HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic

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Mu_Shin

Overall, this novel has great grammar, fluid caracter interactions, and a solid plot. As you'll learn in the 1st chapter, the mc starts in Harry's 4th year with no recollection of his life as a wizard. Why and how he was transported remains obscure, and is something that I hope is addressed further in the novel. Similarly, the way the mc uses magic is abnormal for the HP world. (minor spoiler ahead) He uses a form of wandless magic that seems to allow him complete freedom of how to use it (no fancy wand waving, no speaking). Additionally, he starts with light Occulemcy. He joins up with the Golden Trio and gets sorted into Gryffindor, but is more Ravenclaw oriented (Hat said it not me). He seems good natured, not particularly greedy or lustful, and is shown to pay back favors. The love interest seems to be Hermione, but could be Luna. I should also mention that the mc is hesitant to flirt with Hermione cuz he thinks he would be NTRing Ron. Speaking of Ron, this is not for Ron haters. The author does of great job of redeeming Ron, and making him an enjoyable character. Read as of Chapter 20, so Story Development and World Background are only graded as of right now. P.S.: my grading is 5 5 4 4 5

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_DEKIM_

The beginning was great but chapter 2 was as if the author threw the novel in the trash.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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There are so many great stories you could have lifted from talented authors, but you took one of mine? Haha! I suppose I should be flattered, but there are much better choices out there if you're trying to swindle unsuspecting readers to subscribing to your Patreon. For anybody else, I named it A Curse of Truth on fanfiction dot net...might be easier to read there. If any of you speak Russian, there was a guy who asked me if he could translate it, and he fixed a couple errors that I'm pretty sure I didn't go back and fix, so that version might even be a little better if you can find it haha.

LV 4

LastGod

i dont know what the MC looks like. I hate MC name. How in the hell will MC make up 4 YEARS of classes in one year. This is just a weak inconsequential MC that does nothing to make the story better for harry and the trio. It looks like hes only there to suffer.

LV 4

transcribed_master

I have just read the first two chapters at the time of this review. It has made me laugh and it is easy to stay engaged in the story. If this story keeps the same type of energy throughout the whole story I can see this becoming one of my favorites. Here's to a great start to a story and hopefully an awesome journey.

LV 4

JTGTitan_96

Is what people in the comments say true? Is this a weird love triangle? Haven't read it fully (obviously) Will change the review as I get my answer.

LV 11

Changen4125

Really fun and really good. There is some teen drama with the romance, but you are also writing about teens, so you are gonna get teen drama. MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR

LV 4

Lucinda_Hacker

I love the MC and his personality and it makes me wonder if the Author based it off their own!

LV 4

LazyReaderAlways

Some things get weird eventually. But it was fun to read. I have enjoyed almost every chapter. It’s 90 percent awesome. 5 percent bad and 5 percent cringy. So, no need to worry about the weird stuff. This is a fun cozy story. No need to hesitate to read it.

LV 4

Xohjuu

dude this is so funny and well written, I love it. Definitely one of the best hp fanfics I've read

LV 11

Changen4125

GOOOOOOD. MC is a troll, massive troll. Which makes this novel very GOOOOD. lol Now, he just needs to accept his Hermione and Daphne in his heart.

LV 13

ENDWALKER

the best, enough said. love the other ff too,