The best thing about this novel is its pacing. In 200 chapters MC of other novels usually just crosses newbie phase, while here it's almost endgame near ch. 230. The plot is decent enough. Cons - - Worst R 18 scenes I've seen. Like seriously author bro if ur gonna copy paste at least copy from someone else's novel. All your scenes are exactly the same with only different names. - Inconsistent names used I recommend it if u can ignore the cons
Don't bother if it has the usual Pokemon harem bro
Marvel x Concubines
Movies · CloudrunTL
hey, who's the ossan in the cover ! lol
Wingman got the booty, what about the bro code ?
Could it be… Captain likes me?!
Anime & Comics · Gered_Chuw
At first I wasn't gonna read it with that bullshit synopsis which is pretty cliche for a Naruto fanfic. But I've got to say, this is an awesome fic. 2nd best Comedy in Naruto fanfics after Naruto - Kusagakure. I highly recommend it.
Actually good jokes in a Naruto fanfic, hats off to TL
"I heard you're in your thirties now, right? You've got kids running around everywhere, but what exactly made your wife marry you? Does she think she married a man, or is she just raising another son?"
Anime & Comics · Gered_Chuw
Author, you missed a chapter !!
Third person is fine for other characters. You can still use 1st person pov if done correctly. Example - I feel Hiruzen's pov was alright but shishui's was rather unnatural. The decision is up to you bro !
Awesome fic. Author's writing style feels like a breath of fresh air after reading the endless AI slob. A small suggestion to author : Maybe not use the same tone for all characters when doing POVs.
Patreon works better
Marvel: Scientist Becomes God [R18]
Movies · CloudrunTL