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Mc is very overpowered, has little morals and is has natural perfection in all his actions… After all that it turns into a wuxia novel (I should have seen it coming with the face slapping) by chapter 55. Enjoy the dragon elephant something something lvl 13 martial arts. Quick, someone hide the bamboo! And all fire sources before he can cultivate!!!
Te doy todas mis piedras, para que traduzcas más rápido y más cantidad. No se porque requiere 140 caracteres para poder enviar una crítica cuando el fan fic se resume en una Genial!!!
The 99% fanfic of marvel and DC are trash. This fanfic is chinese supremacy. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Love this novel please keep uploading chapters as the last 4 days without an update has been hell!!!!!!
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Very funny, sad that Chinese novels don't have lemon scenes, anyway could the author say the original name of the work in Chinese please?........................
I found the storyline of this story quite entertaining. I don't think the author is exaggerating the facts at all. While white people are trying to solve the problem of black people being discriminated against, black people discriminate against and attack Asian people, which we see almost every day. It's not strange that the author uses real stories in the story.
Mc is mently labled persone who needs profesional help instead if system who makes him unreasonably op. Its typical mtl level translation with no plot aside of mc being perfect being (perfect memory, looks, "ideas" etc.) to point where he can rewrite entair book(s) word from word and publish just for them to become absolute hits. He is also chick magnet and every single female will instantly become his play doll cuz reasones. I saw ppl complain here about racism which i cant rly see in it but i suppose that some stuffs can offend some overly sensitive ppl. I cant recommend reading this trash to anyone with 1 or more brain cell
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I think out of some of the fanfics adapted to Chinese, This can be considered one of the best. Although the mannerisms in speech still has a touch of how conversation took place on Chinese people. All I can say that this is good and atleast you're not giving the characters random powers that is not related to the title, this makes the story very unique becoming OP using powers revolving around ice. Good Luck.
揭示劇透
I’m loving the authors style of writing. This novel has kept me hooked on it like few have recently. I’m no going to lie I thought I would not like it as compared to the name of the novel and the synopsis but I’m glad I started reading it and I plan to finish it
The chapters are out of order, but it is an interesting concept for a story. I would only recommend it if your willing to ignore the chapters are out of order and are willing to read another Chinese translated fanfiction.
author please if you are translating this Chinese novel at least try to make it good and avoid all the nationalism and racist shit they put in it (( I am not even angry at u but this just ruined my day ))
Overall a normal fic, but as in all Chinese works there are things like: racism, nationalism, propaganda and strange manner of speech and narration
Overall, I would say this is a fairly good translation. However, the issue of racism from the original work remains. For instance, there's phrasing like: 'He is disliked due to his Chinese descent and because his parents were murdered by a Black man.' This detail is unnecessary and confusing, as it doesn’t make sense how the ethnicity of one's parents' murderer would affect someone's popularity.
Premise is good, but what do you expect from a Chinese novel? racism against black people and them thinking they're superior (the chinese) needs to be proofread and deleted the overly exaggerated parts.
Not great, not terrible... The biggest downside of this novel is, once again, the relationship development is non-existent, and MC just collects women with few lines of speech... that's a really big no-no; it makes the entire thing rather unreal. The novel doesn't really have much depth, shame, cause the premise was good. Some will have problems with racism and nationalism, but for me, that's just how things are in the Chinese novels these days, especially fanfics like Marvel or DC; there is no point of complaining about that and be angry about that. Once you read through many novels like that, you will be able to automatically ignore all of those things on your own. Otherwise, it's just your average Chinese fanfic... if you just want to kill some time, then it will probably serve the purpose.
Mc is very overpowered, has little morals and is has natural perfection in all his actions… After all that it turns into a wuxia novel (I should have seen it coming with the face slapping) by chapter 55. Enjoy the dragon elephant something something lvl 13 martial arts. Quick, someone hide the bamboo! And all fire sources before he can cultivate!!!
Te doy todas mis piedras, para que traduzcas más rápido y más cantidad. No se porque requiere 140 caracteres para poder enviar una crítica cuando el fan fic se resume en una Genial!!!
The 99% fanfic of marvel and DC are trash. This fanfic is chinese supremacy. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Love this novel please keep uploading chapters as the last 4 days without an update has been hell!!!!!!
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Very funny, sad that Chinese novels don't have lemon scenes, anyway could the author say the original name of the work in Chinese please?........................
I found the storyline of this story quite entertaining. I don't think the author is exaggerating the facts at all. While white people are trying to solve the problem of black people being discriminated against, black people discriminate against and attack Asian people, which we see almost every day. It's not strange that the author uses real stories in the story.
Mc is mently labled persone who needs profesional help instead if system who makes him unreasonably op. Its typical mtl level translation with no plot aside of mc being perfect being (perfect memory, looks, "ideas" etc.) to point where he can rewrite entair book(s) word from word and publish just for them to become absolute hits. He is also chick magnet and every single female will instantly become his play doll cuz reasones. I saw ppl complain here about racism which i cant rly see in it but i suppose that some stuffs can offend some overly sensitive ppl. I cant recommend reading this trash to anyone with 1 or more brain cell
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I think out of some of the fanfics adapted to Chinese, This can be considered one of the best. Although the mannerisms in speech still has a touch of how conversation took place on Chinese people. All I can say that this is good and atleast you're not giving the characters random powers that is not related to the title, this makes the story very unique becoming OP using powers revolving around ice. Good Luck.
揭示劇透 I’m loving the authors style of writing. This novel has kept me hooked on it like few have recently. I’m no going to lie I thought I would not like it as compared to the name of the novel and the synopsis but I’m glad I started reading it and I plan to finish it
The chapters are out of order, but it is an interesting concept for a story. I would only recommend it if your willing to ignore the chapters are out of order and are willing to read another Chinese translated fanfiction.
author please if you are translating this Chinese novel at least try to make it good and avoid all the nationalism and racist shit they put in it (( I am not even angry at u but this just ruined my day ))
Overall a normal fic, but as in all Chinese works there are things like: racism, nationalism, propaganda and strange manner of speech and narration
Overall, I would say this is a fairly good translation. However, the issue of racism from the original work remains. For instance, there's phrasing like: 'He is disliked due to his Chinese descent and because his parents were murdered by a Black man.' This detail is unnecessary and confusing, as it doesn’t make sense how the ethnicity of one's parents' murderer would affect someone's popularity.
Premise is good, but what do you expect from a Chinese novel? racism against black people and them thinking they're superior (the chinese) needs to be proofread and deleted the overly exaggerated parts.
Not great, not terrible... The biggest downside of this novel is, once again, the relationship development is non-existent, and MC just collects women with few lines of speech... that's a really big no-no; it makes the entire thing rather unreal. The novel doesn't really have much depth, shame, cause the premise was good. Some will have problems with racism and nationalism, but for me, that's just how things are in the Chinese novels these days, especially fanfics like Marvel or DC; there is no point of complaining about that and be angry about that. Once you read through many novels like that, you will be able to automatically ignore all of those things on your own. Otherwise, it's just your average Chinese fanfic... if you just want to kill some time, then it will probably serve the purpose.