Reviews of Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent! by TheUngod - Webnovel

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TheUngod

Obligatory shameless author review! This is my second official book, and I am taking this one much more seriously than my last one as I made some bad mistakes with that one that unfortunately led to it being dropped. But I learned a lot from writing my previous book and I'm putting my all into this novel from this point onwards! Happy reading!

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Art_Show

my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Zook_51
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the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

5mth
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Eddicted

World build is not bad. The MC is dumb as hell though. Apparently the author thought character progression means making the MC a half retard and then slowly bringing him back to normal human standards. Simply put lazy writing.

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Shining_youth

The flow of the story is very cathy.. development of the main characters and the different scenes and the worlds make you captivated and unable to stop reading midway.. waiting for the upload of the next chapters

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Sonto_Chukwu

Too All the Critc on this book, You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed. and as for him trusting Mira so soon again, like I said before, they are children with no experience to how relationship work no ever told them about proper communication and all that, your problem is that you were looking for some edgy kid who uses lies and deceit go through like which does not make sense because at the end of the day regardless of how much power they have the are still kids you are saying Mira is unlikable and all that nonsense because she spied on him but ask yourself what do you expect a child who knows practically nothing about normal relationships, talkless of romantic relationship to do she spied on him because the cared and as bad as spying it can be seen clearly as she did it because she didn't know better and thankfully she was properly educated that all the MC and FL needs proper adult guidance before they become to powerful to consider it for now regardless of all their power and talent they are still children and just children but teenagers with raging hormones and even worst they never got release those hormones all and are doing it at once now.

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Sonto_Chukwu

Not Bad At first, I had my doubts, but I have been enjoying this story so far, but I noticed that the last update was 13d ago please don't tell me this story would be dropped now that I am enjoying it .

4d
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Kenjigar

Currently at chapter 530, I have noticed a pattern. In every arc a situation comes up, MC gets involved, then MC gets sidetracked further stretching the arc or forgotten altogether. There was the Academy and war arc. In novels these days, whenever there's a school/academy arc, you just know that arc will become useless a few months later. Even with just 1 school year, MC can't even make it through without a major event happening. No such thing as a proper timeline of events, just random chaos. An event could happen within an event that happened in an event. In terms of the novel itself though, good job so far.

6d
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Epialess

Overall, It is a 1-2 star novel as it is inspired from more than one novel. The main character is flawed in itself making the whole novel waste of time. But on the other hand if it was better written I believe it could be considered one of my favourite because of the concepts like primordial expense, space colonies, talents, and so on but alas it isn’t written good.

9d
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DriftingMaze

I had high hopes for this novel but as I read more and more chapters I have come to realise that this novel is just another addition to the trash collection in webnovel! The story has so many plot holes and inconsistencies that I don't even understand what the author was thinking! The world is not at all fleshed and the characters are all just 1 dimensional, Heck even the MC is not fleshed out! I have read up to chapter 365 and there has been zero development in his character! He is still dumb and the most frustrating thing is that he will have some random bouts of enlightenment on how the world works but will then just proceed to forget it the next minute! And if anyone was looking for a nice power system then this definitely is not for you! The power levels of characters in this novel are at the whims of the author, sometimes someone is strong and the next time he is weak for no reason! Also the romance in this novel is cringe and the FL is the worst written character! If you can ignore all the above mentioned points then this novel can be a good timepass I guess...

10d
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honey1344

i really liked this novel , there where few minor things that i didn't like but that's in every novel ,you can't please everyone but one thing i didn't understand completely is that how come Alex said no to observers, as after that count Desmond(or whatever his name was ) incident he almost lost his sanity for whole months where 13k people died cuz he couldn't save them . there was also that incident where he almost died to protect millions of people on planet where there was c+ flying beast came but now he just said no to observers where his decision could have saved hundreds of trillion people like he doesn't give a fuck to save anyone ,pls explain

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Fairn
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I love most aspects of this novel, except one thing.. the romance, and how much of an idiot the protagonist is. he kills a king class beast and is severely injured at the end, and knows his orbs can heal and help him recover, yet he doesn't use them and just the story brushes over that. Mira is an annoying aspect of the story as well, and their reactions to things differ each time. He saw people die, felt nothing and didn't care, but then later he saw the same thing and he got depressed and sad and thinking about life just so the novel can give him a special moment with Mira, which kept happening more than once. Nothing is consistent as their characters/personalities changes depending on the novel. The Author is an idiot that just writes as he goes, the only redeeming part of the novel is the world and his cheat, other than that, the characters make no sense sometimes and the romance or interaction with Mira makes no sense as well, like after knowing each other for a few months, he says she's like family and tells her his secrets, even though she is such an unlikable person as she spies on him when he doesn't tell her what he's hiding. The relationship aspect and Mira are a 0/10

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Piyush_Majee

Its not everyday I come across novels this bad, riddled with so many plot holes. The MC remains a complete dimwit yet somehow unravels so-called "genius" schemes that are nothing more than painfully obvious setups. Characters appear out of nowhere, with no explanation of how they got there, as if the story itself forgets about continuity. Their behaviors are inconsistent, often defying logic, making it impossible to take any of them seriously.

18d
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Black_olympia

I am just a bit mad, the story/world building is great but so much incoherence. The guy has a break down when 13 000 died but when he can save the whole humanity 1 000000… people ) he is like « no I don’t want to ». And please what do they teach as the school just let him open a map of the primordial expanse, humans should have started recording things. It’s really a let down because the world/ conversation/ character growth are great but people are so dumb ! I mean why would a S Rank support red demon ? They are trying to eliminate humanity. That is so dumb. But I see really a great potential here. I still want to encourage your work

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DaoistVv6PHh

story telling and world building is decent. but the characters development, discussions conversations, are horrible. and I mean literally horrible. plus the plot armor is too big. and character is dumb I mean who would accept a meeting with strangers

1mth
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Omar_S_7563

I think the author is decent and so is the writing but I give up with this mc. Over 280 chapters in and little to no mental development from him. Hero complex (and im someone who doesnt mond that and dislikes ruthless MCs) but does everything with 0 preparation, takes unnecessary risks and alwYs fights to the point of collapsing in a jungle or a battlefield. He should be dead atleast 4 times.

1mth
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Akselelator

This story is the best in terms of what I’ve read, the way the world is built and the development of the characters is very pleasing, the characters are happy, their growth is average, their emotions are written, in short, I’m hooked so far 5

1mth
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Preston_Bunn

first, I love the book. but. the inconsistencies kill the immersion and every time it happens, i get more and more frustrated with it. avoiding spoilers. main character gets an ability. the ability is expanded, but in about 50 chapters, that ability is like it was never upgraded. Just to be upgraded AGAIN. same upgrade, 100 chapters later. next big one. Good old Nick Stein, and his LIGHT element, and the speed of light references, and bright entry. was later replaced with good gold Nick stein with lightning sparking between his fingers and lightning abilities. there are some typos here and there, those are fine, understandable. but creating large lore inconsistencies .... is rough. please, 🙏 do better.

2mth
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Daoistm7Yh5H

Despite Being A Single Female Lead In Relationships The Book/Novel Is Quite Worthwhile Of Reading

2mth
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_ZypHer_

Quite good, but the mc is trash(but I doubt he's the mc). Too much boon on Mira while mc just leftovers. Mc personality is also trash, he's too nosy for some freakin reason. Romance was also rushed, it's too early for me. And finally, is Alex really the mc of this novel???

3mth
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wrongaccounttt

I would have loved this story more if the romance was delayed, for some reason I lost interest the moment the M.C started a relationship with Mira.

3mth
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Fenrir_Stormspear

The story concept is cool, the mc was a little dense at first but he’s growing on me. Decent story

3mth
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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

3mth
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DavidFR0215

I have never done a review and I haven’t been captivated by a book so much in months or even years since I started reading light novels. I highly encourage anyone to read this, as once you start to read is hard to stop doing so. Thankful it appeared on my daily free read that allowed me to read it.

3mth
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Akugbo_Larry

Mr. round-up figure is here to say hello to this hot and recent novel.

4mth
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Ryan_9182

I absolutely loved this book one of the best I’ve read for a very long time however I do have some problems Mainly Mira I think you dedicate too much time to her making multiple chapters about her in a row I think she Is a good character just not worth having as much time in put too her and the other problem I have is that we didn’t delve more into the fact that he can steal talents like when he stole the fire talent I was expecting to see what else he would steal like maybe the pierce from the red demon would have been interesting but other than those I thought the book was amazing keep up the good work

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4mth
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A_Stevenson

Main character is not smart, to put it nicely. Story seems like a mash up of various other stories, but not bad. The character having an IQ below 70 makes the story VERY hard to keep reading.

4mth
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Darius_Chromwell

Why does it feel like the main character is not actually the main character but rather the comedic relief… where can I go to read Mira’s side of the story if anyone is actually the main character then it’s her!

4mth
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DaoistKSbLen

Ok, so, several points! It's similar to shadow slave , that's a positive thing, unfortunately it didn't got me because the writing has some inconsistencies. 1) It lacks context and environmental description. The fight in the forest, what forest, what treas for example? How a boy that always lived in a asteroid ( mining) knows what a forest or treas are if he doesn't even know what horses are? 2) He has a fight with a wild carnivorous 1meter tall rabbit. The rabbit slices and wounds his leg. He defeats the rabbit. And then proceeds to run for 20km???? With a wounded leg??? 20km??? 3) He was in a camp with 1000 people, was the only survivor of a monster attack. Later he defeats the rabbit there. He skins the rabbit ( in like 10min?) and makes a bag with his skin. Lol ( without waiting to dry the blood? To do a bag like this you need to dry the skiing for days), and in the middle of thousands of death people he couldn't find a bag? No one had a bag? Incongruity like this gets me out of the reading completely. And it continues on and on.

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4mth
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Stewart_Umberger

One of the best books on here. The MC does get extremely lucky quite often but he still grows and gets powerful with his own work. Although, the actual progression of the story does take quite a while even though his ability is so powerful.

5mth
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ZikkyCent

This book is indeed one of the best reads I've had in my life. if you haven't read this, then you're missing out on life, sorry. I really appreciate the author.

5mth
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TheUngod

Obligatory shameless author review! This is my second official book, and I am taking this one much more seriously than my last one as I made some bad mistakes with that one that unfortunately led to it being dropped. But I learned a lot from writing my previous book and I'm putting my all into this novel from this point onwards! Happy reading!

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Art_Show

my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Zook_51
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the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

5mth
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Eddicted

World build is not bad. The MC is dumb as hell though. Apparently the author thought character progression means making the MC a half retard and then slowly bringing him back to normal human standards. Simply put lazy writing.

11h
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Shining_youth

The flow of the story is very cathy.. development of the main characters and the different scenes and the worlds make you captivated and unable to stop reading midway.. waiting for the upload of the next chapters

18h
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Sonto_Chukwu

Too All the Critc on this book, You all keep forgetting that the MC and FL are supposed to be 18 years who practically have no live experience or childhood to speak of, and you expect them to be some all-knowing, sagely and perfect MC but to me I think the author is not wrong the MC is supposed to flawed make mistakes contradict himself and learns as he goes he lived 17 years alone as a glorified slave and wondering when his next meal would come instead of actually being a child and then a teenager so obviously those traits would show up now it can be clearly seen that his actions his him try to over compensate all the things he missed. and as for him trusting Mira so soon again, like I said before, they are children with no experience to how relationship work no ever told them about proper communication and all that, your problem is that you were looking for some edgy kid who uses lies and deceit go through like which does not make sense because at the end of the day regardless of how much power they have the are still kids you are saying Mira is unlikable and all that nonsense because she spied on him but ask yourself what do you expect a child who knows practically nothing about normal relationships, talkless of romantic relationship to do she spied on him because the cared and as bad as spying it can be seen clearly as she did it because she didn't know better and thankfully she was properly educated that all the MC and FL needs proper adult guidance before they become to powerful to consider it for now regardless of all their power and talent they are still children and just children but teenagers with raging hormones and even worst they never got release those hormones all and are doing it at once now.

1d
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Sonto_Chukwu

Not Bad At first, I had my doubts, but I have been enjoying this story so far, but I noticed that the last update was 13d ago please don't tell me this story would be dropped now that I am enjoying it .

4d
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Kenjigar

Currently at chapter 530, I have noticed a pattern. In every arc a situation comes up, MC gets involved, then MC gets sidetracked further stretching the arc or forgotten altogether. There was the Academy and war arc. In novels these days, whenever there's a school/academy arc, you just know that arc will become useless a few months later. Even with just 1 school year, MC can't even make it through without a major event happening. No such thing as a proper timeline of events, just random chaos. An event could happen within an event that happened in an event. In terms of the novel itself though, good job so far.

6d
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Epialess

Overall, It is a 1-2 star novel as it is inspired from more than one novel. The main character is flawed in itself making the whole novel waste of time. But on the other hand if it was better written I believe it could be considered one of my favourite because of the concepts like primordial expense, space colonies, talents, and so on but alas it isn’t written good.

9d
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DriftingMaze

I had high hopes for this novel but as I read more and more chapters I have come to realise that this novel is just another addition to the trash collection in webnovel! The story has so many plot holes and inconsistencies that I don't even understand what the author was thinking! The world is not at all fleshed and the characters are all just 1 dimensional, Heck even the MC is not fleshed out! I have read up to chapter 365 and there has been zero development in his character! He is still dumb and the most frustrating thing is that he will have some random bouts of enlightenment on how the world works but will then just proceed to forget it the next minute! And if anyone was looking for a nice power system then this definitely is not for you! The power levels of characters in this novel are at the whims of the author, sometimes someone is strong and the next time he is weak for no reason! Also the romance in this novel is cringe and the FL is the worst written character! If you can ignore all the above mentioned points then this novel can be a good timepass I guess...

10d
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honey1344

i really liked this novel , there where few minor things that i didn't like but that's in every novel ,you can't please everyone but one thing i didn't understand completely is that how come Alex said no to observers, as after that count Desmond(or whatever his name was ) incident he almost lost his sanity for whole months where 13k people died cuz he couldn't save them . there was also that incident where he almost died to protect millions of people on planet where there was c+ flying beast came but now he just said no to observers where his decision could have saved hundreds of trillion people like he doesn't give a fuck to save anyone ,pls explain

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Fairn
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I love most aspects of this novel, except one thing.. the romance, and how much of an idiot the protagonist is. he kills a king class beast and is severely injured at the end, and knows his orbs can heal and help him recover, yet he doesn't use them and just the story brushes over that. Mira is an annoying aspect of the story as well, and their reactions to things differ each time. He saw people die, felt nothing and didn't care, but then later he saw the same thing and he got depressed and sad and thinking about life just so the novel can give him a special moment with Mira, which kept happening more than once. Nothing is consistent as their characters/personalities changes depending on the novel. The Author is an idiot that just writes as he goes, the only redeeming part of the novel is the world and his cheat, other than that, the characters make no sense sometimes and the romance or interaction with Mira makes no sense as well, like after knowing each other for a few months, he says she's like family and tells her his secrets, even though she is such an unlikable person as she spies on him when he doesn't tell her what he's hiding. The relationship aspect and Mira are a 0/10

17d
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Piyush_Majee

Its not everyday I come across novels this bad, riddled with so many plot holes. The MC remains a complete dimwit yet somehow unravels so-called "genius" schemes that are nothing more than painfully obvious setups. Characters appear out of nowhere, with no explanation of how they got there, as if the story itself forgets about continuity. Their behaviors are inconsistent, often defying logic, making it impossible to take any of them seriously.

18d
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Black_olympia

I am just a bit mad, the story/world building is great but so much incoherence. The guy has a break down when 13 000 died but when he can save the whole humanity 1 000000… people ) he is like « no I don’t want to ». And please what do they teach as the school just let him open a map of the primordial expanse, humans should have started recording things. It’s really a let down because the world/ conversation/ character growth are great but people are so dumb ! I mean why would a S Rank support red demon ? They are trying to eliminate humanity. That is so dumb. But I see really a great potential here. I still want to encourage your work

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DaoistVv6PHh

story telling and world building is decent. but the characters development, discussions conversations, are horrible. and I mean literally horrible. plus the plot armor is too big. and character is dumb I mean who would accept a meeting with strangers

1mth
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Omar_S_7563

I think the author is decent and so is the writing but I give up with this mc. Over 280 chapters in and little to no mental development from him. Hero complex (and im someone who doesnt mond that and dislikes ruthless MCs) but does everything with 0 preparation, takes unnecessary risks and alwYs fights to the point of collapsing in a jungle or a battlefield. He should be dead atleast 4 times.

1mth
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Akselelator

This story is the best in terms of what I’ve read, the way the world is built and the development of the characters is very pleasing, the characters are happy, their growth is average, their emotions are written, in short, I’m hooked so far 5

1mth
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Preston_Bunn

first, I love the book. but. the inconsistencies kill the immersion and every time it happens, i get more and more frustrated with it. avoiding spoilers. main character gets an ability. the ability is expanded, but in about 50 chapters, that ability is like it was never upgraded. Just to be upgraded AGAIN. same upgrade, 100 chapters later. next big one. Good old Nick Stein, and his LIGHT element, and the speed of light references, and bright entry. was later replaced with good gold Nick stein with lightning sparking between his fingers and lightning abilities. there are some typos here and there, those are fine, understandable. but creating large lore inconsistencies .... is rough. please, 🙏 do better.

2mth
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Daoistm7Yh5H

Despite Being A Single Female Lead In Relationships The Book/Novel Is Quite Worthwhile Of Reading

2mth
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_ZypHer_

Quite good, but the mc is trash(but I doubt he's the mc). Too much boon on Mira while mc just leftovers. Mc personality is also trash, he's too nosy for some freakin reason. Romance was also rushed, it's too early for me. And finally, is Alex really the mc of this novel???

3mth
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wrongaccounttt

I would have loved this story more if the romance was delayed, for some reason I lost interest the moment the M.C started a relationship with Mira.

3mth
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Fenrir_Stormspear

The story concept is cool, the mc was a little dense at first but he’s growing on me. Decent story

3mth
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Breckie_Smith

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare

3mth
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DavidFR0215

I have never done a review and I haven’t been captivated by a book so much in months or even years since I started reading light novels. I highly encourage anyone to read this, as once you start to read is hard to stop doing so. Thankful it appeared on my daily free read that allowed me to read it.

3mth
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Akugbo_Larry

Mr. round-up figure is here to say hello to this hot and recent novel.

4mth
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Ryan_9182

I absolutely loved this book one of the best I’ve read for a very long time however I do have some problems Mainly Mira I think you dedicate too much time to her making multiple chapters about her in a row I think she Is a good character just not worth having as much time in put too her and the other problem I have is that we didn’t delve more into the fact that he can steal talents like when he stole the fire talent I was expecting to see what else he would steal like maybe the pierce from the red demon would have been interesting but other than those I thought the book was amazing keep up the good work

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A_Stevenson

Main character is not smart, to put it nicely. Story seems like a mash up of various other stories, but not bad. The character having an IQ below 70 makes the story VERY hard to keep reading.

4mth
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Darius_Chromwell

Why does it feel like the main character is not actually the main character but rather the comedic relief… where can I go to read Mira’s side of the story if anyone is actually the main character then it’s her!

4mth
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DaoistKSbLen

Ok, so, several points! It's similar to shadow slave , that's a positive thing, unfortunately it didn't got me because the writing has some inconsistencies. 1) It lacks context and environmental description. The fight in the forest, what forest, what treas for example? How a boy that always lived in a asteroid ( mining) knows what a forest or treas are if he doesn't even know what horses are? 2) He has a fight with a wild carnivorous 1meter tall rabbit. The rabbit slices and wounds his leg. He defeats the rabbit. And then proceeds to run for 20km???? With a wounded leg??? 20km??? 3) He was in a camp with 1000 people, was the only survivor of a monster attack. Later he defeats the rabbit there. He skins the rabbit ( in like 10min?) and makes a bag with his skin. Lol ( without waiting to dry the blood? To do a bag like this you need to dry the skiing for days), and in the middle of thousands of death people he couldn't find a bag? No one had a bag? Incongruity like this gets me out of the reading completely. And it continues on and on.

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Stewart_Umberger

One of the best books on here. The MC does get extremely lucky quite often but he still grows and gets powerful with his own work. Although, the actual progression of the story does take quite a while even though his ability is so powerful.

5mth
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ZikkyCent

This book is indeed one of the best reads I've had in my life. if you haven't read this, then you're missing out on life, sorry. I really appreciate the author.

5mth
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