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Veilbound: Arcane Awakening

Fantasy 20 章節 12.3K 流覽
作者: jitace

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Kael Alvion’s mundane life is upended when a mysterious system grants him extraordinary abilities. As he navigates a hidden world of magic and danger, Kael must battle monstrous creatures and uncover dark secrets. His quest for survival and truth reveals a prophecy linking him to ancient forces. In this high-stakes adventure, Kael must master his newfound powers and confront the shadows that threaten to consume him. Will he reshape his destiny or be lost to the darkness?

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ZELIN_WANG

The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!

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DRAGONWORRIOR10

I have read a few chapters. the writing quality is good in my opinion but I think you need to polish your storytelling. You have to add more description to the events that happen during each scene to help people visualise the scenes. looking forward to seeing how it goes

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iloveJolo

It's a very intriguing story and I'm ngl I quite enjoying. I hope to see more from you and if you keep up the hard work. Then your work will begin to be appreciated.✨

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Siya27

kael is a well designed character nice story line. when I read I felt I was in gaming world

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HorizonWanderer

Intresting Story . This novel is good . I like it. Though the chapters are short otherwise this novel has the potential to grow and become famous . And I found an interesting thing that my novel also has the MC with the same first name and the supporting character name is also the same . plus the system name is also the same 😁😂. chapter 17 is written 2 times you should correct it . All good , continue updating I am keeping my tabs on it.

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Phoenixlam

perfect enjoy the work so far ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💓💓💓💓💓

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Mad_Jester_

I'm really enjoying this Novel the only problem is you update schedule but the rest is amazing

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