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This work is so good. I don't know what to say but the way this work was different from the other works from this author gives a different vibes. This story is exciting, I somehow wanted to see the mc in "Darling in the Franxx".
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The main problem of this story lies in its protagonist, the charisma is replaced by secondary characters who applaud and venerate him even if it is the first time they see him, the system only gives him three powers, absorb and copy every living being, mentally control every living being absorbed and travel between worlds, these powers will be forgotten since the plot suits him, the relationships are nonexistent the protagonist only sees even women as objects, his character is a hypocrite of the type who justifies himself and sees himself as a victim. His goal is to be a superior being for what? Well, he has nothing else to do, he is the most powerful being in the world and has 0 connection with other people.
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Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also
the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.
A good one for the harem genre. A touching story about a bad man journey to become a good man, calming the sorrows of mothers, daugthers, widows and the poor women around the world. Really, such dedication, such a noble cause. Every man would envy such heroic spirit and would want to take upon themselves this hazardous mission!
best akikan's storys . i hope you will write a story about classroom of the elite 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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Akikan 40 in live: Akika × Girlfriend [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I don't really like Demon Slayer Ark, because MC underestimates Kagaya and Demon Slayer Corp
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.
Thanks for an amazing story. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Mushoku Tensei Fanfiction Please, Good World Building, Good Story, Hype, Strong Enemy, Magic, Battle Skils, Armor Mecha, Waifu, Family, Need OP MC
The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.
I have read most of your past work. I can confidently say that they are good so I'm gonna try this one. I have one complain though please don't edge us by not fully commiting to "sauce" chap, man I beg you continue a sauce chap and don't leave it to our imagination.😁😁😁😁😁😁
Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.
it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness
there's only 3 more remaining stories of author-san that I haven't read yet 😂 I wonder if author-san created a fanfic of FGO, will the mc conquer the whole chaldea by targeting the girls and seducing more in every singularity😂
This work is so good. I don't know what to say but the way this work was different from the other works from this author gives a different vibes. This story is exciting, I somehow wanted to see the mc in "Darling in the Franxx".
God Akikan at it again! MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore
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揭示劇透 The main problem of this story lies in its protagonist, the charisma is replaced by secondary characters who applaud and venerate him even if it is the first time they see him, the system only gives him three powers, absorb and copy every living being, mentally control every living being absorbed and travel between worlds, these powers will be forgotten since the plot suits him, the relationships are nonexistent the protagonist only sees even women as objects, his character is a hypocrite of the type who justifies himself and sees himself as a victim. His goal is to be a superior being for what? Well, he has nothing else to do, he is the most powerful being in the world and has 0 connection with other people.
揭示劇透 Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also
the author's big flaw is the inconsistency with the protagonist's powers, which never seem to evolve or are not explained, a being that absorbed so much DNA was supposed to have enormous potential, any comic book villain that absorbed so much dnd from different species was continental level. the story was cool but the plot basically keeps going around and around, the MC goes to some world and makes a harem, absorbs some of people's DNA and just.
A good one for the harem genre. A touching story about a bad man journey to become a good man, calming the sorrows of mothers, daugthers, widows and the poor women around the world. Really, such dedication, such a noble cause. Every man would envy such heroic spirit and would want to take upon themselves this hazardous mission!
best akikan's storys . i hope you will write a story about classroom of the elite 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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I don't really like Demon Slayer Ark, because MC underestimates Kagaya and Demon Slayer Corp
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more.
Thanks for an amazing story. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Mushoku Tensei Fanfiction Please, Good World Building, Good Story, Hype, Strong Enemy, Magic, Battle Skils, Armor Mecha, Waifu, Family, Need OP MC
The writing is pretty good but all your main characters act like someone that has gotten a lobotomy.
I have read most of your past work. I can confidently say that they are good so I'm gonna try this one. I have one complain though please don't edge us by not fully commiting to "sauce" chap, man I beg you continue a sauce chap and don't leave it to our imagination.😁😁😁😁😁😁
Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.
it feels like all his characters are the same person just with different names, I feel sorry for those whom he adds to his fanfiction, he completely kills their character, brain and uniqueness
there's only 3 more remaining stories of author-san that I haven't read yet 😂 I wonder if author-san created a fanfic of FGO, will the mc conquer the whole chaldea by targeting the girls and seducing more in every singularity😂
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