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Arell Rose, finds an unexpected path to redemption in a mysterious RAPPER System that grants him a host of different abilities and challenges to overcome. The system's main goal? to create the best rapper alive. Can this troubled teen navigate the obstacles thrown in his way and truly become a legend in the music industry?
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寫檢討This is gonna be good. Though the MC needs some roughing up since he's way goody two shoes and a articulate speaker to be a street hustler. He lack that certain bounce and confidence in his personality that makes the rapper click. So instead of being real he looks like a wannabe. Would still look forward to next chapter though since it's only CH 14 as of now and maybe he'll get character development. Cause as 8 miles once said "There's no such thing as a half-way crook"
Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.
One don't know how long I have been looking for a good story on hip hop and found none this is all what I hoped and more . Godspeed and keep going thank you for this work
Overall this is 5 star. I’m not understanding how this is not higher up in the charts at least at top 5 novel.
this is great I would rate this as a five stars but I'm not sure if you would continue this I don't wanna be disappointed
Only bad thing about this is when I finish the chapter it’s very good can’t wait for more 👍👍👍👍.
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Binged this whole Story in two days, it was great. Congratulations Author, What you have here is something special man.
Im giving a straight 5 star to help author out since i’ve seen quite many clearly racist 1-star reviews and i feel like thats unfair so here you go
Amazing job. I love this, please don’t stop writing. Finish it all the way for me. I really enjoy reading this masterpiece, the development of the story is phenomenal. Also as well I think you should let him go to the tattoo shop for the story.🔥🙏💯
Hella good bro 🪶 maybe focus a bit more on the music side if it burns u out since I think there’s a lot of potential with the songs he can do
Love the book. Always happy to see new chapters. This is one of those rare books I wish I didn’t discover so early so there would already be a couple hundred chapters available. Do you have a Patreon ? If not I’d suggest getting one id support you.
作者 AmSincere
Hi there, I don't really see fanfics or light novels on hip hop, so I want this to continue. PLS