/ Anime & Comics / yu-gi-oh: I have a stand deck?!
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Jonah kamijo was an avid lover of yugioh and all things anime ,he would go to tournaments and play to be the real life king of games,even winning a couple world championships,even winning the 2024 world championship.
but like all good things come to an end,due to a scandal stating that he cheated in every tournament by the opponent in the finals who bribed the judges and staff,he was ousted by the world of competitive card games.
three years have passed
now feeling like he had no purpose he decides to off himself (don’t know if we are allowed to say kill himself or commit suicide),but decides to read the final chapter of his favorite manga series,jojo bizarre adventures.
but before he could off himself after reading his manga,an earthquake happens throwing a teenage girl off the bridge they both were on,and in a final act of bravery he saves the girl not knowing she was a goddess,who decides to grant him a chance to play yugioh again,but she decides to give him a system that gives him stand cards instead of regular yugioh cards.
but as he is about to be reborn she gives Jonah one final surprise,he gets the body of jotaro kujo.
now watch as he makes friends,makes lovers(yandere oc characters),and shows the world what a true duelist looks like.
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寫檢討I think you should redo the fanfic, using what you already have as a guide and expanding the story a bit more since it feels very rushed and not very fluid. Also, try to make the characters interact better with each other, because from my perspective, the interactions between the characters feel like an NPC conversation from Oblivion—they seem unnatural and weird.
pls keep making it. Is th we the best thing I have read in a while!!