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Peak, I've been reading novels for over 10 years and this is one of the best I've ever read. The story can make you cry your heart out but also makes you cheer on for the characters. 10/10
Hands down the best fanfic out there it made me excited sad cry happy its so good just read it and each chapter is as big as 5 normal chapters from other novels so you have alot to go through and it's always peak best fanfic out there nothing really comes close
This is one of the best pieces of black clover I've ever read, it was honestly very entertaining to the point I stayed up all night reading it. But, it got really boring mid point, as there's no actual change to the plot and now focused in fixing the relationship between Acier and the MC Sebastian. It literally takes half of the chapters in total and it's all about the two of them. It has became unbearable to the point I couldn't read it anymore. While I'm at it, why don't you change the title to My Wife and I, this is our love story blah blah.
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I love the work so far with the current arc leaving a lot of emotion bursting out in a way I didn't think I could feel for a novel but regardless I have truly fallen in love with this story. I look forward to more chapters in the future
Another Peak,.... Goated fanfic ever ..... was an eye openner how can an OC be written in such a Brilliant way 👏 👌 🙌 ......................................
This story is peak fiction. I don't know what else to say. The way romance is handled in this novel is the peak of what romantic storytelling looks like in stories. The way character attitudes and feelings are described and laid out, it almost feels like I'm right there with the characters, watching and experiencing their turmoil's and triumphs alongside them. The world building itself is so fresh and exciting, always adding things to the previously empty world of Black Clover. The characters are written to act and feel like real people and the OC are written so well that it's like they were always a part of canon. The Story development is intriguing and heart wrenching. The exploration of Acier and Sebastian's pasts is done thrillingly and with suspense at every turn as you can never expect just how their interactions will unfold. In Black Clover, I did not know who Lucius was, that's how insignificant he was to the story and limited impact he had as a character. In this story, thanks to his actions against Sebastian and the chapters focused on his and Acier's past, I have grown to hate this unknown character with everything in my heart. If you want to read this story, be prepared to love the characters, flaws and all, and be prepared to have that loved toyed with, bent, broken, and repaired over and over again. This story is not for the faint of heart and those who are looking for something unserious. To really experience it, you have to read it, understand it, and wait for more because that's all you can do when you care for the characters so much.
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Best black clover fiction I've read so far on any fanfiction site hopefully it's not fumbled.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
One of the most exquisitely written fanfics I've ever seen is this one. I am eagerly awaiting additional chapters. Amazing moment so far thanks creator
Ignore the negative or 1 star reviewers. All they have read is wish fulfillment trash and can't seem to handle a bit of realism in here. By far one of the best fics I have read here.
You're doing fantastic! Despite my hectic work schedule, I can't stop reading this; it's so incredible Glad to find this is an amazing moment for me, i really love it
The best fanfic I've ever read, and one of the best books I've ever read. I have never read a fanfic with so many details that weren't in the original anime before. would advise. Continue on creator
Peak Shit if you love a good worl building or just want to read a good ff give it a go
one of the best books I have ever read and THE best fanfic I have ever read. never have i read so much details in a fanfic that didn't exist from the original anime then this one. would recommend. keep it up 👍
Author you should be proud, be more positive you created a masterpiece man just ignore kurdi man be happy here's a five star for you man good luck!
Man this Author a cut above the others. I mean the way he stirs up emotions in me be .... Ughhh. Just read out and find out.
Story is about a dude becoming Noelle’s dad before canon. He focuses on repairing the relationship with his kids and saving/loving his wife. It sounds boring but this shit is so fucking peak. Shits an emotional roller coasters and you get attached to the characters. Characters feel alive and the interaction between them feel real. Sebby the MC is the goat and he is fairly strong. Not the strongest tho so if you’re looking for that is not here. Author is so talented and updates frequently. So try to support them by giving some nice commentary. Read this I guarantee you’ll like it one way or another. Romance, Fluff, Angst, Fantasy etc. PS there’s a fucking dumbass bot spamming bad reviews cause he doesn’t like that Seb isn’t the strongest and isn’t fucking every living sentient female he can find. Do the world a favor and report the dude if you got time. Fucktard’s name is Kurdi.
Peak, I've been reading novels for over 10 years and this is one of the best I've ever read. The story can make you cry your heart out but also makes you cheer on for the characters. 10/10
Hands down the best fanfic out there it made me excited sad cry happy its so good just read it and each chapter is as big as 5 normal chapters from other novels so you have alot to go through and it's always peak best fanfic out there nothing really comes close
This is one of the best pieces of black clover I've ever read, it was honestly very entertaining to the point I stayed up all night reading it. But, it got really boring mid point, as there's no actual change to the plot and now focused in fixing the relationship between Acier and the MC Sebastian. It literally takes half of the chapters in total and it's all about the two of them. It has became unbearable to the point I couldn't read it anymore. While I'm at it, why don't you change the title to My Wife and I, this is our love story blah blah.
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I love the work so far with the current arc leaving a lot of emotion bursting out in a way I didn't think I could feel for a novel but regardless I have truly fallen in love with this story. I look forward to more chapters in the future
Another Peak,.... Goated fanfic ever ..... was an eye openner how can an OC be written in such a Brilliant way 👏 👌 🙌 ......................................
This story is peak fiction. I don't know what else to say. The way romance is handled in this novel is the peak of what romantic storytelling looks like in stories. The way character attitudes and feelings are described and laid out, it almost feels like I'm right there with the characters, watching and experiencing their turmoil's and triumphs alongside them. The world building itself is so fresh and exciting, always adding things to the previously empty world of Black Clover. The characters are written to act and feel like real people and the OC are written so well that it's like they were always a part of canon. The Story development is intriguing and heart wrenching. The exploration of Acier and Sebastian's pasts is done thrillingly and with suspense at every turn as you can never expect just how their interactions will unfold. In Black Clover, I did not know who Lucius was, that's how insignificant he was to the story and limited impact he had as a character. In this story, thanks to his actions against Sebastian and the chapters focused on his and Acier's past, I have grown to hate this unknown character with everything in my heart. If you want to read this story, be prepared to love the characters, flaws and all, and be prepared to have that loved toyed with, bent, broken, and repaired over and over again. This story is not for the faint of heart and those who are looking for something unserious. To really experience it, you have to read it, understand it, and wait for more because that's all you can do when you care for the characters so much.
揭示劇透 Best black clover fiction I've read so far on any fanfiction site hopefully it's not fumbled.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
One of the most exquisitely written fanfics I've ever seen is this one. I am eagerly awaiting additional chapters. Amazing moment so far thanks creator
Ignore the negative or 1 star reviewers. All they have read is wish fulfillment trash and can't seem to handle a bit of realism in here. By far one of the best fics I have read here.
You're doing fantastic! Despite my hectic work schedule, I can't stop reading this; it's so incredible Glad to find this is an amazing moment for me, i really love it
The best fanfic I've ever read, and one of the best books I've ever read. I have never read a fanfic with so many details that weren't in the original anime before. would advise. Continue on creator
Peak Shit if you love a good worl building or just want to read a good ff give it a go
one of the best books I have ever read and THE best fanfic I have ever read. never have i read so much details in a fanfic that didn't exist from the original anime then this one. would recommend. keep it up 👍
Author you should be proud, be more positive you created a masterpiece man just ignore kurdi man be happy here's a five star for you man good luck!
Man this Author a cut above the others. I mean the way he stirs up emotions in me be .... Ughhh. Just read out and find out.
Story is about a dude becoming Noelle’s dad before canon. He focuses on repairing the relationship with his kids and saving/loving his wife. It sounds boring but this shit is so fucking peak. Shits an emotional roller coasters and you get attached to the characters. Characters feel alive and the interaction between them feel real. Sebby the MC is the goat and he is fairly strong. Not the strongest tho so if you’re looking for that is not here. Author is so talented and updates frequently. So try to support them by giving some nice commentary. Read this I guarantee you’ll like it one way or another. Romance, Fluff, Angst, Fantasy etc. PS there’s a fucking dumbass bot spamming bad reviews cause he doesn’t like that Seb isn’t the strongest and isn’t fucking every living sentient female he can find. Do the world a favor and report the dude if you got time. Fucktard’s name is Kurdi.
Great story with a unique twist on the Black Clover world.