. Excellent story I just don't give 5 Stars because I can't stand this protagonist
One of the best Naruto fanfics on this website. The main character as you expect is a true villian. And there is no romance and Harem. So in short a good story with no poison
Hey this ff is so peak I read to chapter 70 in one fucking day!!! From start to now it only makes the story better the more you read!!!!
To start off, the writing quality is great. I don't think I noticed any grammar or spelling errors. I love how this is canon divergent and the MC has his own goals and plans. I haven't seen JJK, so I have to agree with the synopsis/bio that even if you haven't read JJK, it wouldn't cause any problems.
If you've readed a lot of fanfiction or novel then you should know after completely reading a story there are some story that satisfy you from depth of soul, those you'll always remember, no matter how many fanfiction you read. It's one of them at least it was for me after I read it whole.
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very good. there is much potential in this story. it is a bit too fast paced, though. but still a masterpiece
Great story so far 🗿 I just hope that it keeps this quality until the end 🙌🔥 then it’ll truly goated 🐐 , 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A really great translation. Usually when i come across fics, like this I search the raw to read ahead but this is one of the best Chinese fics not to mention translation I've seen in a while.
The best!! This history is one of the best I have ever read. Please continue with the novel.
The story is flowing nicely, and the dynamic between Sukuna and the main character is getting better with each chapter. Their evolving relationship adds depth and keeps things engaging. Excited to see where this goes. 😊😊😊😊😊
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Meh, la historia está sobrevalorada, no es la gran cosa , aunque entiendo porque a algunos le gusta la historia, esto no es para mi.........................................
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Rare find after those cringe and calculating mcs. Kudos to both author amd and translator for hard work. Keep up this good work👍
Excellent. one of the better Naruto fanfics out there. literally nothing to complain about, the power system is well integrated and I like that the mc is a little bit of a hypocrite but still wants his clan to succeed. the power creep is pretty crazy as well but I like, the only thing is that I am not really sure of the mcs age so I struggle to picture him while reading but overall good work author-san.
Plsssssssssssssssssss suggest me more like this I want more evil mc, got bored of genric world and beauty saving,i want blood pumping storyline
5 staaaaaaar........................ if only there wea more entertaining ones like this
The Story itself is really good but the translation gets worse over time. Past Chapter 30 it feels like it is just MTL (Machine Translated) wich mekes it really frustrating even tho the storry itself is still good.
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This story is significantly held back by the fact the mc is just annoying and unlikable. He gets reborn in Naruto and immediately becomes the most stereotypical generic uchiha clansman ever, arrogant, and caring for no one except the people of his clan. The story itself is pretty well written and I think the way he’s making sukuna basically a tailed beast is interesting but the mcs personality really drags the story down for me.
Very well done created by someone who really knows the world of Naruto and studied to create this fanfic. Excellent story I just don't give 5 Stars because I can't stand this protagonist
One of the best Naruto fanfics on this website. The main character as you expect is a true villian. And there is no romance and Harem. So in short a good story with no poison
Hey this ff is so peak I read to chapter 70 in one fucking day!!! From start to now it only makes the story better the more you read!!!!
To start off, the writing quality is great. I don't think I noticed any grammar or spelling errors. I love how this is canon divergent and the MC has his own goals and plans. I haven't seen JJK, so I have to agree with the synopsis/bio that even if you haven't read JJK, it wouldn't cause any problems.
If you've readed a lot of fanfiction or novel then you should know after completely reading a story there are some story that satisfy you from depth of soul, those you'll always remember, no matter how many fanfiction you read. It's one of them at least it was for me after I read it whole.
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I really like this fic![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ótima novel com um potencial gigante . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ................ .................. .................................. .................... ...................... .............. .......... ........ ....... .......... ......... .......... ............ ........ ...........
very good. there is much potential in this story. it is a bit too fast paced, though. but still a masterpiece
Great story so far 🗿 I just hope that it keeps this quality until the end 🙌🔥 then it’ll truly goated 🐐 , 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A really great translation. Usually when i come across fics, like this I search the raw to read ahead but this is one of the best Chinese fics not to mention translation I've seen in a while.
The best!! This history is one of the best I have ever read. Please continue with the novel.
The story is flowing nicely, and the dynamic between Sukuna and the main character is getting better with each chapter. Their evolving relationship adds depth and keeps things engaging. Excited to see where this goes. 😊😊😊😊😊
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Meh, la historia está sobrevalorada, no es la gran cosa , aunque entiendo porque a algunos le gusta la historia, esto no es para mi.........................................
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Rare find after those cringe and calculating mcs. Kudos to both author amd and translator for hard work. Keep up this good work👍