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talk about a page turner! I've grown weary of transmigration/ system stories but this one has me on the edge of my seat! the writing is a little clunky but not so much as to prevent the reader from connecting to this world.
hi and hello, this is my first time writing a review, so forgive me if it sounds strange. i haven't finished reading yet, but so far (ch ~70), i can't complain about anything. the MC's personality feels both consistent and likeable, the same goes for his system and many other characters. THEY MAKE SENSE. this story is NOT suffering from "Oh, i saw something interesting in another work, so i collect those things and stuff them all into my story" like so many others out there. there are genuine moments of surprise and amazement. the interactions and conversations are well-paced, and the world-building isn't just nice, it's great; there are several inventions i never saw elsewhere (yet, but i read a lot so they most certainly aren't common). And if they do exist elsewhere already, they're still described nicely and totally fitting into the story and flow. as seen in another review, there are some typos, but even as someone who feels rather allergic to them, it didn't break the flow of reading. It has a healthy balance between "omg I'm on edge" and "awww, so wholesome". I'm not sure how to say this, i just feel like the author put a lot of thought and soul into this work, making this an individual journey and definitely more than "just some random novel", also causing me to write my very first review because i believe this work deserves it. i hope the quality stays like this until the end, but i have a good feeling about this. So, for all those of you looking for a novel with its own not-copy-pasted soul in this genre, I recommend giving it a try! 🫡✨️
llevo poco pero me va encantando, [img=recommend][img=Loving it] me encanta Ren gracias por la historia
I liked this story very much, and I liked the rain even more, the system is also very lovely, and what should I tell you about the chemistry that exists between the system and rain.yes sometimes I don't understand some things but the story is good
Imagine this, you are straight but one day you got transmigrated into a Yaoi novel, your best friend loves you to death, forget about that, the main leads in the world you got reincarnated to have dear eyes on you. It is not any other world that you got reincarnated to, it was from a novel you read, a story you no the end of, which is death by torture from one of the love interest in the story. The above premise hooked me, it grabbed me and dragged me down the rabbit hole of the story, it was a roller coaster of a read, if your heart is strong enough to stomach the spices in the story, then join me in the world of this yaoi story with a system in it.
Over all, great read 💯. The most interesting and hilarious is definitely Little God 😂.
One of the best 👍💯. The first chapter was...no, the first line was enough to hook me. and it was so worth it!!!![img=Loving it]
I'm really liking the interaction between the protagonist and the system, for me is the highest point of the story. For those who enjoys stories like the movie 'Inkheart', I recommend you to give it a chance :)
It's so good. The plot is excellent. If you are looking for mindless fluff this is not for you. If you want to read something to engage...go for it. Plot ✅ Characters ✅ World building ✅
So the story starts with our sarcastic cutie Ren dying and waking up in the universe space of sorts. There he got KOed by the Little God's fluff. 😂 Bro got fluff addiction. The interaction between Ren and system is hilarious 🤣. Every character is well thought out and has a unique personality of their own. With funny undertones, the story will keep you on your toes. Killer ark was intense to say the least🤯. The male lead is..... 🔥 hot ...cough* red eyes black hair what else do you want? I am hooked❤️❤️❤️
V - VERRYY GOOOOOD SIR I MEAN JUST BY LOOKING AT THE TITLE AND COVER I CLICKED THE FIRST CHAPTER AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT WOOHOOOO I - IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LONG FOR A DECENT VILLIAN BOOK HURRAH L - Like I could never :/ bros making all my books look bad but ahem ahem I love this book gj L - lion rawr (idk what else starts with L uhm) I - I leave a powerstone to you :) A - amazing I shall be returning N - noiceeeeee
Hey, Author's here. Ren somehow finds himself in the brand new world where he ends up warding off evil people and living a peaceful life ... not really. Time and time again he finds himself in troubles. With the help of his system he discovers truth about his past lives and ... Somehow everything links to the one scary person Kade Death.
talk about a page turner! I've grown weary of transmigration/ system stories but this one has me on the edge of my seat! the writing is a little clunky but not so much as to prevent the reader from connecting to this world.
hi and hello, this is my first time writing a review, so forgive me if it sounds strange. i haven't finished reading yet, but so far (ch ~70), i can't complain about anything. the MC's personality feels both consistent and likeable, the same goes for his system and many other characters. THEY MAKE SENSE. this story is NOT suffering from "Oh, i saw something interesting in another work, so i collect those things and stuff them all into my story" like so many others out there. there are genuine moments of surprise and amazement. the interactions and conversations are well-paced, and the world-building isn't just nice, it's great; there are several inventions i never saw elsewhere (yet, but i read a lot so they most certainly aren't common). And if they do exist elsewhere already, they're still described nicely and totally fitting into the story and flow. as seen in another review, there are some typos, but even as someone who feels rather allergic to them, it didn't break the flow of reading. It has a healthy balance between "omg I'm on edge" and "awww, so wholesome". I'm not sure how to say this, i just feel like the author put a lot of thought and soul into this work, making this an individual journey and definitely more than "just some random novel", also causing me to write my very first review because i believe this work deserves it. i hope the quality stays like this until the end, but i have a good feeling about this. So, for all those of you looking for a novel with its own not-copy-pasted soul in this genre, I recommend giving it a try! 🫡✨️
llevo poco pero me va encantando, [img=recommend][img=Loving it] me encanta Ren gracias por la historia
I liked this story very much, and I liked the rain even more, the system is also very lovely, and what should I tell you about the chemistry that exists between the system and rain.yes sometimes I don't understand some things but the story is good
Imagine this, you are straight but one day you got transmigrated into a Yaoi novel, your best friend loves you to death, forget about that, the main leads in the world you got reincarnated to have dear eyes on you. It is not any other world that you got reincarnated to, it was from a novel you read, a story you no the end of, which is death by torture from one of the love interest in the story. The above premise hooked me, it grabbed me and dragged me down the rabbit hole of the story, it was a roller coaster of a read, if your heart is strong enough to stomach the spices in the story, then join me in the world of this yaoi story with a system in it.
Over all, great read 💯. The most interesting and hilarious is definitely Little God 😂.
One of the best 👍💯. The first chapter was...no, the first line was enough to hook me. and it was so worth it!!!![img=Loving it]
I'm really liking the interaction between the protagonist and the system, for me is the highest point of the story. For those who enjoys stories like the movie 'Inkheart', I recommend you to give it a chance :)
It's so good. The plot is excellent. If you are looking for mindless fluff this is not for you. If you want to read something to engage...go for it. Plot ✅ Characters ✅ World building ✅
So the story starts with our sarcastic cutie Ren dying and waking up in the universe space of sorts. There he got KOed by the Little God's fluff. 😂 Bro got fluff addiction. The interaction between Ren and system is hilarious 🤣. Every character is well thought out and has a unique personality of their own. With funny undertones, the story will keep you on your toes. Killer ark was intense to say the least🤯. The male lead is..... 🔥 hot ...cough* red eyes black hair what else do you want? I am hooked❤️❤️❤️
V - VERRYY GOOOOOD SIR I MEAN JUST BY LOOKING AT THE TITLE AND COVER I CLICKED THE FIRST CHAPTER AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT WOOHOOOO I - IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LONG FOR A DECENT VILLIAN BOOK HURRAH L - Like I could never :/ bros making all my books look bad but ahem ahem I love this book gj L - lion rawr (idk what else starts with L uhm) I - I leave a powerstone to you :) A - amazing I shall be returning N - noiceeeeee
Hey, Author's here. Ren somehow finds himself in the brand new world where he ends up warding off evil people and living a peaceful life ... not really. Time and time again he finds himself in troubles. With the help of his system he discovers truth about his past lives and ... Somehow everything links to the one scary person Kade Death.