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寫檢討Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
The rating is heavily influenced by the fact that the author killed off 2 of my favorite side characters and has some random guy carrying around their bodies in his shadow for over 150 chapters. I have a lot of other complaints, like the constant ridiculous increases and decreases the author makes to the MC, which I consider unnecessary nerfs, or the fact that the author completely disregards one of his elements entirely for 220+ chapters (void). Mc doesn't even use some of his skills anymore, over 200 chapters and he's only at apprentice rank with a few of his elements. This is honestly the first time I've seen someone remain pathetic even with a system. Overall, the story was good at first, but it's become quite boring, confusing, and redundant. The pacing is all over the place and I'm starting to think the author dislikes the mc. The romance tag is completely useless since from what I've seen the mc has absolutely no interests in any of the great love interests introduced. One of the "love interests" is currently dead and rotting in a shadow , The other was just sent to her death-bed due to the mc's foolish decision to manipulate her actions using the trust she had for him , and the other 2 has had zero progress other than their initial meeting. 3/5 stars at best.
The main character was already under constant debuff for 100+ chapters and the author just decided, " You know what? Why don't I nerf an already weak mc as soon as he gets a little strength?" AND FKING REDUCED HIS ALREADY MINISCULE GOD BLOOD BY HALF.
Damn, I had a lot of fun reading this! Great job, author—you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to the new chapters!
Genuinely one of the better extra novels out there the plot isn’t predictable in the slightest and the mc has to work crazy hard to achieve what others can in an instant (I love the untalented mc troupe it’s way more interesting to see a mc beat talent with hard work) . I hope the author never drops im also curious who the fmc will be (hopefully elizbeath but that’s just my opinion) well anyways to anyone checking reviews give it a go its a really interesting novel
I love your novel, keep it up don't stop. Keep writing with the same passion and creativity I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
This novel is truly one of my favorites, and I absolutely love it! To all the readers currently following this story, I urge you not to drop it—it's a must-read! The journey becomes even more rewarding as you progress through the latest chapters, and the way the story unfolds is nothing short of amazing. To the author, I have to say—kudos on an incredible job, especially for your first time writing! The world-building is thoroughly planned and feels immersive, while the power system is unique and well thought out. The plot is far from boring—it’s engaging, dynamic, and keeps you hooked chapter after chapter. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece in the making, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Keep up the phenomenal work! Please, don’t drop this novel or go on a long hiatus! This story has so much potential, and your dedication is appreciated by readers like me. Keep up the amazing work—we can’t wait to see where you take us next!
This novel is DEFINITELY 5 stars compared to other novels on this site. The story flows so well and makes so much sense. Everything is connected and sometimes the author drops little hints that will make sense a hundred chapters later and that's where you find out how incredibly good the plot is. It has the R-18 tag and that might scare away some people, but I promise you. This is a proper story with fleshed out characters. with motives and feelings and personalities. Update stability is great. We get two chapters a day and sometimes more. The power system is unique, detailed yet easy to understand. All in all, I think this story is one of the great ones and it has the potential to reach great heights. The only problem with it is the grammar. It's not that bad but author often types off words for example. Trail instead of trial and stuff like that.
Just keep going bro. Please just never drop this quality and never compromise with your own intention for any fucks request or something. Just 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍
Eldeel (another reviewer) mentioned some pain points about this story that I can relate with after seeing 38 chapters. I don't know if the author is a new writer( I did not bother checking) but world building is not well-thought out. I was also hoping the MC would not be going through repeated suffering, but my not-so-high-expectations will be met. Also, the author the author's "smart" plans are retarded. Whether antagonist or MC. The way the author writes them like they're groundbreaking makes me laugh However, the story itself is not bad. Just, it's not something I like to read. It reminds me of the KR tropes where the MC set his sights sky high, and because of plot, he barely meets them when the time comes. And he's either on the brink of death afterwards, or he achieves it with one trick pony skills. Could also be both. I find these extremely annoying.
Decent novel. But the Author trying to get us to sympathize with the Tyrant was unnecessary. Just felt like the author didn't want the female character to be an actual Tyrant. Even though the Kingdom is justified in worrying that her outdated methods will lead the kingdom to ruin. The author tries to paint this as wrong.
Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.
Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
The rating is heavily influenced by the fact that the author killed off 2 of my favorite side characters and has some random guy carrying around their bodies in his shadow for over 150 chapters. I have a lot of other complaints, like the constant ridiculous increases and decreases the author makes to the MC, which I consider unnecessary nerfs, or the fact that the author completely disregards one of his elements entirely for 220+ chapters (void). Mc doesn't even use some of his skills anymore, over 200 chapters and he's only at apprentice rank with a few of his elements. This is honestly the first time I've seen someone remain pathetic even with a system. Overall, the story was good at first, but it's become quite boring, confusing, and redundant. The pacing is all over the place and I'm starting to think the author dislikes the mc. The romance tag is completely useless since from what I've seen the mc has absolutely no interests in any of the great love interests introduced. One of the "love interests" is currently dead and rotting in a shadow , The other was just sent to her death-bed due to the mc's foolish decision to manipulate her actions using the trust she had for him , and the other 2 has had zero progress other than their initial meeting. 3/5 stars at best.
The main character was already under constant debuff for 100+ chapters and the author just decided, " You know what? Why don't I nerf an already weak mc as soon as he gets a little strength?" AND FKING REDUCED HIS ALREADY MINISCULE GOD BLOOD BY HALF.
Damn, I had a lot of fun reading this! Great job, author—you did an amazing job. I'm really looking forward to the new chapters!
Genuinely one of the better extra novels out there the plot isn’t predictable in the slightest and the mc has to work crazy hard to achieve what others can in an instant (I love the untalented mc troupe it’s way more interesting to see a mc beat talent with hard work) . I hope the author never drops im also curious who the fmc will be (hopefully elizbeath but that’s just my opinion) well anyways to anyone checking reviews give it a go its a really interesting novel
I love your novel, keep it up don't stop. Keep writing with the same passion and creativity I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
This novel is truly one of my favorites, and I absolutely love it! To all the readers currently following this story, I urge you not to drop it—it's a must-read! The journey becomes even more rewarding as you progress through the latest chapters, and the way the story unfolds is nothing short of amazing. To the author, I have to say—kudos on an incredible job, especially for your first time writing! The world-building is thoroughly planned and feels immersive, while the power system is unique and well thought out. The plot is far from boring—it’s engaging, dynamic, and keeps you hooked chapter after chapter. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece in the making, and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. Keep up the phenomenal work! Please, don’t drop this novel or go on a long hiatus! This story has so much potential, and your dedication is appreciated by readers like me. Keep up the amazing work—we can’t wait to see where you take us next!
This novel is DEFINITELY 5 stars compared to other novels on this site. The story flows so well and makes so much sense. Everything is connected and sometimes the author drops little hints that will make sense a hundred chapters later and that's where you find out how incredibly good the plot is. It has the R-18 tag and that might scare away some people, but I promise you. This is a proper story with fleshed out characters. with motives and feelings and personalities. Update stability is great. We get two chapters a day and sometimes more. The power system is unique, detailed yet easy to understand. All in all, I think this story is one of the great ones and it has the potential to reach great heights. The only problem with it is the grammar. It's not that bad but author often types off words for example. Trail instead of trial and stuff like that.
Just keep going bro. Please just never drop this quality and never compromise with your own intention for any fucks request or something. Just 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍 👌 👍
Eldeel (another reviewer) mentioned some pain points about this story that I can relate with after seeing 38 chapters. I don't know if the author is a new writer( I did not bother checking) but world building is not well-thought out. I was also hoping the MC would not be going through repeated suffering, but my not-so-high-expectations will be met. Also, the author the author's "smart" plans are retarded. Whether antagonist or MC. The way the author writes them like they're groundbreaking makes me laugh However, the story itself is not bad. Just, it's not something I like to read. It reminds me of the KR tropes where the MC set his sights sky high, and because of plot, he barely meets them when the time comes. And he's either on the brink of death afterwards, or he achieves it with one trick pony skills. Could also be both. I find these extremely annoying.
Decent novel. But the Author trying to get us to sympathize with the Tyrant was unnecessary. Just felt like the author didn't want the female character to be an actual Tyrant. Even though the Kingdom is justified in worrying that her outdated methods will lead the kingdom to ruin. The author tries to paint this as wrong.
Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.