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great fic. if you love op mc with an intresting power ups and a good plot. then i recommend reading it
yo the synopsis managed to make my brain short-circuit. it made me remember a riddle that took me at least 30 minutes to solve. the riddle goes from two skeletons where one was pointing to another and a sign that says ' This person beside me is Bla Bla Bla who is this person to me?'. that's all i can remember. This memory was from way back and it caused me to be detached from the present for a moment. really needed that tho, no good riddle since then, with Riddler in Arkham and all. F#@k you Batman!!! Anyway, I haven't started reading yet. i hope it's good, never got a really good read with Percy Jackson FF. I hope this one is not Among Us (Sorry)... is not among those that have been a disappointment. Giving a 5 star for the experience from just reading the synopsis.
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Just wow your story is just as good as the others your making keep up the good work 👍🏻
This is an interesting story it takes a long time to find a good story, and this has potential.
It was doing good, until the Mc spend 8 chapters just crafting and doing boring things, and suddenly after that he became a r@pist just like Zeus that he wants to destroy... As always, just an hipocrit mc...
It’s been a fun read so far. The author takes various ideas and put their spin on them: I’ve enjoyed that story and the main character is a riot. All I’ve got to say is just give it a chance, you might find yourself enjoying it more than you thought.
Just reading starting few chapters was enough for me to conclude that this is own of the favourite fanfic hope that autor doesn't drop this masterpiece
sure good enough I never thought I would be blown away had doubts but the author blew me away like mad
Now I may be biased as I've followed this author for a long time, but I genuinely like what's happening so far. It is still early, the MC Constantine is just now getting his feet off the ground. I am worried how involved the rest of the Pantheons will be though, I did come to read a PJO fanfic. I can understand taking thing from other Pantheons to strengthen himself and his subordinates, I just hope it doesn't distract from the main goal of the story. I am wondering what Constantine will do with Luke, Percy, Thalia, Annabeth, Nico, Bianca, Leo, Piper, Hank, and Hazel. They are the most powerful demigods of the current Era (I know Hazel is still dead). The thing I'm most looking forward to however is him growing his undead army and the Reactions to his Rebellion and his rising power. Ngl, I kinda hope Hestia sides with him and Hades. Considering how much harm the Olympian side of her family has done to each other and the world.
I can't lie I've been loving all your stories so far, but this one is my favourite, might be because the series is my favorite, kuup up the great work. now if only I could find a half decent Eragon fic.
I think it's going great. you're doing a great job. With stable updates so far. He has a pretty good personality. You could definitely explore l with his family, more like his family gonna join him on his adventures, and the Goddess of victory Nike make an appearance. Will hecates parents make an appearance. or something
The book is unique as well written. I look forward to reading more about the world and the original characters
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Great story and it hasn’t even got to canon yet. The author is definitely a talented writer with good story telling skills. I can’t wait to read more and see where this amazing story goes.
great overall story very much enjoy how he uses his powers..........................................
I like this story it's good all around I only have 2 problems with it which are both minor and don't detract from the story. It so far seems like it's one of those stories where his main women is gonna be his mom Hecate. Personally would've preferred his OC demi-god friend the daughter of Vidar or even Medusa since rider Medusa is my weakness. The other thing is his attachment to this shotgun, but I just personally don't care for guns in Fantasy stories...but not my story so I'll just get over the Hecate and shotgun situation eventually.
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I mean this isn’t really surprising since bros work is always this quality and attention grabbing so another one for the library 💯
The story is growing at a great pace. There is info of what is happening without it being slow or too fast. I’m excited to see where this story leads!
Amazing work as always, you seem to hit that sweet spot with likeable MC's. I never get annoyed at the way they act or the way the story seems to be going.(Wow that sounds super pretentious) Anyways love your work, and would reccomened it to anyone who wants to read a fantastic story, with fleshed out characters and awesome world building. Plus 5/5 because MC is cool 😊 P.s. You also update amazingly quick and frequently at that.
I liked how author unintentionally made a second coming Ichigo, though everything is good so far
great fic. if you love op mc with an intresting power ups and a good plot. then i recommend reading it
yo the synopsis managed to make my brain short-circuit. it made me remember a riddle that took me at least 30 minutes to solve. the riddle goes from two skeletons where one was pointing to another and a sign that says ' This person beside me is Bla Bla Bla who is this person to me?'. that's all i can remember. This memory was from way back and it caused me to be detached from the present for a moment. really needed that tho, no good riddle since then, with Riddler in Arkham and all. F#@k you Batman!!! Anyway, I haven't started reading yet. i hope it's good, never got a really good read with Percy Jackson FF. I hope this one is not Among Us (Sorry)... is not among those that have been a disappointment. Giving a 5 star for the experience from just reading the synopsis.
Ihahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Just wow your story is just as good as the others your making keep up the good work 👍🏻
This is an interesting story it takes a long time to find a good story, and this has potential.
It was doing good, until the Mc spend 8 chapters just crafting and doing boring things, and suddenly after that he became a r@pist just like Zeus that he wants to destroy... As always, just an hipocrit mc...
It’s been a fun read so far. The author takes various ideas and put their spin on them: I’ve enjoyed that story and the main character is a riot. All I’ve got to say is just give it a chance, you might find yourself enjoying it more than you thought.
Just reading starting few chapters was enough for me to conclude that this is own of the favourite fanfic hope that autor doesn't drop this masterpiece
sure good enough I never thought I would be blown away had doubts but the author blew me away like mad
Now I may be biased as I've followed this author for a long time, but I genuinely like what's happening so far. It is still early, the MC Constantine is just now getting his feet off the ground. I am worried how involved the rest of the Pantheons will be though, I did come to read a PJO fanfic. I can understand taking thing from other Pantheons to strengthen himself and his subordinates, I just hope it doesn't distract from the main goal of the story. I am wondering what Constantine will do with Luke, Percy, Thalia, Annabeth, Nico, Bianca, Leo, Piper, Hank, and Hazel. They are the most powerful demigods of the current Era (I know Hazel is still dead). The thing I'm most looking forward to however is him growing his undead army and the Reactions to his Rebellion and his rising power. Ngl, I kinda hope Hestia sides with him and Hades. Considering how much harm the Olympian side of her family has done to each other and the world.
I can't lie I've been loving all your stories so far, but this one is my favourite, might be because the series is my favorite, kuup up the great work. now if only I could find a half decent Eragon fic.
I think it's going great. you're doing a great job. With stable updates so far. He has a pretty good personality. You could definitely explore l with his family, more like his family gonna join him on his adventures, and the Goddess of victory Nike make an appearance. Will hecates parents make an appearance. or something
The book is unique as well written. I look forward to reading more about the world and the original characters
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Great story and it hasn’t even got to canon yet. The author is definitely a talented writer with good story telling skills. I can’t wait to read more and see where this amazing story goes.
great overall story very much enjoy how he uses his powers..........................................
I like this story it's good all around I only have 2 problems with it which are both minor and don't detract from the story. It so far seems like it's one of those stories where his main women is gonna be his mom Hecate. Personally would've preferred his OC demi-god friend the daughter of Vidar or even Medusa since rider Medusa is my weakness. The other thing is his attachment to this shotgun, but I just personally don't care for guns in Fantasy stories...but not my story so I'll just get over the Hecate and shotgun situation eventually.
揭示劇透 I mean this isn’t really surprising since bros work is always this quality and attention grabbing so another one for the library 💯
The story is growing at a great pace. There is info of what is happening without it being slow or too fast. I’m excited to see where this story leads!
Amazing work as always, you seem to hit that sweet spot with likeable MC's. I never get annoyed at the way they act or the way the story seems to be going.(Wow that sounds super pretentious) Anyways love your work, and would reccomened it to anyone who wants to read a fantastic story, with fleshed out characters and awesome world building. Plus 5/5 because MC is cool 😊 P.s. You also update amazingly quick and frequently at that.
I liked how author unintentionally made a second coming Ichigo, though everything is good so far