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The grammar is a little messy. However the story is not bad. I feel like it jumps around too much and sometimes you don't know what the MC is doing. The story is interesting however, the story does not do a good job of portraying how people look or how they are feeling. Overall rough translation but worth the read to pass time or for entertainment.
Si quieres reseñas por capitulos, sin problema, esto esta increíble y quiero mas!!!! La traducción al español con google traductor funciona muy bien y se lee genial More, more chapter
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gooood! i like to read novel with a system that can communicate with the host! a good read before sleeping! thanks!,.................................
Bom ............... ............... .............. .............. ................ .................... .................. ................. ............ .......... .
I came I saw I conquered That's the theme of this novel. Give it a read and you won't be disappointed.
I love the scientific aspect! The details about gene fusion and experiments are well done. Ye Hais brain activation and his work on Connors’ projects give off a cool, futuristic vibe!! Some moments with the system seem too easy but overall its fun watching him navigate Marvel science world 💖
Brooo, I LOVE how Ye Hai is starting to play around with mutant powers!!! He basically figures out Spider-Man’s secret with Peter’s blood and then just casually works on perfecting it… like, what?! 😂 The fight scenes are getting better too…him punching the giant lizard on the bridge? Epic!! He’s OP and cool af!!
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Ok... this is pretty awesome!!! Ye Hai working at Oscorp with Marvel characters like Gwen n Dr. Connors is genius 🔥🔥 Also that system giving him powers is a cool twist. It's a lil too convenient sometimes, but still loving it 😁 Can't wait for him to meet more heroes!! Author pls give more chapters 😔
I was not expecting things to go this dark but I kinda like it The way oscorp gets mutant samples from the black market gave me chills Ye Hai using Peter’s blood without his permission was SO shady. Not to mention, Connors is slowly becoming the Lizard, which is just tragic…The fight scenes are brutal, especially on the bridge!!! Super intense stuff…
As a Marvel fan, I was hooked by the first chapter! The interactions with the doc nd Stacy feel authentic nd the of mc joining oscorp fits perfectly with the Marvel universe system’s addition is interesting though a bit OP for my taste….still its fun seeing him tackle experiments and bcm a genius overnight .
Your typical fanfiction where the MC is OP right from the start, but it works here! mc fits into the Marvel world...the system makes things a bit too smooth for him but if you r into smart protagonists who get op powers its a fun ride 😌✨️The mix of action, science, and Marvel lore is well-balanced 👍
I enjoyed the first few chapters, but I feel like the characters could use more depth. Ye is cool and I swear I want his brain activation system too 🤡✋️…liked his interactions with Gwen. Hopefully we’ll see more struggle and growth in future chapters!
Omg, this fanfic is sooo cool! 😍 Ye Hai is OP but in a good way lol... Love how he works with other characters !! ❤️ The whole brain activation thing is like... mindblowing! 😌 Can't wait for more action and science stuff... plus the system is so fun to read about 🤩😭
i love how this fanfic puts Ye Hai straight into the Marvel world! 😍 The system thing is really interesting!?!?! Still, the characters are fun, and I really liked the parts where he's working on experiments! The chars are well written 👌
Man, this story has some sick fights! Ye Hai punching the Lizard into cars on the bridge was 🔥🔥!! Love how he constantly leveling up with the system and now has mutant powers. All the flying super strength, danger sense…it’s like he's the ultimate fighter. The bridge fight was a highlight for me!!! can't wait to see how he handles more villains!
Yo, Ye Hai took Peter's blood without asking?! 😂 That whole scene where Peter panics and Ye Hai just ‘borrows’ it was too funny. Then he goes all mad scientist and upgrades himself with mutant powers! Plus, that moment when he flies for the first time had me laughing—he's so OP it's ridiculous, but in a fun way. And let’s not forget the big lizard fight on the bridge!
Wow, the way this story dives into gene fusion is insane 😭😭😭 Ye literally breaks down the science behind Spider-Man's 🔋 🔋 And now he’s moving on to mutants??!?!? The whole thing with the 56 mutants’ DNA samples and all that…mutant transformation was really well-detailed 💀💀 If you love science fiction with action, this is for you 🤭
Things are really heating up between Ye Hai and GwenTheir relationship is so sweet, especially when Hai finally admits he’s a mutant and Gwen is totally cool with it…I love how she’s smart and not just a love intrest on the side….also, the whole mutant school plot with Professor X is setting up for something big…Can’t wait to see how it unfolds~~
Honestly, this fanfic is wild! Its like nothing I've read before in the Marvel universe. SPOILER!!!! The whole thing with Nick Fury's embarrassing video was hilarious never thought I'would see that! But the science parts? They got confused quickly. Still, if you love mutants and tech stuff, it's worth a read. Just wish the pacing was better
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The grammar is a little messy. However the story is not bad. I feel like it jumps around too much and sometimes you don't know what the MC is doing. The story is interesting however, the story does not do a good job of portraying how people look or how they are feeling. Overall rough translation but worth the read to pass time or for entertainment.
Si quieres reseñas por capitulos, sin problema, esto esta increíble y quiero mas!!!! La traducción al español con google traductor funciona muy bien y se lee genial More, more chapter
That's great. 🇹🇷👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏💛👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏👍👏👍👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍👏💛👏👍🇹🇷
GOOD very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
gooood! i like to read novel with a system that can communicate with the host! a good read before sleeping! thanks!,.................................
Bom ............... ............... .............. .............. ................ .................... .................. ................. ............ .......... .
I came I saw I conquered That's the theme of this novel. Give it a read and you won't be disappointed.
I love the scientific aspect! The details about gene fusion and experiments are well done. Ye Hais brain activation and his work on Connors’ projects give off a cool, futuristic vibe!! Some moments with the system seem too easy but overall its fun watching him navigate Marvel science world 💖
Brooo, I LOVE how Ye Hai is starting to play around with mutant powers!!! He basically figures out Spider-Man’s secret with Peter’s blood and then just casually works on perfecting it… like, what?! 😂 The fight scenes are getting better too…him punching the giant lizard on the bridge? Epic!! He’s OP and cool af!!
Definitely a good read Now exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
same typical cn mc dominates them all Nothing new But still I WILL READ IT spam incoming 😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸
LOL it's inflated but GOATED been a while since i read something like this. more updates would earn u a 5 star from me exp exp exp exp
Ok... this is pretty awesome!!! Ye Hai working at Oscorp with Marvel characters like Gwen n Dr. Connors is genius 🔥🔥 Also that system giving him powers is a cool twist. It's a lil too convenient sometimes, but still loving it 😁 Can't wait for him to meet more heroes!! Author pls give more chapters 😔
I was not expecting things to go this dark but I kinda like it The way oscorp gets mutant samples from the black market gave me chills Ye Hai using Peter’s blood without his permission was SO shady. Not to mention, Connors is slowly becoming the Lizard, which is just tragic…The fight scenes are brutal, especially on the bridge!!! Super intense stuff…
As a Marvel fan, I was hooked by the first chapter! The interactions with the doc nd Stacy feel authentic nd the of mc joining oscorp fits perfectly with the Marvel universe system’s addition is interesting though a bit OP for my taste….still its fun seeing him tackle experiments and bcm a genius overnight .
Your typical fanfiction where the MC is OP right from the start, but it works here! mc fits into the Marvel world...the system makes things a bit too smooth for him but if you r into smart protagonists who get op powers its a fun ride 😌✨️The mix of action, science, and Marvel lore is well-balanced 👍
I enjoyed the first few chapters, but I feel like the characters could use more depth. Ye is cool and I swear I want his brain activation system too 🤡✋️…liked his interactions with Gwen. Hopefully we’ll see more struggle and growth in future chapters!
Omg, this fanfic is sooo cool! 😍 Ye Hai is OP but in a good way lol... Love how he works with other characters !! ❤️ The whole brain activation thing is like... mindblowing! 😌 Can't wait for more action and science stuff... plus the system is so fun to read about 🤩😭
i love how this fanfic puts Ye Hai straight into the Marvel world! 😍 The system thing is really interesting!?!?! Still, the characters are fun, and I really liked the parts where he's working on experiments! The chars are well written 👌
Man, this story has some sick fights! Ye Hai punching the Lizard into cars on the bridge was 🔥🔥!! Love how he constantly leveling up with the system and now has mutant powers. All the flying super strength, danger sense…it’s like he's the ultimate fighter. The bridge fight was a highlight for me!!! can't wait to see how he handles more villains!
Yo, Ye Hai took Peter's blood without asking?! 😂 That whole scene where Peter panics and Ye Hai just ‘borrows’ it was too funny. Then he goes all mad scientist and upgrades himself with mutant powers! Plus, that moment when he flies for the first time had me laughing—he's so OP it's ridiculous, but in a fun way. And let’s not forget the big lizard fight on the bridge!
Wow, the way this story dives into gene fusion is insane 😭😭😭 Ye literally breaks down the science behind Spider-Man's 🔋 🔋 And now he’s moving on to mutants??!?!? The whole thing with the 56 mutants’ DNA samples and all that…mutant transformation was really well-detailed 💀💀 If you love science fiction with action, this is for you 🤭
Things are really heating up between Ye Hai and GwenTheir relationship is so sweet, especially when Hai finally admits he’s a mutant and Gwen is totally cool with it…I love how she’s smart and not just a love intrest on the side….also, the whole mutant school plot with Professor X is setting up for something big…Can’t wait to see how it unfolds~~
Honestly, this fanfic is wild! Its like nothing I've read before in the Marvel universe. SPOILER!!!! The whole thing with Nick Fury's embarrassing video was hilarious never thought I'would see that! But the science parts? They got confused quickly. Still, if you love mutants and tech stuff, it's worth a read. Just wish the pacing was better
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