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I had several opinions about this fanfic, mainly in relation to the protagonist who I found boring and without great ambitions, but honestly, currently the best fanfics in the webnovel are this one and the one about invincible that I'm reading
Very great so far just instead of baki i'll perfer kengan ashura or an combined world as kengan ashura has everything better than baki in my opnion since in baki most fights are just he swung speed of light or too strong to move or feel like water or animal
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After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.
Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]
MC is hypocrite he kill people and He says it was an accident, He thinks he is a good person............................... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Aduhai, mendapatkan dna lalat dan hal aneh lainnya, ...... ciri khas akikan [img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan] [img=merekomendasikan]
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A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures
Akikan novel with an entirely new power system compared to his other novels. Need I say more 😎
Kimetsu no Yaiba fear but akikan = 8.9.10 /10 GHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
5 stars for the book cover image 🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿
so far everything going fine, I wonder what author expects for the end in this fanfic.
I've waited for this guy's new fanfic to be released for months now. And thank the heavens he made a new one.
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Fanfic = Highschool of the dead (h.o.t.d.) Protagonist male = not chinese Females characters = 👍 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Another great story from akikan, let's just hope this will also be better and not like riser one 😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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there's only 3 more remaining stories of author-san that I haven't read yet 😂 I wonder if author-san created a fanfic of FGO, will the mc conquer the whole chaldea by targeting the girls and seducing more in every singularity😂
I had several opinions about this fanfic, mainly in relation to the protagonist who I found boring and without great ambitions, but honestly, currently the best fanfics in the webnovel are this one and the one about invincible that I'm reading
Very great so far just instead of baki i'll perfer kengan ashura or an combined world as kengan ashura has everything better than baki in my opnion since in baki most fights are just he swung speed of light or too strong to move or feel like water or animal
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After two villain characters, you try to become a good guy? Let's Go!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
After the DxD story, this is the lowest it has fallen, the protagonist's personality is no longer charismatic, it is insufferable, the interactions only focus on whether she is a woman, the protagonist drools if he is a man , kisses the protagonist's feet, there is no longer any coercion or anything. It is surprising to see how this author remained silent about this.
Honest review. I mean, it's a akikan novel, and he never tried to change his style of writing. MC is actually not a villain this time but just "trying" to be the good guy. Again, sometimes the logic MC uses doesn't make sense, just like any other akikan novel. And I don't doubt that his whole personality will change through out the whole novel several times. At Least this novel isn't as slow paced as the other ones. I do like that he is experiencing with his system and the DNA stuff, that makes it interesting, even more interesting than the other systems. Very bad writing(as per usual if akikan), As it is written like it for 10 year olds. Can't really say much as it's only in it's early chapters. But I hope he doesn't ruin the story like he usually does in his other novels or uses no logic for the characters. It's a entertaining novel to read but also a bad one. [4/30/2024]
MC is hypocrite he kill people and He says it was an accident, He thinks he is a good person............................... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Aduhai, mendapatkan dna lalat dan hal aneh lainnya, ...... ciri khas akikan [img=merekomendasikan][img=merekomendasikan] [img=merekomendasikan]
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
A new Akikan's fanfic i hope this is good like others. He has the ability to obtain the dna of animals to strengthen himself and can also transform into that animal as he wish. This ability have a good potential, imagine being able to obtain the dna of other races or dna of mythical and magical creatures. Also imagine if he can get a dna of eldritch creatures
Akikan novel with an entirely new power system compared to his other novels. Need I say more 😎
Kimetsu no Yaiba fear but akikan = 8.9.10 /10 GHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
5 stars for the book cover image 🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿
so far everything going fine, I wonder what author expects for the end in this fanfic.
I've waited for this guy's new fanfic to be released for months now. And thank the heavens he made a new one.
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
Fanfic = Highschool of the dead (h.o.t.d.) Protagonist male = not chinese Females characters = 👍 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Another great story from akikan, let's just hope this will also be better and not like riser one 😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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there's only 3 more remaining stories of author-san that I haven't read yet 😂 I wonder if author-san created a fanfic of FGO, will the mc conquer the whole chaldea by targeting the girls and seducing more in every singularity😂