Jujutsu Kaisen : Legacy of the Senju

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Victor_Venegas

Ok, I have a problem with the novel, the interactions of the characters are robotic, there is no feeling behind the dialogues, an example of this is the death of the protagonist's parents, both times, in the same chapter, it is just these characters warning that they are going to die like "I'm going to die, ok?" which removes absolutely all the weight behind the "event". Furthermore, the pace of the novel feels extremely rushed from one moment to the next, there are jumps of events without any type of development. Also from time to time there is a focus on things not very relevant to the general immersion of the novel, again for example, in the same chapter as the last example the protagonist creates a wooden dragon to test his powers (which he obtained if I must add without no effort) but for some reason the author unnecessarily adds a paragraph where he explains "improvements" to the dragon's design, I understand the point of view when writing because you as the author have an idea in your head of what happens, but it is redundant to describe it to the reader Because over-explaining kills the reader's ability to delve into the narrative. Lastly and much more personally, I understand the admiration for other cultures, but when reading a story of the type the author is trying to write it is difficult for immersion to suddenly encounter Japanese words and subsequently their translation even going to the point of adding hiragana or katakana, It seems like a poor decision to try to educate? Through a story if what you want is for the reader to immerse themselves in your world. Apart from this I wish the author great success.

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vixinity

goated fic, I'd definitely recommend. but that "most handsome man in Japan" plot point was kinda useless lol

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Vidhan_Bhardwaj

You gotta work on the charachter personality and interactions all in all the fanfic is good tho

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MIGHTY_ALPIO

It's good and new concept senju Hashirama god of shinobi world in jjk it's going to be way good and I hope you continue it I am supporting it

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Lucas_Otaku

(PT-BR) Por favor autor não desanime com os comentários ruins, eu estou gostando bastante da história e de pra onde ela está caminhando e estou gostando do ritmo também, tenha consciência de que nem mesmo Deus consegue agradar todo mundo e foque em fazer uma história que você ache boa, só não exagere e mude totalmente o curso da história como os chineses fazer hahahahaha.

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Impulsive_69Author

This seems to be a regular occurrence in Webnovel rating your own fanfic as 5-Stars so I might as well join in this particular occurrence. -When in Rome Do as the Romans Do

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Damarion_Sonnier

author you truly cooked this is the peak of jujutsu i look forward to your next creations.

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A_A_Y

.......................................................................................Goated jjk fanfic.......................................................................................

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Damarion_Sonnier

Goated truly goated author San I hearby declare that throughout all heaven and earth you alone are the heavenly writer 💋

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DaoistvlntTn

Best jjk fanfic..........Best jjk fanfic..........

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ReadingATM00

I hope to hear a new story from the author soo!

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Elon_Husk

This is THE Peak. I came across this thinking might as well read a sh*tty fanfic while waiting for other fanfics to update, boy im glad i was wrong about this being just another 'sh*tty' fanfic. This is one of the best fanfic ive read on this app.

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Lonely_Nobody5

Good read, would recommend..............

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AARYAN_PATHAK

this is just amazing. just completed the story and this is amazing I say. from jjk development to world development, economic and everything. and ending was great!

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Daybreak_6987

To keep it short and sweet (and not to discourage anyone), I liked parts of it, didn’t care for others. It had its problems and it’s strength and for a casual read it’s definitely a fun one.

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Willdgrad

Cara uma história bem um 7/10 ~ 8/10 um bom prato para quem está com dificuldade de achar uma para passar o tempo .....................................

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Dr_Sayter

Great story from beginning to end loved the journey from beginning to end and am glad I was on this journey Thank you so much for the time and effort you put in

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Lil_Mica

it's the best just read it . .. ... .. .. .

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Soham_Mukherjee_3608

well done❤. please write another one on seven deadly sins . i never really find any good fan fiction on that anime so please try. love your work

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Mayank_Jha_7643

Exceptional chapters as well as story and great character development with a fitting end to the story. Great work