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was originally good, but unfortunately, it's becoming a harem(the most annoying kind at that). if you don't mind that, you will enjoy this novel, but this is where peace out ✌️ (ch 230ish). ps, please add harem to the tags or something, it's a dealbreaker to many
the first hundred chapters were good, then it got kinda bad. Idk if it's me but compared to the author's other work, this was a massive downgrade at least in terms of characters and story progression. I feel that characters got their IQ nerfed to the ground and lots of things happen for dumb reasons. The only good thing about this novel is perhaps the world building and the MC, the rest is so-so at least for me.
Been a while since I wrote a review. this book compelled me to coz, it's fckng fantastic. it's up there with the legends of vmmrpg ROTSSG. it a pity if you haven't tried this book yet try it now.
Chapter 136 and 137 ruined it for me. He got a curse and became a slave to a evil god, the evil god somehow got access to his inner crystal which makes him respawns when he dies but since the evil god destroyed it he gets no 2nd chances. He now has to follow the evil gods requests.
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Author crafts beautiful and original worlds . This is worth reading just to get a glimpse of his imagination. Granted it follows a couple standard troupes. Gaining real life abilities through VR and being a regressor. Updating stability so far is constant, but he also dropped his last novel after 500ch so I wouldnt hold your breath. First 100ch were solid. After that the Author has thrown several Deux ex Machina for little reason along with overpowered skills right after the tutorial. Similiar to his previous work it feels rushed. Character development is minimal and its impossible to know what the MC is thinking as the only thing he does is suppress his emotions. The positive aspect is he isn't a simp or a good for nothing and manages to progress the story by being OP and knowing the future. A lot of young master vibes; people act more like NPCs than the actual NPCs. The grammar is bad. Every time rank is mentioned it's "As S-ranker" or "He's A-Ranker". Author doesn't seem to know how to use english articles. And there are examples of this in every chapter. Other then that the spelling is good.
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A good read! Although haven’t read much but I feel like this one’s gonna be good. Will read it soon🙌🏻 And, Do check out my book “I Became Super Rich, After Discovering A MiniWorld In My Bookcase” Thank You😬😬🙏🙏
fantastic, bought third tier privilege (first time i spend more than 50 coins on privilege)
It’s a great novel up to date with the latest chapters got to say the power gains is really slow it’s written different from other books and has a good style
I have done video game relates novels before, but this one will be quite different. I am quite excited to continue writing this, and I hope you all will enjoy it.
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Hello, I am creating a writers first platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and contests at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels.com), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. There are no contracts involved and writers maintain full ownership and control of their stories. I hope to see you there!
The premise is good and the author always makes good works but I would like to know if Martial Online is on hiatus or has been dropped because I don't know if this will happen with this work too
Babe, Wake the author of White online has just dropped a new Banger! . memes aside, the premise of the story is promising with a revenge story motivation I just hope that this will be executed well.
Your novels are always great can’t wait to see what u have in stored for this one!!!
If your gonna trust any review trust this one. The grammar is simply atrocius . Might just be a bad translation , but im 20 chapters in and my brain hurts. The pacing is also horrendous. All that said i will read to at least chapter 100 in respect to all my fellow weebs reviews who at this moment seem misguided. Will update
was originally good, but unfortunately, it's becoming a harem(the most annoying kind at that). if you don't mind that, you will enjoy this novel, but this is where peace out ✌️ (ch 230ish). ps, please add harem to the tags or something, it's a dealbreaker to many
the first hundred chapters were good, then it got kinda bad. Idk if it's me but compared to the author's other work, this was a massive downgrade at least in terms of characters and story progression. I feel that characters got their IQ nerfed to the ground and lots of things happen for dumb reasons. The only good thing about this novel is perhaps the world building and the MC, the rest is so-so at least for me.
Been a while since I wrote a review. this book compelled me to coz, it's fckng fantastic. it's up there with the legends of vmmrpg ROTSSG. it a pity if you haven't tried this book yet try it now.
Chapter 136 and 137 ruined it for me. He got a curse and became a slave to a evil god, the evil god somehow got access to his inner crystal which makes him respawns when he dies but since the evil god destroyed it he gets no 2nd chances. He now has to follow the evil gods requests.
揭示劇透 Author crafts beautiful and original worlds . This is worth reading just to get a glimpse of his imagination. Granted it follows a couple standard troupes. Gaining real life abilities through VR and being a regressor. Updating stability so far is constant, but he also dropped his last novel after 500ch so I wouldnt hold your breath. First 100ch were solid. After that the Author has thrown several Deux ex Machina for little reason along with overpowered skills right after the tutorial. Similiar to his previous work it feels rushed. Character development is minimal and its impossible to know what the MC is thinking as the only thing he does is suppress his emotions. The positive aspect is he isn't a simp or a good for nothing and manages to progress the story by being OP and knowing the future. A lot of young master vibes; people act more like NPCs than the actual NPCs. The grammar is bad. Every time rank is mentioned it's "As S-ranker" or "He's A-Ranker". Author doesn't seem to know how to use english articles. And there are examples of this in every chapter. Other then that the spelling is good.
揭示劇透 A good read! Although haven’t read much but I feel like this one’s gonna be good. Will read it soon🙌🏻 And, Do check out my book “I Became Super Rich, After Discovering A MiniWorld In My Bookcase” Thank You😬😬🙏🙏
fantastic, bought third tier privilege (first time i spend more than 50 coins on privilege)
It’s a great novel up to date with the latest chapters got to say the power gains is really slow it’s written different from other books and has a good style
I have done video game relates novels before, but this one will be quite different. I am quite excited to continue writing this, and I hope you all will enjoy it.
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Hello, I am creating a writers first platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and contests at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels.com), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. There are no contracts involved and writers maintain full ownership and control of their stories. I hope to see you there!
The premise is good and the author always makes good works but I would like to know if Martial Online is on hiatus or has been dropped because I don't know if this will happen with this work too
Babe, Wake the author of White online has just dropped a new Banger! . memes aside, the premise of the story is promising with a revenge story motivation I just hope that this will be executed well.
Your novels are always great can’t wait to see what u have in stored for this one!!!
If your gonna trust any review trust this one. The grammar is simply atrocius . Might just be a bad translation , but im 20 chapters in and my brain hurts. The pacing is also horrendous. All that said i will read to at least chapter 100 in respect to all my fellow weebs reviews who at this moment seem misguided. Will update