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Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.
A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try
Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra
trash story trash everything ..............................................................................................................................
Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.
Don’t waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.
It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.
Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.
El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capítulo que leí es aún mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.
This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You
This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!
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Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a “good person” but sleeps with people’s wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. It’s like that’s the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I can’t bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
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I honestly didn't expect much from this story, and after reading 50 chapters, I have the right to write.... What if, I waited what I thought and even less.... I find it bored to read these stories with the same characters that only make it worse with time, I find it more fun to read the other work of this author that is released together with this one... But I leave this one. Do I recommend it? Well, if you like MCs who pretend to what they are not, and the same repetitive story with dialogues Mediocre, then here's your story, but if.... I don't recommend it
I love it 😍 The more updates the more iIread it. Hello author 😁 Can you please more in Mahouka koukou no Rettousie/The irregular at magic high school. Add Maya to her harem. More chapter.. More chapter in danmachi.
Me encantó esta historia, desde el desarrollo, los personajes, el MC, los mundos que elegiste, todo. Es cierto que hay algunos problemas con la personalidad del MC, pero no lo veo como algo malo sino como el desarrollo de personaje, empezó siendo un villano en su historia de fondo, pero me gusta que se esfuerce (o finja hacerlo) para ser el "chico bueno". No hizo las típicas cosas que cualquier MC villano, sino que ayudó cuando pudo e intentó en todos los mundos que los MC originales no quedaran tan mal. En lugar de hacer que todos los vieran como un villano despiadado como siempre pasa(lo cual odio), fabrica una imagen de un líder carismático y se gana la simpatía de todos, no se bien que palabra usa para calificarlo, no es un Héroe, un Antihéroe ni un Villano, diría que es una mezcla de los 3, se comporta como un héroe, piensa como un antihéroe y se retrata a si mismo como un villano. Me gustó como desarrollaste la historia en cada uno de los mundos en los que estuvo y los mundos que elegiste. Va a ser interesante si lo mandas al mundo de DXD por ejemplo, con una habilidad como la suya se volvería un ser único. También sería interesante verlo en otros mundos como Kenichi, Nanatsu no Taizai, Tensura o Fate. Si tuviera que criticar algo sería las personalidades que les das a los protagonistas originales como Takashi e Ikki, son mas desagradables que en el canon.
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it's Akikan Sama what do you expect but the best. "Catch them all Smash them all"
Gracias por tu dedicación, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucedió lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, éxitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.
Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.
A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try
Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra
trash story trash everything ..............................................................................................................................
Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.
Don’t waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.
It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.
Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.
El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capítulo que leí es aún mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.
This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You
This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!
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Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a “good person” but sleeps with people’s wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. It’s like that’s the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I can’t bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
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I honestly didn't expect much from this story, and after reading 50 chapters, I have the right to write.... What if, I waited what I thought and even less.... I find it bored to read these stories with the same characters that only make it worse with time, I find it more fun to read the other work of this author that is released together with this one... But I leave this one. Do I recommend it? Well, if you like MCs who pretend to what they are not, and the same repetitive story with dialogues Mediocre, then here's your story, but if.... I don't recommend it
I love it 😍 The more updates the more iIread it. Hello author 😁 Can you please more in Mahouka koukou no Rettousie/The irregular at magic high school. Add Maya to her harem. More chapter.. More chapter in danmachi.
Me encantó esta historia, desde el desarrollo, los personajes, el MC, los mundos que elegiste, todo. Es cierto que hay algunos problemas con la personalidad del MC, pero no lo veo como algo malo sino como el desarrollo de personaje, empezó siendo un villano en su historia de fondo, pero me gusta que se esfuerce (o finja hacerlo) para ser el "chico bueno". No hizo las típicas cosas que cualquier MC villano, sino que ayudó cuando pudo e intentó en todos los mundos que los MC originales no quedaran tan mal. En lugar de hacer que todos los vieran como un villano despiadado como siempre pasa(lo cual odio), fabrica una imagen de un líder carismático y se gana la simpatía de todos, no se bien que palabra usa para calificarlo, no es un Héroe, un Antihéroe ni un Villano, diría que es una mezcla de los 3, se comporta como un héroe, piensa como un antihéroe y se retrata a si mismo como un villano. Me gustó como desarrollaste la historia en cada uno de los mundos en los que estuvo y los mundos que elegiste. Va a ser interesante si lo mandas al mundo de DXD por ejemplo, con una habilidad como la suya se volvería un ser único. También sería interesante verlo en otros mundos como Kenichi, Nanatsu no Taizai, Tensura o Fate. Si tuviera que criticar algo sería las personalidades que les das a los protagonistas originales como Takashi e Ikki, son mas desagradables que en el canon.
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it's Akikan Sama what do you expect but the best. "Catch them all Smash them all"
Gracias por tu dedicación, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucedió lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, éxitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.