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developing a kekei genkai a wood release at that in only 6 month without any technique related scroll? doesn't make any sense. it's better to developing his basic transformation chakra first. what a disappointment
Un excelente fanfic de Naruto 👌🏻 puede que tenga un harem pero su relación entre ellos no se siente engorrosa ni molesta 👍🏻 es genial que desarrolle temas más profundos e incógnitas que no se vieron o abordaron en el original, su gramática y traducción es de buena calidad solo espero que haya un salto de tiempo ya que se siente un poco raro que el MC físicamente de 10 años esté tan op 😅 Ya de por sí se puso más interesante al planear cazar a todos los otsutsuki de los mundos paralelos y con su habilidad tiene la posibilidad de viajar a otros universos 🤙🏻
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La verdad esta historia hasta el capitulo 67 antes del primer lemon estaba bien tenia un buen sentido a la historia estaba god con el mc op y todo la vaina pero después de esto ya no quería leerlo la verdad no me gusta y no me va a gustar esa mrd de los clones lo veo horrible la verdad entiendo que si es un harem y necesita tiempo para cada waifu pero naaaa hermano no me gusto nada esos lemones la verdad, la historia es buena pero como digo después del primer lemon no lo seguiria leyendo.
Sometimes the MC acts mature, as expected of someone who receives a whole lifetime of memories from reincarnation. And sometimes he acts like a little kid, according to his physical age... I hate those kinds of fanfics. Anyway, this here feels more like a slice of life type of novel, instead of action and training type of Naruto fanfic. I got bored after the first 15 chapters and dropped it. I don't mean to say it's a bad type of slice of life but I simply didn't like it.
The story is great so far. I'm enjoying the story and can't wait to read more..............................................................................
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You can read this if your bored, Very Generic, Have System ✔️ Reincarnated ✔️ Harem ✔️ Mc to Op ✔️ if your like me who read 100+ naruto fanfics. it gets pretty boring but if your new and did not read a lot of naruto fanfic you might like this.
In my opinion, it would be better if this novel is told from Kazutora's point of view (POV). Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel.
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when I saw the perks, I knew. Why even write? Might as well roll the credits, MC won.
The writing quality is pretty good, but the plot is exceedingly slow and boring in my opinion. Ended up dropping because the author decided to develop romance with prepubescent MC rather than waiting for the academy or afterwards. I know the MC is reincarnated but kurenai and others aren’t so it was really distasteful.
good story, the writing is good and the relationships advance at a logical pace, it's also good that there isn't a plot or something like that. Aside from that, it would be good if the children's arc did not last long, that is why not many like to read about reincarnation and more transmigration because it is not very interesting to read about a child giving shame and little action where in a world like Naruto action is a priority and not so much for since on life.
It's time to adjust the review after reading all the available chapters, I can confidently say. This story is similar to the other 80% of fanfics on each other, here at the moment you will not see anything new. Namely: the same decisions of characters, the same female cast, absolutely stable (monotonous) built characters. The main character, stably strong not having any resistance in achieving power, a set of techniques and reinforcements monotonous, stably banal, a complete lack of originality, starting from the notorious element of wood, ending with the banal body of a sage, the only thing that pleased is his character (so far). 1. The update speed is excellent. 2. The quality of the writing is good, 3. Character design is monotonous, lacks originality. 4. Plot development is consistently mediocre (nothing new, so far). Conclusion: read if you just need to kill time. But keep in mind here you will not see anything new, you will always seem that you have already seen it.
Will come comeback ones there are at least 80 chaps Author has to many fics below that number
I don’t really think the author grasp the personality of most of the characters besides the oc and just kinda seems like characters react a certain way that’s off putting, also there’s a lack in story progression. Kinda feels like a slow paced au
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the plot is on life support , it’s not realistic towards the show or manga , he pulls a lot of bs outta nowhere , blames any knowledge he shouldn’t have on his dead parents, horrid grammar, it’s a good idea with a lazy follow through like most Naruto fanfics
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I don't know. I mean, part of me wants to read this, but another part knows it's only a matter of time before you abandon this story like you do with your others, so yeah....
the MC was born to practice taijutsu and ninjutsu with his gifts, but the author made him waste time with genjutsu, the author but still the fanfic is very fun, it skips over the MC's childhood, it's very boring when he's a child
Faz Naruto fêmea feminino para não ter dois protagonista homenshahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahah
another decently written story ruined by sexual deviance, harems and paedophilia. nice bro you just put yourself on a list for writing that i bet
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developing a kekei genkai a wood release at that in only 6 month without any technique related scroll? doesn't make any sense. it's better to developing his basic transformation chakra first. what a disappointment
Un excelente fanfic de Naruto 👌🏻 puede que tenga un harem pero su relación entre ellos no se siente engorrosa ni molesta 👍🏻 es genial que desarrolle temas más profundos e incógnitas que no se vieron o abordaron en el original, su gramática y traducción es de buena calidad solo espero que haya un salto de tiempo ya que se siente un poco raro que el MC físicamente de 10 años esté tan op 😅 Ya de por sí se puso más interesante al planear cazar a todos los otsutsuki de los mundos paralelos y con su habilidad tiene la posibilidad de viajar a otros universos 🤙🏻
揭示劇透 La verdad esta historia hasta el capitulo 67 antes del primer lemon estaba bien tenia un buen sentido a la historia estaba god con el mc op y todo la vaina pero después de esto ya no quería leerlo la verdad no me gusta y no me va a gustar esa mrd de los clones lo veo horrible la verdad entiendo que si es un harem y necesita tiempo para cada waifu pero naaaa hermano no me gusto nada esos lemones la verdad, la historia es buena pero como digo después del primer lemon no lo seguiria leyendo.
Sometimes the MC acts mature, as expected of someone who receives a whole lifetime of memories from reincarnation. And sometimes he acts like a little kid, according to his physical age... I hate those kinds of fanfics. Anyway, this here feels more like a slice of life type of novel, instead of action and training type of Naruto fanfic. I got bored after the first 15 chapters and dropped it. I don't mean to say it's a bad type of slice of life but I simply didn't like it.
The story is great so far. I'm enjoying the story and can't wait to read more..............................................................................
......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
You can read this if your bored, Very Generic, Have System ✔️ Reincarnated ✔️ Harem ✔️ Mc to Op ✔️ if your like me who read 100+ naruto fanfics. it gets pretty boring but if your new and did not read a lot of naruto fanfic you might like this.
In my opinion, it would be better if this novel is told from Kazutora's point of view (POV). Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel. Thanks for the novel.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
when I saw the perks, I knew. Why even write? Might as well roll the credits, MC won.
The writing quality is pretty good, but the plot is exceedingly slow and boring in my opinion. Ended up dropping because the author decided to develop romance with prepubescent MC rather than waiting for the academy or afterwards. I know the MC is reincarnated but kurenai and others aren’t so it was really distasteful.
good story, the writing is good and the relationships advance at a logical pace, it's also good that there isn't a plot or something like that. Aside from that, it would be good if the children's arc did not last long, that is why not many like to read about reincarnation and more transmigration because it is not very interesting to read about a child giving shame and little action where in a world like Naruto action is a priority and not so much for since on life.
It's time to adjust the review after reading all the available chapters, I can confidently say. This story is similar to the other 80% of fanfics on each other, here at the moment you will not see anything new. Namely: the same decisions of characters, the same female cast, absolutely stable (monotonous) built characters. The main character, stably strong not having any resistance in achieving power, a set of techniques and reinforcements monotonous, stably banal, a complete lack of originality, starting from the notorious element of wood, ending with the banal body of a sage, the only thing that pleased is his character (so far). 1. The update speed is excellent. 2. The quality of the writing is good, 3. Character design is monotonous, lacks originality. 4. Plot development is consistently mediocre (nothing new, so far). Conclusion: read if you just need to kill time. But keep in mind here you will not see anything new, you will always seem that you have already seen it.
Will come comeback ones there are at least 80 chaps Author has to many fics below that number
I don’t really think the author grasp the personality of most of the characters besides the oc and just kinda seems like characters react a certain way that’s off putting, also there’s a lack in story progression. Kinda feels like a slow paced au
is this mtl or your original ???[img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]
the plot is on life support , it’s not realistic towards the show or manga , he pulls a lot of bs outta nowhere , blames any knowledge he shouldn’t have on his dead parents, horrid grammar, it’s a good idea with a lazy follow through like most Naruto fanfics
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I don't know. I mean, part of me wants to read this, but another part knows it's only a matter of time before you abandon this story like you do with your others, so yeah....
the MC was born to practice taijutsu and ninjutsu with his gifts, but the author made him waste time with genjutsu, the author but still the fanfic is very fun, it skips over the MC's childhood, it's very boring when he's a child
Faz Naruto fêmea feminino para não ter dois protagonista homenshahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahah
another decently written story ruined by sexual deviance, harems and paedophilia. nice bro you just put yourself on a list for writing that i bet