The Walking Dead: reborn as Carl

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But

It’s good only for the fact that this is based off my favorite show. Other than that this is shit, T-boy for Tdog, Moore for Merle and the Moore brothers instead of the Dixon brothers. Like I’m dead serious Derle Dixon name in this is Moore Moore.

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DaoistXlSNQT

it would of been a good fic if it wasn't for so many bad spelling and how the story is need a good amount of work

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immortalbook

the amount of misspellings is crazy.....

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book

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Cramon_autor

Eine der wenigen aber beste Fanfiktion von The walking dead jeden Tag warte ich auf ein neues Update. Wow eine Mega Story ein echt und logisch denkender MC und eine gute nicht zu schnell gehende Story bitte mehr🤗. One of the few but best fan fiction of The Walking Dead every day I wait for a new update. Wow a mega story a real and logical thinking MC and a good story that doesn't go too fast please more🤗.

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empire1

this is a good story, yes the editing could use some work but the translation quality is ok. Trying to be constructive. ## One easy thing that would massively improve the reading experience is getting the names right, I mean Merle and Shane are 2 of the most mentioned characters and I don't think there names have been correct once so far, its really takes me out of the immersive experience

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Cramon_autor

One of the few but best fan fiction of The Walking Dead every day I wait for a new update. Wow a mega story a real and logical thinking MC and a good story that doesn't go too fast please more🤗.

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Doffo

Faltan capítulos y hay algunos desordenados

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Humbuub

wrong names was a huge bummer. MC also refers to his mom as the Lori problem. Just right after he claimed there's no more 'Li Mo' and only Carl, then proceeds to dally on how to get rid of Lori so Shane survives. Updates are good.