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Honestly, this fanfic is wild! Its like nothing I've read before in the Marvel universe. SPOILER!!!! The whole thing with Nick Fury's embarrassing video was hilarious never thought I'would see that! But the science parts? They got confused quickly. Still, if you love mutants and tech stuff, it's worth a read. Just wish the pacing was better
Okay, Ye Hai hacking into Norman Osborn's computer and pulling up that video? I was dying! The way Ye Hai just coolly out-hacks everyone was both funny and awesome. Norman's rage at the end was gold! 🤣 Plus, Ye Hai just casually flexing his mutant powers in front of Spider-Man was hilarious too
Loving the mix of Marvel characters! Hai goestoe-to-toe with the doc Lizard form, and then Spider-Man jumps in with his usual sass! He beats the Lizard into the ground while keeping his cool. Plus, Hawkeye shows p with S.H.I.E.L.D.?? This fanfic is giving me everything I want! I’m super xcited for more mutant stuff now that Professor X is getting involved too.
Not bad just started reading fanfic nd this is third time reading Marvel fanfic 😅 It’s kinda cool how Ye Hai becomes like a genius scientist with the system Some parts are confusing tho... like how he solves stuff so fast 🤷♂️ But it’s still pretty exciting and the science experiments are cool! ✋️👍
Why is he so OP from the start tho?? 😂 He literally solves everything in seconds lol But still, the story is fun to read... especially the science parts Gwen Stacy’s cool, but I hope there’s more action…Will review again after more chapters, tho i have hopes for this one so the author shld make sure he does it right~
Review after 10 chapter. I love how Ye Hai’s character is super smart but also pretty relatable. The mix of Marvel characters like Dr. Connors and Gwen Stacy with the sci-fi tech gives it a cool vibe. The system thing adds a fun twist, like in those leveling-up stories. It’s not too heavy, so it's easy to follow. Perfect for someone who wants action and a bit of science.
This story balances action and humor perfectly!!! gotta say this fanfic is unique. The way the story mixes science with mutants and Marvel lore is cool, though sometimes a bit too complex. The main guy, Ye Hai, feels overpowered but not in an annoying way, and I liked seeing him interact with big Marvel names.A solid read if you’re into Marvel AU stories
Things are really heating up between Ye Hai and GwenTheir relationship is so sweet, especially when Hai finally admits he’s a mutant and Gwen is totally cool with it…I love how she’s smart and not just a love intrest on the side….also, the whole mutant school plot with Professor X is setting up for something big…Can’t wait to see how it unfolds~~
Honestly, this fanfic is wild! Its like nothing I've read before in the Marvel universe. SPOILER!!!! The whole thing with Nick Fury's embarrassing video was hilarious never thought I'would see that! But the science parts? They got confused quickly. Still, if you love mutants and tech stuff, it's worth a read. Just wish the pacing was better
Okay, Ye Hai hacking into Norman Osborn's computer and pulling up that video? I was dying! The way Ye Hai just coolly out-hacks everyone was both funny and awesome. Norman's rage at the end was gold! 🤣 Plus, Ye Hai just casually flexing his mutant powers in front of Spider-Man was hilarious too
Loving the mix of Marvel characters! Hai goestoe-to-toe with the doc Lizard form, and then Spider-Man jumps in with his usual sass! He beats the Lizard into the ground while keeping his cool. Plus, Hawkeye shows p with S.H.I.E.L.D.?? This fanfic is giving me everything I want! I’m super xcited for more mutant stuff now that Professor X is getting involved too.
Not bad just started reading fanfic nd this is third time reading Marvel fanfic 😅 It’s kinda cool how Ye Hai becomes like a genius scientist with the system Some parts are confusing tho... like how he solves stuff so fast 🤷♂️ But it’s still pretty exciting and the science experiments are cool! ✋️👍
Why is he so OP from the start tho?? 😂 He literally solves everything in seconds lol But still, the story is fun to read... especially the science parts Gwen Stacy’s cool, but I hope there’s more action…Will review again after more chapters, tho i have hopes for this one so the author shld make sure he does it right~
Review after 10 chapter. I love how Ye Hai’s character is super smart but also pretty relatable. The mix of Marvel characters like Dr. Connors and Gwen Stacy with the sci-fi tech gives it a cool vibe. The system thing adds a fun twist, like in those leveling-up stories. It’s not too heavy, so it's easy to follow. Perfect for someone who wants action and a bit of science.
This story balances action and humor perfectly!!! gotta say this fanfic is unique. The way the story mixes science with mutants and Marvel lore is cool, though sometimes a bit too complex. The main guy, Ye Hai, feels overpowered but not in an annoying way, and I liked seeing him interact with big Marvel names.A solid read if you’re into Marvel AU stories
Things are really heating up between Ye Hai and GwenTheir relationship is so sweet, especially when Hai finally admits he’s a mutant and Gwen is totally cool with it…I love how she’s smart and not just a love intrest on the side….also, the whole mutant school plot with Professor X is setting up for something big…Can’t wait to see how it unfolds~~