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The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him ) Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
I like it, in fact I have the author's other novel in my library but with such a bad rating I didn't even give it a chance, returning to the topic of this novel for now it is very good I hope it doesn't lose quality, the mc and the other characters have their own personality, we just have to hope that it stays the same or improves if it gets worse..., author, your little brother is going to fall.
Like the story so far. Got me hooked. Gonna stick around. The chapters feel a little short though. Hope the author post 2 chaps a day.
I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.
Well, loving the story till this point and don't really have much complaints regarding the story itself I only gave character design 4 stars because I am getting sick of all the White haired mc I have read recently 😅 but I hope author keeps up the quality of the stiory.
Awesome start! I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. Also I really hope this becomes a harem novel. The MC deserves a harem, one with a princess and a teacher at the least.
Love it, especially the fact that none of it felt artificial or forced. And we all can already guess who the FMC is.
God damn Mama Hood six chapters in and I can't wait to see what happens and also will you be updating daily or like just whenever
I haven't read this story yet but just from seeing who the author is and the synopsis I already know this is going to be good. Don't drop it.
The novel is just not for me Mc is too nice and chummy with the real protagonist ( he doesn’t have to antagonize him but I would’ve prefer if he ignored him ) Also i think endric is the new bff of the princess, and he has to have feelings from the past Alex but he shows no jealousy or anything(endric gf should also show jealousy, why she letting him get close to another girl)
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
I like it, in fact I have the author's other novel in my library but with such a bad rating I didn't even give it a chance, returning to the topic of this novel for now it is very good I hope it doesn't lose quality, the mc and the other characters have their own personality, we just have to hope that it stays the same or improves if it gets worse..., author, your little brother is going to fall.
Like the story so far. Got me hooked. Gonna stick around. The chapters feel a little short though. Hope the author post 2 chaps a day.
I loved the previous novel from the author and I'm liking this one even more.
Well, loving the story till this point and don't really have much complaints regarding the story itself I only gave character design 4 stars because I am getting sick of all the White haired mc I have read recently 😅 but I hope author keeps up the quality of the stiory.
Awesome start! I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds. Also I really hope this becomes a harem novel. The MC deserves a harem, one with a princess and a teacher at the least.
Love it, especially the fact that none of it felt artificial or forced. And we all can already guess who the FMC is.
God damn Mama Hood six chapters in and I can't wait to see what happens and also will you be updating daily or like just whenever
I haven't read this story yet but just from seeing who the author is and the synopsis I already know this is going to be good. Don't drop it.
it's a gold ...make it a more valuable author