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I rated it highly because some reviews are fake. It's not a perfect fic but the author is taking it seriously. Author I hope you're doing well and thank you for this fic.
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i haven't read the novel yet but the moment i saw no harem in discrpection i got hooked.
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This is pretty good! I’m glad I found this novel when it has a good amount of chapters already. Ngl you can’t trust me with the power to go back in time, or be able to control time at all really. I’m only human after all.
It's a good novel, thank you for writing it <3 ................................................................................................................
This is a wet dream of an Itachi fan. The story starts off fine then it becomes "the adventures of an Itachi meat rider". Terrible fanfic.
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And well, the strength progression is good too, hope it continues like this author, good luck.( Google tradutor)....................................................................
I read up until chapter 24, here’s my review: Great grammar and writing quality, character are written well and the pacing is really good, the time travel ability is a unique aspect that makes it more unique than other Naruto ffs, the MC gets stronger by training in a time loop… But I’m Dropping this ff for one reason and that’s because the MC tells Itachi that he’s a prophet (has a kekkei genkai) that can see the future and wants to stop Itachi from following the plot. Now this might not be a bad thing for others but I just don’t like this path for a Naruto fic…If u don’t mind that then this is a great Naruto ff
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Love the story and the idea 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Excellent Naruto fanfiction so far ! (chapter 54) The story is really slow but it's to be expected of a story about someone not extremely talented but with an infinite amount of time in his hands to compensate quality (talent) with quantity (efforts and accumulation). There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too dramatic, it's perfectly readable and even better than just readable. The story has a lot of details and a bit of character growth with time so far. The author seems to have though a lot about his story seeing the concept he brings up and how they are explained, and how the MC is not too OP despite having the cheat he has. Long story short, someone who knows the plot of Naruto reincarnates as a random character in this world, he can choose the cheat/talents/clan he has within moderation and chose the time control ability. The ability grows with him and only allows for time travel in the beginning, to give him a lot of time to train despite his normal talents. I highly recommend reading it, good job author !
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Good read! It’s good as in very good haha. The time loop will make even you crazy tho 🤣
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I can see you put a lot of hard thought and time into this. I just can't put in the effort to read all that. I'm a simple reader, I don't like slow paced stories. I just wanted to give you 5 stars for your effort. Keep it up.
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This fanfic has great potential. The time rewind cheat is useful for both the MC and the author himself. Not only is it good for the MC to escape from danger, but it is also helpful for the author. If the author makes a mistake in the story, he can close the plot hole with a rewind. Lol.
It's a good fanfic, but let's get real, mc doesn't have time powers, he has the limited ability of transfering his consciousness to his previous self and somehow each use uses up all his spiritual energy (for example he wanted to return 1 hour to the past). This is annoying, because you can do so much with time powers: stop, slow barier (jjk six eyes), gravity (because gravity is a combination of space and time), recovery, bring back from the dead, time paradox explosions (delete button) and etc, the imagination is the limit..
It's still early to say anything.. but it seems like a promising novel with good amount of World Building and Seemingly a MC that I will not hate at the very least..
That story have a great potential ! the time travel power have a lot of possibility, author-san make a great job to structurated that (please don't make that to complicated later). I'm very impatient to see how the MC will deal with his futur friend or love after they forget him or how the power will evovle later !! Don't hesitate to read that story !
Good start, till now no actual time travel happened but its early days. In my opinion author is bit slow in the story tho.............................. give it a try i guess
Shameless 5 start Author review. Update after writing 30+ chapters: I have to say, that early chapters contains a lot of mistakes and lacks quality, so be prepared for that. I'm trying my best to improve as I go, and later on chapters become better, but I still have a long way to go to achieve the level of quality I want. So yea, I'm a newbie author with English as a second language, I'm doing the best I can, but early chapters is really bad and I don't think I will ever rewrite them, as it will require a lot of time and I'm already struggling to publish chapters once a day, so that's that. As for the story itself - well, it's progressing, and the more I write the more excited I become about what will happen next. The MC will become stronger gradually, there will be some fights, different kind of missions, and of course more time travel. We will see how it goes.
I rated it highly because some reviews are fake. It's not a perfect fic but the author is taking it seriously. Author I hope you're doing well and thank you for this fic.
Trash🚮 @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @sidekicks dgdhdudbdvxhdjbdbdhxhxbdbdhdhdbdvdhdhdbbdvdjdkdhdbfbfbfbfhfhdheuejeheyryrvrbrjd office bcuz bcuz go FM GB bc CJ by hi DW UC TV TV ex kc egg on TV in DC mg d
i haven't read the novel yet but the moment i saw no harem in discrpection i got hooked.
Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo
This is pretty good! I’m glad I found this novel when it has a good amount of chapters already. Ngl you can’t trust me with the power to go back in time, or be able to control time at all really. I’m only human after all.
It's a good novel, thank you for writing it <3 ................................................................................................................
This is a wet dream of an Itachi fan. The story starts off fine then it becomes "the adventures of an Itachi meat rider". Terrible fanfic.
揭示劇透 And well, the strength progression is good too, hope it continues like this author, good luck.( Google tradutor)....................................................................
I read up until chapter 24, here’s my review: Great grammar and writing quality, character are written well and the pacing is really good, the time travel ability is a unique aspect that makes it more unique than other Naruto ffs, the MC gets stronger by training in a time loop… But I’m Dropping this ff for one reason and that’s because the MC tells Itachi that he’s a prophet (has a kekkei genkai) that can see the future and wants to stop Itachi from following the plot. Now this might not be a bad thing for others but I just don’t like this path for a Naruto fic…If u don’t mind that then this is a great Naruto ff
揭示劇透 Love the story and the idea 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Excellent Naruto fanfiction so far ! (chapter 54) The story is really slow but it's to be expected of a story about someone not extremely talented but with an infinite amount of time in his hands to compensate quality (talent) with quantity (efforts and accumulation). There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too dramatic, it's perfectly readable and even better than just readable. The story has a lot of details and a bit of character growth with time so far. The author seems to have though a lot about his story seeing the concept he brings up and how they are explained, and how the MC is not too OP despite having the cheat he has. Long story short, someone who knows the plot of Naruto reincarnates as a random character in this world, he can choose the cheat/talents/clan he has within moderation and chose the time control ability. The ability grows with him and only allows for time travel in the beginning, to give him a lot of time to train despite his normal talents. I highly recommend reading it, good job author !
揭示劇透 Good read! It’s good as in very good haha. The time loop will make even you crazy tho 🤣
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I can see you put a lot of hard thought and time into this. I just can't put in the effort to read all that. I'm a simple reader, I don't like slow paced stories. I just wanted to give you 5 stars for your effort. Keep it up.
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This fanfic has great potential. The time rewind cheat is useful for both the MC and the author himself. Not only is it good for the MC to escape from danger, but it is also helpful for the author. If the author makes a mistake in the story, he can close the plot hole with a rewind. Lol.
It's a good fanfic, but let's get real, mc doesn't have time powers, he has the limited ability of transfering his consciousness to his previous self and somehow each use uses up all his spiritual energy (for example he wanted to return 1 hour to the past). This is annoying, because you can do so much with time powers: stop, slow barier (jjk six eyes), gravity (because gravity is a combination of space and time), recovery, bring back from the dead, time paradox explosions (delete button) and etc, the imagination is the limit..
It's still early to say anything.. but it seems like a promising novel with good amount of World Building and Seemingly a MC that I will not hate at the very least..
That story have a great potential ! the time travel power have a lot of possibility, author-san make a great job to structurated that (please don't make that to complicated later). I'm very impatient to see how the MC will deal with his futur friend or love after they forget him or how the power will evovle later !! Don't hesitate to read that story !
Good start, till now no actual time travel happened but its early days. In my opinion author is bit slow in the story tho.............................. give it a try i guess
Shameless 5 start Author review. Update after writing 30+ chapters: I have to say, that early chapters contains a lot of mistakes and lacks quality, so be prepared for that. I'm trying my best to improve as I go, and later on chapters become better, but I still have a long way to go to achieve the level of quality I want. So yea, I'm a newbie author with English as a second language, I'm doing the best I can, but early chapters is really bad and I don't think I will ever rewrite them, as it will require a lot of time and I'm already struggling to publish chapters once a day, so that's that. As for the story itself - well, it's progressing, and the more I write the more excited I become about what will happen next. The MC will become stronger gradually, there will be some fights, different kind of missions, and of course more time travel. We will see how it goes.