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My Elf System

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作者: PhoenixAsh

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Orion was on his way back home from work.

He was hurrying back home to take a nap while planning how he would spend his weekend as well, but while he was lost in thought, a truck suddenly appeared out of nowhere and the last thing he remembered was the truck barreling towards him before everything around him turned dark.

However to his surprise, he didn’t feel any pain after having the accident. In fact, he couldn’t see anything.

Everything around him seemed dark but when he opened his mouth to speak, he heard the gurgling sounds of a baby.

Noticing that the one sounding like a baby was him, Orion tried to open his eyes to know exactly where he was, but when he did, the first thing his eyes fell upon was a stunning beautiful elf, holding him with the most tenderest of care.

Not only was she his mother, she was also a queen as well and she had a beautiful sister who adored him just as much as his mother.

Aside from this, Orion also noticed he had received a system which allowed him to grow and evolve faster than a normal High Elf but after finding out the huge role his mother played in eradicating the war between all races, Orion vowed to live a happy and fulfilling life with his mother, aunt and a few others he cared a lot about.

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Lucky0_0

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

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Valyrxa
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Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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Wrathdg

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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Aayann_
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Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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Jordzfml

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

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ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

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Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

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Santy_Melay

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

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Magick
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I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

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Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

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Yueliang_Haizi

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

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HYDRASIR_GAMING

hey author! I have a few questions 1. did you drop this novel [ no uploades for many days(almost a month)] 2. how many fmc and going to be in MC's harem 3.if the novel is on hiatus then when will you start uploading again? *thanks for the reply in advance 🙂*

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Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

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Vengeful_Dragon

hi I would just like to know if you have dropped this novel?

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Sathish_Annarapu

It's the besttttt the story is good thanks for the author xD

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Angelic_Throne80

Loving the all round story please keep up the awesome story.

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TsukasaSirius

It is a really great mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life This book is really fun to read. It’s a Fantasy Slice of Life story that feels fresh and relaxing. The pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow—so it never gets boring or overwhelming. I really like how the characters are written. The relationships between the characters feel natural and enjoyable to follow. The world-building is also great, with lots of nice details that make the story more immersive without being too complicated. The writing is clear and easy to read, with no grammar issues. It’s a light and enjoyable novel, which makes it a nice change from other novels. I wish there were more books like this, with the perfect mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life. If you’re looking for a fun and relaxing read, I highly recommend this one!

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MonsterGirlHarem

I love this book. it's well written, it's mostly slice of life up to where I'm currently at which I'm perfectly happy with. there's some good spicy chapters. this is one of my favorite books currently and I will definitely keep reading it until it's completed. and if people start complaining about the content then piss off and read something else.

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卷 2 : Vol 2:- Noble Elf Tournament Arc

  1. 32
    32. New Skills. 7 months ago
  2. 33
    33. Aunt Elena Is Also Strong. 7 months ago
  3. 34
    34. Grimoire. 7 months ago
  4. 35
    35. Grimoire [2]. 6 months ago
  5. 36
    36. New Missions. 6 months ago
  6. 37
    37. Training:- Mage And Knight Ranking. 6 months ago
  7. 38
    38. Ten Years. 6 months ago
  8. 39
    39. Orion Makes A Promise With Mama. 6 months ago
  9. 40
    40. Mermaid Queen. 6 months ago
  10. 41
    41. System Third Stage. 6 months ago
  11. 42
    42. Noble Elf Tournament {NET}. 6 months ago
  12. 43
    43. NET {2}:- Mia Loves Master Too. 6 months ago
  13. 44
    44. NET {3}:- Day One. 6 months ago
  14. 45
    45. NET {4}:- Blaze Rats. 6 months ago
  15. 46
    46. NET {5}:- Mama Believes In Her Baby. 6 months ago
  16. 47
    47.NET {6}:- Finding The Prince. 6 months ago
  17. 48
    48. NET {7}:- I Love The Prince Too. 6 months ago
  18. 49
    49. NET {8}:- Second Phase Of The Tournament. 6 months ago
  19. 50
    50. NET {9}:-Mama Misses Her Baby So Much. 6 months ago
  20. 51
    51.NET {10}:- Archery. 6 months ago
  21. 52
    52. NET {11}:- Archery 2. 6 months ago
  22. 53
    53. NET {12}:- Coliseum. 6 months ago
  23. 54
    54. NET {13}:- Coliseum 2. 6 months ago
  24. 55
    55. NET {14}:- Battle. 6 months ago
  25. 56
    56. NET {15}:- Battle 2. 6 months ago
  26. 57
    57. NET {16}:- Moon Elf. 6 months ago
  27. 58
    58. NET {17}:- Day Three. 6 months ago
  28. 59
    59. NET {18}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom. 6 months ago
  29. 60
    60. NET {19}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom 2. 6 months ago
  30. 61
    61. NET {20}:- Mermaid Queen Arrives At The Elf Kingdom 3. 6 months ago
  31. 62
    62. NET {21}: Day Four. 6 months ago
  32. 63
    63. NET {22}. Junior Noble Elf Tournament Final. 6 months ago
  33. 64
    64. NET{23}. Junior Noble Elf Tournament Final 2. 6 months ago
  34. 65
    65. NET {24}. Rune Monarch. 6 months ago
  35. 66
    66. NET {25}:- Rune Monarch 2. 6 months ago
  36. 67
    67. NET {26}:- Rune Monarch 3. 6 months ago
  37. 68
    68. NET {27}:- Kami-No-Kai. 6 months ago
  38. 69
    69. NET {28]:- Day Five. 6 months ago
  39. 70
    70. NET {29}:- The Last Fight Of The Tournament. 6 months ago
  40. 71
    71. NET {30}:- Happy Reunion. 6 months ago

卷 4 : Fallen Angels Kingdom Arc

  1. 98
    98. Off To The Fallen Angels Kingdom. 5 months ago
  2. 99
    99. Entrance Ceremony. 5 months ago
  3. 100
    100. Lion Prince And Succubus Princess. 5 months ago
  4. 101
    101. Number One Enemy Of Men. 5 months ago
  5. 102
    102. Current Goals. 5 months ago
  6. 103
    103. Fallen Angels Past. 5 months ago
  7. 104
    104. Smart Bracelets. 5 months ago
  8. 105
    105. The Quadrants. 5 months ago
  9. 106
    106.Neil Hartman. 5 months ago
  10. 107
    107. Neil Hartman 2. 5 months ago
  11. 108
    108. First Night In The Academy. 5 months ago
  12. 109
    109. First Night In The Academy 2. 5 months ago
  13. 110
    110. What Time Is It? 5 months ago
  14. 111
    111. Biggest Pervert. 5 months ago
  15. 112
    112. Cardinal Aspects. 5 months ago
  16. 113
    113. Current Status. 5 months ago
  17. 114
    114. Child Of Mana. 5 months ago
  18. 115
    115. Bathing With Mia. 5 months ago
  19. 116
    116. Personal Maid. 5 months ago
  20. 117
    117. Grimclaw And The Goblin King’s Horn. 5 months ago
  21. 118
    118. Stealing The Headmistress. 5 months ago
  22. 119
    119. Stealing The Headmistress 2. 5 months ago
  23. 120
    120. Naughty Elf Priestess. 5 months ago
  24. 121
    121. Council Of Men Club. 5 months ago
  25. 122
    122. The Succubus Princess FC. 5 months ago
  26. 123
    123. Massage. 5 months ago
  27. 124
    124. Together With Aunt Elena. 5 months ago
  28. 125
    125. Together With Aunt Elena 2. 5 months ago
  29. 126
    126. Together With Aunt Elena 3. 5 months ago
  30. 127
    127. Class Registration. 4 months ago
  31. 128
    128. Professor Draco. 4 months ago
  32. 129
    129. Arthur And Aslan. 4 months ago
  33. 130
    130. Dahlia. 4 months ago
  34. 131
    131. Vanishing Runes. 4 months ago
  35. 132
    132. Dahlia Makes Friends. 4 months ago
  36. 133
    133. Phil Hartman’s Plan. 4 months ago
  37. 134
    134. The Horseman. 4 months ago
  38. 135
    135. Dinner With Mom, Aunt And Lucille. 4 months ago
  39. 136
    136. The Journal. 4 months ago
  40. 137
    137. Hell lions Attack. 4 months ago
  41. 138
    138. Discovering The Truth. 4 months ago
  42. 139
    139. Evelyn Chats With The Other Apex Mages. 4 months ago
  43. 140
    140. World Tree. 4 months ago
  44. 141
    141. Third Night. 4 months ago
  45. 142
    142. Third Night 2. 4 months ago
  46. 143
    143. A Great Morning. 4 months ago
  47. 144
    144. Watching A Movie With Mom And Aunt. 4 months ago
  48. 145
    145. Starving Women. 4 months ago
  49. 146
    146. Last Night Together In The Academy.. 4 months ago
  50. 147
    147. Last Night Together At The Academy 2. 4 months ago
  51. 148
    148. New Mission. 4 months ago
  52. 149
    149. Ways Of Ranking Up. 4 months ago
  53. 150
    150. Getting Ready For Class . 4 months ago
  54. 151
    151. Teasing My Cute Maid. 4 months ago
  55. 152
    152. Bonding With The Maid. 4 months ago
  56. 153
    153. Daisy Arrives In Class Late. 4 months ago
  57. 154
    154. Training. 4 months ago
  58. 155
    155. Training 2. 4 months ago
  59. 156
    156. One Against Three. 4 months ago
  60. 157
    157. Adrian Is A Coward. 4 months ago
  61. 158
    158. Sparring With Dahlia. 4 months ago
  62. 159
    159. Sparring With Dahlia 2. 4 months ago
  63. 160
    160. Dahlia’s Reward. 4 months ago
  64. 161
    161. Mia Isn’t Happy. 4 months ago
  65. 162
    162. Mia Notices Something Weird About Dahlia. 4 months ago
  66. 163
    163. Four Activity Clubs. 4 months ago
  67. 164
    164. Beast Taming Class. 4 months ago
  68. 165
    165. C-Rank Dungeon. 4 months ago
  69. 166
    166. Blind Swamp Monster. 4 months ago
  70. 167
    167. Swamp Wraith. 4 months ago
  71. 168
    168. Together With Professor Daisy. 4 months ago
  72. 169
    169. Skilled Artisan. 4 months ago
  73. 170
    170. A Weird Cow Girl. 4 months ago
  74. 171
    171. Ascension. 3 months ago

卷 5 : Activity Club Tournament Arc

  1. 172
    172. Ascension 2. 3 months ago
  2. 173
    173. Ariel Misses Her Cute Underlings. 3 months ago
  3. 174
    174. Guild Master. 3 months ago
  4. 175
    175. Crazy Fans. 3 months ago
  5. 176
    176. Weird Fans. 3 months ago
  6. 177
    177. Arena. 3 months ago
  7. 178
    178. Ariel Doesn’t Want To Arrive Late To The Tournament. 3 months ago
  8. 179
    179. Princess Lilith. 3 months ago
  9. 180
    180. Cutest Demon In The World. 3 months ago
  10. 181
    181. ACT:- Activity Club Tournament Officially Begins. 3 months ago
  11. 182
    182. ACT {2}:- Beast Taming Tournament. 3 months ago
  12. 183
    183. ACT {3}:- An Angry Phoenix. 3 months ago
  13. 184
    184. ACT {4}:- Taming The Phoenix. 3 months ago
  14. 185
    185. ACT {5}:- A Familiar Elf And His Family Supporting Their Prince. 3 months ago
  15. 186
    186. ACT {6}:- Aurora 3 months ago
  16. 187
    187. ACT {7}:- Unstoppable Aurora. 3 months ago
  17. 188
    188. ACT {8}:- Evelyn’s Voice. 3 months ago
  18. 189
    189. ACT {9}:- Flaming Hoop. 3 months ago
  19. 190
    190. ACT {10}:- Second Round. 3 months ago
  20. 191
    191. ACT {11}:- A Maid With A Dangerous Instinct. 3 months ago
  21. 192
    192. ACT {12}:- Orion Vs Lava Wyrms . 3 months ago
  22. 193
    193. ACT {13}:- Mia’s Naughty Idea. 3 months ago
  23. 194
    194. ACT {14}:- Tidal Wave Zone. 3 months ago
  24. 195
    195. ACT {15}:- A Lying Mermaid Queen. 3 months ago
  25. 196
    196. ACT {16}:- Terra Zone. 3 months ago
  26. 197
    197. ACT {17}:- Elf Boobies Are The Best. 3 months ago
  27. 198
    198. ACT {18}:- Orion And Aurora Vs Rock Golems And Rock Mutts. 3 months ago
  28. 199
    199. ACT {19}:- Storm Falcons. 3 months ago
  29. 200
    200. ACT {20}:- Mia's Naughty Idea Revealed.. 3 months ago
  30. 201
    201. ACT {21}:- Mia Cooks With Dahlia. 2 months ago
  31. 202
    202. ACT {22}:- Awkward Dance. 2 months ago

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