Uzumaki: I can comprehend anything

LV 14

Banbam11

The concept is good but the writing is so trash

LV 15

Firelord

the story is pretty good, but the writing I really bad. still readable

LV 4

captainfatbelly

Uzumaki: I Can't Comprehend Anything This story needs someone to proof read or GPT

LV 1

Lirg_Yob

This story is fanfic of a fanfic, weak. I read a similar plot where Mc ask for mass shadow clone and shadow explosion; using gorilla tactic, hit and run, and night harrasment tactic.

LV 4

Zed1_Eren_

why the heck Chinese people are obsessed with child soldiers. This could have been entertaining if not for child soldiers and child mc

LV 13

Terminator123

I hate chinese novel and fanfiction. webnovel is full of this garbage

LV 5

Kirdua

Good try but the translation is very poor the story is mildly interesting I doubt the translator will go back and fix any of the many errors In the spelling

LV 3

HORJWLAI

Overall, a good story which can be great. Just the author needs to upgrade the writing skills & for that 1 star is cut-off. All The Best.

LV 14

Zarosian

impossible to read without getting a headache.... It's legible, but almost every paragraph is messed up. It's obviously translated quite poorly.

LV 3

PoopieBooty

Was a cool premise at first but it just turns into kingdombuilding shit

LV 13

Black_Book0990

the English is a pain to read. the story is good, but the number of mistakes and those of those types that actually confuse people while reading make it a suffering to read. please use grammarly or something to fix your text

LV 4

Shirokendama

As much as I'd love to give this book the highest rating, could you at least try to improve its quality. You're still a novice when it comes to translating, hell i can't even read this fanfiction🤦🤦

LV 14

Destiny_henry_1762

love the story, The only problem is I can't stand the writing

LV 4

Lizrock

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LV 14

Kamui02

its a good story but has few words by chapters and It has a slow update but its still a good read [img=recommend][img=thinking]

LV 5

Rak

the story is good but the writing is really really bad. author desperately needs a simple editor like Grammarly to fix spelling and grammer mistakes. Does anyone know name of original ? please share

LV 4

Sage_Hussein

You really need help in making a proper grammar

LV 14

Dovah_Destroyer

good story but my guy please use spell check

LV 14

GonadSmasher08

is this work has just been re-uploaded? feels like it because the way the chapters are being updated. if you look pass the many errors in grammar, names and spelling (though not headache inducing) it is quite a good read. there are few parts that needed more focus and more details.example is on how did he created the jutsus. some parts doesn't need two paragraphs to be explain, like the classification of ninja.

LV 1

Ronaldo_Angeliski

qual é o nome original?