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We've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
Aight, Young Sosa on the review h o *. Alright listen, if you stalking my profile and saw that MABI review where I said that I seldom review novels and see me reviewing this novel hours later then let me clarify. First, I just thought that since it's Sunday let me review all the novels that I found peak. Don't worry, after 1 or 2 reviews after this, you won't see reviews from me in a long time. Anyways, like I previously said, if you see me reviewing any novel with 5 on it, yeah it's good so just try it. PTSD (Yeah, I still can't remember the name and I'm high so just go with this) at the end. I'm not even a moderator for this novel or anything, so yeah, don't accuse me of glaz- Ring...Ring. Just a second. Yes? Oh.. Yeah, I see. I gotchu. See, it's my homie so.... KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GLAZIN Just kidding, my boy and this novel so good, that my genuine praise would seem like glaze to you haters. Anyways. MUSTARRRRRRRRRRRRRD! Writing Quality: Yeah, so I'll just give you blockheaders a clue. This guy, yeah, this guy named FailedWriter101 who got this roblox ahh username trying to show that he's new to the platform. For someone new, bro's got really peak writing, I can't lie. Coincidence? I think not. But then again, since when was my thinking not dumb half of the time. Wish I could be as wise and clever as Ryuk from De*** Note. In any case, the quality is peak. The author clearly knows how to write better than 80% of the writers on this platform. Just him taking minutes to reread the chapter and edit out puts him above most people. There's barely any errors. SO ITS PEAK, I DONT CARE WHAT OTHERS SAY. Sorry, didn't mean to scream. It's just that I get aired and ignored alot. In any case, the explanation, the description and everything is done in simple easy to understand, Wn-readers brain like words. Aight, next. Stability of Updates: Yeah, so if you got a problem with this, there's a door to the right. Just walk some steps. Yup, right here. Open it. Yeah, see that space outside? Get out. For someone who released multiple chapters early on to satisfy his readers (Don't worry jadey, I didn't see those tier messages), and also keeping his stability perfect till date, this deserves a big 5 star. Yup, that star that the teachers used to draw on your cheeks. Yeah, come here jadey. Let me draw it on your cheeks as well. Just not the ones on your face. Story Development: It's peak. Genuinely peak. Yeah, I know you prolly saw my Reading Status when reading this review to see how serious you can take me. Anyways, the plans, foreshadowings and how the story progresses genuinely leaves every reader wanting for much more. As an author, I, myself love how he progresses his story. This is also why whenever I want to do something in my novel I take his opinion. genuinely serious. I swear you will love it. It's never too light or too dark (who am I kidding with that mini gege pfp). Anyways, for you WN readers, I assure you will love it. Character Design: Cooked. The humor the author puts into characters genuinely makes me laugh and crash out so much that my soul flies out of my body into oblivion. .exe crashed. Pinched the red peak. Marshmallows. Yeah, chapter 24. Author definitely changed gege to za-za at that time. The character's personalities are also not annoying or make it feel unnatural at all. Neo's personality for his age is peak. Morrigan, love her. Elizabeth, hate her. World Background: For an extra story, author took a big leap here. Rather than that organizations and cliche everything, he introduced clans. Especially of Olympian Gods. How much more unique can it be? No info dumps or over explanations at all. Author really put his mind into developing the world before writing it and I love it. PTSD: Still don't remember the name, forgive me. In any case, every aspect about this story deviates from the cliche extra trops and characters and everything. Author genuinely thought that throw this all out, and we make Extra good again. After all the stains on it, author did a fresh turn and turned it into a genuinely peak 5 star meat that makes me want to swallow and eat it. HUH? Nah, I said 5 star meal bruh. Eat a 5 star meal. What you guys on? Anyways, Peak 5 star, wonderful novel. so.... GO READ!!!!! METROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.
Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Well written! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
The rating is heavily influenced by the fact that the author killed off 2 of my favorite side characters and has some random guy carrying around their bodies in his shadow for over 150 chapters. I have a lot of other complaints, like the constant ridiculous increases and decreases the author makes to the MC, which I consider unnecessary nerfs, or the fact that the author completely disregards one of his elements entirely for 220+ chapters (void). Mc doesn't even use some of his skills anymore, over 200 chapters and he's only at apprentice rank with a few of his elements. This is honestly the first time I've seen someone remain pathetic even with a system. Overall, the story was good at first, but it's become quite boring, confusing, and redundant. The pacing is all over the place and I'm starting to think the author dislikes the mc. The romance tag is completely useless since from what I've seen the mc has absolutely no interests in any of the great love interests introduced. One of the "love interests" is currently dead and rotting in a shadow , The other was just sent to her death-bed due to the mc's foolish decision to manipulate her actions using the trust she had for him , and the other 2 has had zero progress other than their initial meeting. 3/5 stars at best.
The main character was already under constant debuff for 100+ chapters and the author just decided, " You know what? Why don't I nerf an already weak mc as soon as he gets a little strength?" AND FKING REDUCED HIS ALREADY MINISCULE GOD BLOOD BY HALF.
an amazing novel with a great story and a fun time element in it. would recommend 10/10
Damn, I had a lot of fun reading this! Great job, author—you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to the new chapters!
Genuinely one of the better extra novels out there the plot isn’t predictable in the slightest and the mc has to work crazy hard to achieve what others can in an instant (I love the untalented mc troupe it’s way more interesting to see a mc beat talent with hard work) . I hope the author never drops im also curious who the fmc will be (hopefully elizbeath but that’s just my opinion) well anyways to anyone checking reviews give it a go its a really interesting novel
I love your novel, keep it up don't stop. Keep writing with the same passion and creativity I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
This novel is truly one of my favorites, and I absolutely love it! To all the readers currently following this story, I urge you not to drop it—it's a must-read! The journey becomes even more rewarding as you progress through the latest chapters, and the way the story unfolds is nothing short of amazing. To the author, I have to say—kudos on an incredible job, especially for your first time writing! The world-building is thoroughly planned and feels immersive, while the power system is unique and well thought out. The plot is far from boring—it’s engaging, dynamic, and keeps you hooked chapter after chapter. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece in the making, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Keep up the phenomenal work! Please, don’t drop this novel or go on a long hiatus! This story has so much potential, and your dedication is appreciated by readers like me. Keep up the amazing work—we can’t wait to see where you take us next!
This novel is DEFINITELY 5 stars compared to other novels on this site. The story flows so well and makes so much sense. Everything is connected and sometimes the author drops little hints that will make sense a hundred chapters later and that's where you find out how incredibly good the plot is. It has the R-18 tag and that might scare away some people, but I promise you. This is a proper story with fleshed out characters. with motives and feelings and personalities. Update stability is great. We get two chapters a day and sometimes more. The power system is unique, detailed yet easy to understand. All in all, I think this story is one of the great ones and it has the potential to reach great heights. The only problem with it is the grammar. It's not that bad but author often types off words for example. Trail instead of trial and stuff like that.
Just keep going bro. Please just never drop this quality and never compromise with your own intention for any fucks request or something. Just 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍
Eldeel (another reviewer) mentioned some pain points about this story that I can relate with after seeing 38 chapters. I don't know if the author is a new writer( I did not bother checking) but world building is not well-thought out. I was also hoping the MC would not be going through repeated suffering, but my not-so-high-expectations will be met. Also, the author the author's "smart" plans are retarded. Whether antagonist or MC. The way the author writes them like they're groundbreaking makes me laugh However, the story itself is not bad. Just, it's not something I like to read. It reminds me of the KR tropes where the MC set his sights sky high, and because of plot, he barely meets them when the time comes. And he's either on the brink of death afterwards, or he achieves it with one trick pony skills. Could also be both. I find these extremely annoying.
Decent novel. But the Author trying to get us to sympathize with the Tyrant was unnecessary. Just felt like the author didn't want the female character to be an actual Tyrant. Even though the Kingdom is justified in worrying that her outdated methods will lead the kingdom to ruin. The author tries to paint this as wrong.
AMAzing work great characters and story building ,Book gets u hooked reallly fast it’s insane
How many chapters are planned ? One of the Best novels by the way. Love you author 😘
Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak
We've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
Aight, Young Sosa on the review h o *. Alright listen, if you stalking my profile and saw that MABI review where I said that I seldom review novels and see me reviewing this novel hours later then let me clarify. First, I just thought that since it's Sunday let me review all the novels that I found peak. Don't worry, after 1 or 2 reviews after this, you won't see reviews from me in a long time. Anyways, like I previously said, if you see me reviewing any novel with 5 on it, yeah it's good so just try it. PTSD (Yeah, I still can't remember the name and I'm high so just go with this) at the end. I'm not even a moderator for this novel or anything, so yeah, don't accuse me of glaz- Ring...Ring. Just a second. Yes? Oh.. Yeah, I see. I gotchu. See, it's my homie so.... KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GLAZIN Just kidding, my boy and this novel so good, that my genuine praise would seem like glaze to you haters. Anyways. MUSTARRRRRRRRRRRRRD! Writing Quality: Yeah, so I'll just give you blockheaders a clue. This guy, yeah, this guy named FailedWriter101 who got this roblox ahh username trying to show that he's new to the platform. For someone new, bro's got really peak writing, I can't lie. Coincidence? I think not. But then again, since when was my thinking not dumb half of the time. Wish I could be as wise and clever as Ryuk from De*** Note. In any case, the quality is peak. The author clearly knows how to write better than 80% of the writers on this platform. Just him taking minutes to reread the chapter and edit out puts him above most people. There's barely any errors. SO ITS PEAK, I DONT CARE WHAT OTHERS SAY. Sorry, didn't mean to scream. It's just that I get aired and ignored alot. In any case, the explanation, the description and everything is done in simple easy to understand, Wn-readers brain like words. Aight, next. Stability of Updates: Yeah, so if you got a problem with this, there's a door to the right. Just walk some steps. Yup, right here. Open it. Yeah, see that space outside? Get out. For someone who released multiple chapters early on to satisfy his readers (Don't worry jadey, I didn't see those tier messages), and also keeping his stability perfect till date, this deserves a big 5 star. Yup, that star that the teachers used to draw on your cheeks. Yeah, come here jadey. Let me draw it on your cheeks as well. Just not the ones on your face. Story Development: It's peak. Genuinely peak. Yeah, I know you prolly saw my Reading Status when reading this review to see how serious you can take me. Anyways, the plans, foreshadowings and how the story progresses genuinely leaves every reader wanting for much more. As an author, I, myself love how he progresses his story. This is also why whenever I want to do something in my novel I take his opinion. genuinely serious. I swear you will love it. It's never too light or too dark (who am I kidding with that mini gege pfp). Anyways, for you WN readers, I assure you will love it. Character Design: Cooked. The humor the author puts into characters genuinely makes me laugh and crash out so much that my soul flies out of my body into oblivion. .exe crashed. Pinched the red peak. Marshmallows. Yeah, chapter 24. Author definitely changed gege to za-za at that time. The character's personalities are also not annoying or make it feel unnatural at all. Neo's personality for his age is peak. Morrigan, love her. Elizabeth, hate her. World Background: For an extra story, author took a big leap here. Rather than that organizations and cliche everything, he introduced clans. Especially of Olympian Gods. How much more unique can it be? No info dumps or over explanations at all. Author really put his mind into developing the world before writing it and I love it. PTSD: Still don't remember the name, forgive me. In any case, every aspect about this story deviates from the cliche extra trops and characters and everything. Author genuinely thought that throw this all out, and we make Extra good again. After all the stains on it, author did a fresh turn and turned it into a genuinely peak 5 star meat that makes me want to swallow and eat it. HUH? Nah, I said 5 star meal bruh. Eat a 5 star meal. What you guys on? Anyways, Peak 5 star, wonderful novel. so.... GO READ!!!!! METROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.
Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Well written! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
The rating is heavily influenced by the fact that the author killed off 2 of my favorite side characters and has some random guy carrying around their bodies in his shadow for over 150 chapters. I have a lot of other complaints, like the constant ridiculous increases and decreases the author makes to the MC, which I consider unnecessary nerfs, or the fact that the author completely disregards one of his elements entirely for 220+ chapters (void). Mc doesn't even use some of his skills anymore, over 200 chapters and he's only at apprentice rank with a few of his elements. This is honestly the first time I've seen someone remain pathetic even with a system. Overall, the story was good at first, but it's become quite boring, confusing, and redundant. The pacing is all over the place and I'm starting to think the author dislikes the mc. The romance tag is completely useless since from what I've seen the mc has absolutely no interests in any of the great love interests introduced. One of the "love interests" is currently dead and rotting in a shadow , The other was just sent to her death-bed due to the mc's foolish decision to manipulate her actions using the trust she had for him , and the other 2 has had zero progress other than their initial meeting. 3/5 stars at best.
The main character was already under constant debuff for 100+ chapters and the author just decided, " You know what? Why don't I nerf an already weak mc as soon as he gets a little strength?" AND FKING REDUCED HIS ALREADY MINISCULE GOD BLOOD BY HALF.
an amazing novel with a great story and a fun time element in it. would recommend 10/10
Damn, I had a lot of fun reading this! Great job, author—you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to the new chapters!
Genuinely one of the better extra novels out there the plot isn’t predictable in the slightest and the mc has to work crazy hard to achieve what others can in an instant (I love the untalented mc troupe it’s way more interesting to see a mc beat talent with hard work) . I hope the author never drops im also curious who the fmc will be (hopefully elizbeath but that’s just my opinion) well anyways to anyone checking reviews give it a go its a really interesting novel
I love your novel, keep it up don't stop. Keep writing with the same passion and creativity I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
This novel is truly one of my favorites, and I absolutely love it! To all the readers currently following this story, I urge you not to drop it—it's a must-read! The journey becomes even more rewarding as you progress through the latest chapters, and the way the story unfolds is nothing short of amazing. To the author, I have to say—kudos on an incredible job, especially for your first time writing! The world-building is thoroughly planned and feels immersive, while the power system is unique and well thought out. The plot is far from boring—it’s engaging, dynamic, and keeps you hooked chapter after chapter. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece in the making, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Keep up the phenomenal work! Please, don’t drop this novel or go on a long hiatus! This story has so much potential, and your dedication is appreciated by readers like me. Keep up the amazing work—we can’t wait to see where you take us next!
This novel is DEFINITELY 5 stars compared to other novels on this site. The story flows so well and makes so much sense. Everything is connected and sometimes the author drops little hints that will make sense a hundred chapters later and that's where you find out how incredibly good the plot is. It has the R-18 tag and that might scare away some people, but I promise you. This is a proper story with fleshed out characters. with motives and feelings and personalities. Update stability is great. We get two chapters a day and sometimes more. The power system is unique, detailed yet easy to understand. All in all, I think this story is one of the great ones and it has the potential to reach great heights. The only problem with it is the grammar. It's not that bad but author often types off words for example. Trail instead of trial and stuff like that.
Just keep going bro. Please just never drop this quality and never compromise with your own intention for any fucks request or something. Just 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍
Eldeel (another reviewer) mentioned some pain points about this story that I can relate with after seeing 38 chapters. I don't know if the author is a new writer( I did not bother checking) but world building is not well-thought out. I was also hoping the MC would not be going through repeated suffering, but my not-so-high-expectations will be met. Also, the author the author's "smart" plans are retarded. Whether antagonist or MC. The way the author writes them like they're groundbreaking makes me laugh However, the story itself is not bad. Just, it's not something I like to read. It reminds me of the KR tropes where the MC set his sights sky high, and because of plot, he barely meets them when the time comes. And he's either on the brink of death afterwards, or he achieves it with one trick pony skills. Could also be both. I find these extremely annoying.
Decent novel. But the Author trying to get us to sympathize with the Tyrant was unnecessary. Just felt like the author didn't want the female character to be an actual Tyrant. Even though the Kingdom is justified in worrying that her outdated methods will lead the kingdom to ruin. The author tries to paint this as wrong.
AMAzing work great characters and story building ,Book gets u hooked reallly fast it’s insane
How many chapters are planned ? One of the Best novels by the way. Love you author 😘
Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak