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作者: CreativeVoid

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Honestly this is the first fanfiction I'm writing might be good probably trash though. It's a story about Isshin Yamanaka twin brother of Ino he's going to be adapt in his clan techniques, genjutsu and kenjutsu probably water ninjutsu also

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Bob_Bob_8597

Honestly off to a decent start. I hope the bandages maybe are play a role in something and are not just for show. As for the grammar and spelling mistakes, I recommend using ChatGPT of Copilot (by Microsoft) and ask it to fixing some spelling/capitalization issues. Looking forward to the novel

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Silk_N1Fan

Kenjutsu again, it's gotten boring now I want to find someone who wants to innovate, like give the guy an axe, or a halberd or even a hammer

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Don_Alduck

finally a yamanaka ff...................

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