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Although the translation is good but it still has Chinese elements but the concept of sealing is really good but it takes too long and each chapter are very boring after the start
5/5/2/2/3 This is an absolutely gem mine. A really good read to pass time. Also shows how op fuinjutsu actually is. Creative exploration of fuinjutsu is also showed here. Only complaints are mc is too passive,nothing ever really happens in the story,slice of life(gets boring after some time),one dimension life of a shinobi.
A very decent translation,, earlier chapters of the novel have been a bit inconsistent but the translation as well as the story becomes absolute peak after 50 or so chapters. The story is amazing if you want to see Naruto series from a bit of peaceful and Slice of Life perspective. Nonetheless, I hope the fiction proceeds smoothly and gets a superb conclusion to it.
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This is a very good novel but the RAWs haven't been updated for more than year so don't expect an ending to this. 100 more chapters as of 138 for those who want to see this through
Author is doing a very good job on the translation, but when are you going to update the chapters?
I think the chinese author of this fanfic has died? There was a mention of him around qidian's reader forums but I can't be sure if they were talking about this author or not.
It's an awesome Naruto fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too 👍 I love the idea about Seal jutsu/technique in Naruto.. I love how it have many versatile use/application (especially projection jutsu, make duel disk, etc).. I also like that MC/Natsuhiko became a teacher and tavern owner (I love the slice of life of him).. Will there be a love interest for Natsuhiko later?? I hope it was with Kushina (it will be interesting to see the change if that happen.. Especially with Minato and Naruto).. Can't wait to see what you will do to Danzo now that he try to bring a trouble at MC/Natsuhiko after he reject root.. Love your story so much author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
揭示劇透
I am really surprised with how well translator translated this series , I have read the mtl and I already lost some of my brain cells. Though the approach to new ways of using sealing jutsu caught my eye . Interesting premise , smart mc and nice fl who contributed to story . Overall I would recommend this book the translator once again has done a great job 👏 I also learned a lot . 👍🏻
I'm loving it so far. But can someone help me find the raw, cus I can't find it on mtl.
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If not the best, one of the best naruto fan fics I've ever seen, the story explores the sealing jutsus of the naruto universe, and the main character uses programming concepts to understand and improve the sealing jutsus, it's really very good written.
This is really good!! I wish there were hundreds of chapters :) Please keep up the good work author san
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it's a pity that there are only 237 chapters in this fanfiction, because this is Chinese fanfiction and they are rarely finished... .......................... .. . .. .............
揭示劇透
very recommended, I have read the raw and it seems that the raw stop at chapter 237th, last updated 2nd May 2023. unless the translator wanted to try writing the continuation of the story. then reading this no ending fanfic will be waste of time.. anyway the overall ideas is very good, such as MC create alternative version of multiple infants shadow clone of himself and sealing the clone in pokeball with mechanism of slowly leaking the chakra, to lessen the side effect of shadow clone. using shadow clone to only clone parts of body such as hands ears eyes by connecting the chakra meridians to user's chakra meridians accupoint to mimick the ability of flower flower fruit of Nico robin One piece, creating game arcade that steal chakra as payment of playing arcade for user to analyze, soft fist combined with his alternative soap water ninjutsu for slippery effect, soap bubble sound insulation effect and affects targets vision and eyes.
揭示劇透
The plot may be unconventional but I find it engaging with a pinch of comedy. I have high hopes for this fic. Hope the author doesn't drop it..
I absolutely love this novel keep up the amazing work it would be awesome if the MC and kushina got together I like how you translated sealing justsu into coding/ runes
raw: 木叶：忍者学校的封印术老师 This seems very good so far, with a nice focus on sealing jutsus. The translation seems great and the translator is making sure timelines line up.
Hello newbie reader here... for now (chapter eight )the story is really great... This is my own opinion, the story gives a "different" explanation or system for sealing jutsu that is different from the other fanfics... Will update or edit this review in the future along the chapters...PLEASE DON'T GET MAD, as I am waiting for the event or world background... PLEASE CONTINUE BEING THIS AWESOME FANFIC...
The idea itself is very good.not many fan fics realize that sealing jutsu is so op. Even anime itself had to kill off almost all sealing jutsu masters{ushiogakure} because of it being so op. And don’t forget it took the scheme of all 5 village and tens of thousands of ninja. And the thing is it was an ambush not even a total war. As long as this fic explores on sealing jutsu with proper plot I am sticking around.
Frankly, it's pretty good for the first 5 episodes. We have a good main character in a good timeline. Of course, I don't know what the future will bring.
The traces of the Chinese nonsense almost all mtl naruto ff have can almost be said to be negligible. The names of the characters are not a jumbled mess where one character is called as another. There are some sentences that may confuse readers because of the way it was structured but it can be ignored. The quality can almost be mistaken as an original. The effort of the translator is very obvious, so kudos to the translator. I'm already at 50+ chaps and the quality is still consistent.
Although the translation is good but it still has Chinese elements but the concept of sealing is really good but it takes too long and each chapter are very boring after the start
5/5/2/2/3 This is an absolutely gem mine. A really good read to pass time. Also shows how op fuinjutsu actually is. Creative exploration of fuinjutsu is also showed here. Only complaints are mc is too passive,nothing ever really happens in the story,slice of life(gets boring after some time),one dimension life of a shinobi.
A very decent translation,, earlier chapters of the novel have been a bit inconsistent but the translation as well as the story becomes absolute peak after 50 or so chapters. The story is amazing if you want to see Naruto series from a bit of peaceful and Slice of Life perspective. Nonetheless, I hope the fiction proceeds smoothly and gets a superb conclusion to it.
Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff
This is a very good novel but the RAWs haven't been updated for more than year so don't expect an ending to this. 100 more chapters as of 138 for those who want to see this through
Author is doing a very good job on the translation, but when are you going to update the chapters?
I think the chinese author of this fanfic has died? There was a mention of him around qidian's reader forums but I can't be sure if they were talking about this author or not.
It's an awesome Naruto fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too 👍 I love the idea about Seal jutsu/technique in Naruto.. I love how it have many versatile use/application (especially projection jutsu, make duel disk, etc).. I also like that MC/Natsuhiko became a teacher and tavern owner (I love the slice of life of him).. Will there be a love interest for Natsuhiko later?? I hope it was with Kushina (it will be interesting to see the change if that happen.. Especially with Minato and Naruto).. Can't wait to see what you will do to Danzo now that he try to bring a trouble at MC/Natsuhiko after he reject root.. Love your story so much author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍
揭示劇透 I am really surprised with how well translator translated this series , I have read the mtl and I already lost some of my brain cells. Though the approach to new ways of using sealing jutsu caught my eye . Interesting premise , smart mc and nice fl who contributed to story . Overall I would recommend this book the translator once again has done a great job 👏 I also learned a lot . 👍🏻
I'm loving it so far. But can someone help me find the raw, cus I can't find it on mtl.
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If not the best, one of the best naruto fan fics I've ever seen, the story explores the sealing jutsus of the naruto universe, and the main character uses programming concepts to understand and improve the sealing jutsus, it's really very good written.
This is really good!! I wish there were hundreds of chapters :) Please keep up the good work author san
❤️😍😍❤️❤️❤️😭😅😅😭❤️😍🤤😛💩🤬🤬😆😛😑😗🤔🤤😛❤️😛😍😔😑😔😔😛😔🥰😔😑👍😆😅🙄😔🤬🥹🥰🫠😑🫠😛😍🤬🤔🤤🤔🤤🤔😑🙄😆🙂❤️🤣👍😭👀😘😔💩😔🤤😍😅😔😅👀🙂😛😑🥰🤔🙄😭😭💩🙂🤣🤣🤬😭🤬🤤❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰
it's a pity that there are only 237 chapters in this fanfiction, because this is Chinese fanfiction and they are rarely finished... .......................... .. . .. .............
揭示劇透 very recommended, I have read the raw and it seems that the raw stop at chapter 237th, last updated 2nd May 2023. unless the translator wanted to try writing the continuation of the story. then reading this no ending fanfic will be waste of time.. anyway the overall ideas is very good, such as MC create alternative version of multiple infants shadow clone of himself and sealing the clone in pokeball with mechanism of slowly leaking the chakra, to lessen the side effect of shadow clone. using shadow clone to only clone parts of body such as hands ears eyes by connecting the chakra meridians to user's chakra meridians accupoint to mimick the ability of flower flower fruit of Nico robin One piece, creating game arcade that steal chakra as payment of playing arcade for user to analyze, soft fist combined with his alternative soap water ninjutsu for slippery effect, soap bubble sound insulation effect and affects targets vision and eyes.
揭示劇透 The plot may be unconventional but I find it engaging with a pinch of comedy. I have high hopes for this fic. Hope the author doesn't drop it..
I absolutely love this novel keep up the amazing work it would be awesome if the MC and kushina got together I like how you translated sealing justsu into coding/ runes
raw: 木叶：忍者学校的封印术老师 This seems very good so far, with a nice focus on sealing jutsus. The translation seems great and the translator is making sure timelines line up.
Hello newbie reader here... for now (chapter eight )the story is really great... This is my own opinion, the story gives a "different" explanation or system for sealing jutsu that is different from the other fanfics... Will update or edit this review in the future along the chapters...PLEASE DON'T GET MAD, as I am waiting for the event or world background... PLEASE CONTINUE BEING THIS AWESOME FANFIC...
The idea itself is very good.not many fan fics realize that sealing jutsu is so op. Even anime itself had to kill off almost all sealing jutsu masters{ushiogakure} because of it being so op. And don’t forget it took the scheme of all 5 village and tens of thousands of ninja. And the thing is it was an ambush not even a total war. As long as this fic explores on sealing jutsu with proper plot I am sticking around.
Frankly, it's pretty good for the first 5 episodes. We have a good main character in a good timeline. Of course, I don't know what the future will bring.
The traces of the Chinese nonsense almost all mtl naruto ff have can almost be said to be negligible. The names of the characters are not a jumbled mess where one character is called as another. There are some sentences that may confuse readers because of the way it was structured but it can be ignored. The quality can almost be mistaken as an original. The effort of the translator is very obvious, so kudos to the translator. I'm already at 50+ chaps and the quality is still consistent.