ProfaneImmortal

male LV 13
2021-02-21 加入 India
徽章 5

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ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
13 hours ago
Commented

Patreon works better

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
2 days ago
Posted

The best thing about this novel is its pacing. In 200 chapters MC of other novels usually just crosses newbie phase, while here it's almost endgame near ch. 230. The plot is decent enough. Cons - - Worst R 18 scenes I've seen. Like seriously author bro if ur gonna copy paste at least copy from someone else's novel. All your scenes are exactly the same with only different names. - Inconsistent names used I recommend it if u can ignore the cons

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
4 days ago
Commented

Don't bother if it has the usual Pokemon harem bro

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
6 days ago
Replied to CloudrunTL

hey, who's the ossan in the cover ! lol

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
6 days ago
Commented

Wingman got the booty, what about the bro code ?

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ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
6 days ago
Posted

At first I wasn't gonna read it with that bullshit synopsis which is pretty cliche for a Naruto fanfic. But I've got to say, this is an awesome fic. 2nd best Comedy in Naruto fanfics after Naruto - Kusagakure. I highly recommend it.

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ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
10 days ago
Commented

Actually good jokes in a Naruto fanfic, hats off to TL

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"I heard you're in your thirties now, right? You've got kids running around everywhere, but what exactly made your wife marry you? Does she think she married a man, or is she just raising another son?"

Naruto: I Traveled with a Max Level Account

Naruto: I Traveled with a Max Level Account

Anime & Comics · Gered_Chuw

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
13 days ago
Replied to TheDreamofSomeday

Third person is fine for other characters. You can still use 1st person pov if done correctly. Example - I feel Hiruzen's pov was alright but shishui's was rather unnatural. The decision is up to you bro !

ProfaneImmortal
ProfaneImmortal
14 days ago
Posted

Awesome fic. Author's writing style feels like a breath of fresh air after reading the endless AI slob. A small suggestion to author : Maybe not use the same tone for all characters when doing POVs.