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your history is great!! please continue it until the end!!I love how you have focused a lot on the musical aspect in the story and its creative process, which helps to feel the internal development of the characters. [img=recommend]
I really like this book but I was wondering what happened to your mha: izuku legacy book bro, it was so good and it had so much potential and now it’s not even on webnovel anymore, I really liked reading it and even if you’re not going to update it can you at least put it back on webnovel
There are too many exaggerated words. If it were just a few, I might still enjoy the story. However, when an entire paragraph is filled with over-the-top expressions, it becomes annoying. Combined with a slow-paced plot, it makes for an uncomfortable reading experience. I am interested in this story, but your writing style needs improvement. I am not a writer, so I can't offer helpful tips and tricks for writing. However, this is my honest opinion after reading several chapters of your story.
The story up to really good start, I hope you can include more Japanese song in the future but overall very good story!!!!! I need moreeeeeee!! Please update T_T
please contiinue!!! the hystory is great!!! i love it and you hability for encarnate the personality of the characters is incredible and real good work!!
Good novel, btw is this inspired by (The Betrayed Hero and the Idol) ? in ff, net i can somewhat see the inspiration but still unsure.. but yeah pretty good novel
One of my favorite Oshi no Ko fanfics I've seen so far, first chapter had some weird writing in it but it was all fixed by chapter 2 anyway.
I don't have an expectation but color me surprised, this novel is a blast. It's so wholesome that it's making me smile while reading. I hope you won't ruin it by pulling a Gege on us, i have a high hopes on this.
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Really good story, so far how it going! Author create a lovely and interesting interactions between characters. We need more chapters!
It's really good but my only problem is that the romance is rushed a lot. We should've seen more scenes of them hanging out and slowly falling in love. Not only that I feel like Ruby and Aqua accepted him too quickly, especially Ruby. Good story just rushed. 7/10
Finally something worth reading 🤩 Highly recommend it guys only 7 chaps but it’s fresh
Really good cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shameless 5 star review here… It’s my first novel so hopefully you guys enjoy it!
I can’t leave a review right now because theirs is only one chapter, but I can’t wait for more.
You spent the first couple chapters showing how his life was miserable and how he used art as an escape from that hell then it became disappointing when he met Ai the way the story is going, he took a backseat to his success. It seems like when he died all his motivation left him. Instead of regaining that fire and aiming at achieving success he decided to become a supporting character for Ai.
揭示劇透 your history is great!! please continue it until the end!!I love how you have focused a lot on the musical aspect in the story and its creative process, which helps to feel the internal development of the characters. [img=recommend]
I really like this book but I was wondering what happened to your mha: izuku legacy book bro, it was so good and it had so much potential and now it’s not even on webnovel anymore, I really liked reading it and even if you’re not going to update it can you at least put it back on webnovel
There are too many exaggerated words. If it were just a few, I might still enjoy the story. However, when an entire paragraph is filled with over-the-top expressions, it becomes annoying. Combined with a slow-paced plot, it makes for an uncomfortable reading experience. I am interested in this story, but your writing style needs improvement. I am not a writer, so I can't offer helpful tips and tricks for writing. However, this is my honest opinion after reading several chapters of your story.
The story up to really good start, I hope you can include more Japanese song in the future but overall very good story!!!!! I need moreeeeeee!! Please update T_T
please contiinue!!! the hystory is great!!! i love it and you hability for encarnate the personality of the characters is incredible and real good work!!
Good novel, btw is this inspired by (The Betrayed Hero and the Idol) ? in ff, net i can somewhat see the inspiration but still unsure.. but yeah pretty good novel
One of my favorite Oshi no Ko fanfics I've seen so far, first chapter had some weird writing in it but it was all fixed by chapter 2 anyway.
I don't have an expectation but color me surprised, this novel is a blast. It's so wholesome that it's making me smile while reading. I hope you won't ruin it by pulling a Gege on us, i have a high hopes on this.
Amazing , more more more more[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really good story, so far how it going! Author create a lovely and interesting interactions between characters. We need more chapters!
It's really good but my only problem is that the romance is rushed a lot. We should've seen more scenes of them hanging out and slowly falling in love. Not only that I feel like Ruby and Aqua accepted him too quickly, especially Ruby. Good story just rushed. 7/10
Finally something worth reading 🤩 Highly recommend it guys only 7 chaps but it’s fresh
Really good cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shameless 5 star review here… It’s my first novel so hopefully you guys enjoy it!
I can’t leave a review right now because theirs is only one chapter, but I can’t wait for more.
You spent the first couple chapters showing how his life was miserable and how he used art as an escape from that hell then it became disappointing when he met Ai the way the story is going, he took a backseat to his success. It seems like when he died all his motivation left him. Instead of regaining that fire and aiming at achieving success he decided to become a supporting character for Ai.
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