DxD: A Blonde Boy

LV 15

Raistlin428

I really like the story and the premise and I want to keep reading but the author can not keep a plot line in place. It jumps all over the place with random flashbacks that are not labeled and ending chapters and the next chapter has nothing to do with the previous chapter and nothing tieing them together.

LV 4

Darius_Chromwell

I honestly really enjoyed this fanfic during the earlier chapters, but after a certain point there start to be so many flashbacks and time skips that it becomes incoherent to read. if the flashbacks where consistent it would be different but during a single chapter I think it flashed back to 3 different time periods making it almost impossible to keep up.

LV 4

S1LV3RS

NOO HAREM TAG FANFICTION NOVEL!!!??LEZZZZ GOOOOO!!!!! BWHSHSRHAHHRHAHAHWHWHSH

LV 5

ferferfer2

i loved the idea of naruto in dxd, but naruto here is a bored broody and arrogant jerk! i am surprised he is not alcholic because he sure acts like he is

LV 4

AHJIN

the story starts good with one of a kind interesting plots but it goes down from there. i don't recommend this for naruto fans.

LV 10

Luizz_Ricardo

if it has naruto it has 5 stars..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Mad_man13

The writing quality and storytelling drop off in the later chapters making the story chaotic and hard to follow. Plus the power scaling for Naruto is all wrong. For context this is Naruto just after the 4 great ninja war + a sharingan and rinnegan. Even if you exclude the eyes, base Naruto should be steamrolling and blitzing his opponents not to even mention sage mode. In regular sage mode a much weaker Naruto was able to fight pain, someone who could destroy all of konaha In one attack. I mean he is quite easily a planet buster and is having trouble with people who can barley destroy a school.

LV 13

The_Gatherer13

this has been a great read up until chapter 80 too much added in not enough written out to explain what is what and where anything is going at some points it's a compelling read and others make me think it's a crackfic and then it's a drama. frankly, it hurts to read. added to that is the amount of filler you throw in it's awful to follow along, so yeah, this is where I drop out