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This is honestly a very good Take on the Moraly Good MC that does what he feels is Right without Reward in Mind, Love how the Author is listening to critique and asking for ideeas
this is a good book with great potential I hope author can keep this pace up good luck
I think you should redo the fanfic, using what you already have as a guide and expanding the story a bit more since it feels very rushed and not very fluid. Also, try to make the characters interact better with each other, because from my perspective, the interactions between the characters feel like an NPC conversation from Oblivion—they seem unnatural and weird.
This is honestly a very good Take on the Moraly Good MC that does what he feels is Right without Reward in Mind, Love how the Author is listening to critique and asking for ideeas
this is a good book with great potential I hope author can keep this pace up good luck
I think you should redo the fanfic, using what you already have as a guide and expanding the story a bit more since it feels very rushed and not very fluid. Also, try to make the characters interact better with each other, because from my perspective, the interactions between the characters feel like an NPC conversation from Oblivion—they seem unnatural and weird.