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Jaehaerys83

Love it................................................................................................................................................

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Kushagra_Raj

Great Novel. Proper description of House Black, Gryffindor and Peverell. Hadrian Ignotus Peverell really become a Silent Guardian. Hats off.

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1stSlug
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Welp, I've just finished read and here is my personal view/rating: BE WARNED SPOILERS! This was a solid 3.5/5, maybe a 4/5 if pushed. The story was well written overall and the plot had a lot going for it, that is, until the inevitable 'power creep' kick in. Hence why I suspect the rushed ending. The romance was a bit thin, but generally added to the story. Did suffer from the usual issue of the romance option being there simply because 'romance' and really had no real impact on the story. The fights scenes were good though, pretty detailed without going on and on about everything little factoid possible. But as mentioned above, the issues of 'power creep' kicked in and well, every battle was 'how can we force Harry enemies to seem more difficult this time?'. And then then there is the rushed ending. I had honestly expected this story to last muuuuch longer than this. Was expecting Grendle to pose more of a problem or the muggle government to suddenly want to stick their paw in the grinder and suddenly the seeds of a world war planted. But yeah. That didn't happen. So yeah, overall; A good solid read: 3.5/5 Thanks for the hard work and personally, I'm looking forward to the MCU fanfic you might create. Just be wary about the dreaded 'Power Creep'!

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cp0_officer

The story improves through out. Also a satisfying ending.

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Drew_Yarbrough

Absolute Peak fan fic Definitely worth the read

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Wizardlyllc

great story its sad that it ended but loved it when it lasted

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Pogmasta

The perfect book. Thank you for sharing this book with the world.

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pratikp1

It's often difficult to find a unique storyline when it comes to Harry Potter fanfics. This story has found itself among the best I've read in the genre.

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Iska_kh

I read a lot of harry potter fanfiction and this particular one can confidently stay in top 5. Great job for an amazing journey author, I am waiting for your next work.

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Vaibhav_Mundhra_1039

author literally made harry remember his past life and then made harry forget them using dumbles greater good. the book is shit and I m dropping it. don't read it it's trashy and if somehow iIlater reread it i hope harry doesn't like help his parents or dumbles as someone with a mind of atleast 30 years would never help someone of this betrayal even his 1 year old brother despite having nothing to do with it

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Hiddenuser1381

/.................................................................................................................................................................................................is this a translation

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md_rizvi

Shit at it's best. Every 2 chapter this story will make you shout "This is Shit!" again this is shit!

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blazor

Best iv read in hp fanfiction..................... ............................................................................................................................................

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Plonk_2314

Was fine until the romance. Why don't these motherfuckers add that tag?

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Rak
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This book is written in AU HP world where harry has slowly become a one man army against baldymort, there is slight dumdumdore bashing. harry learns sword fighting and makes different friends(au). baldymort became smarter because of early hocrux destruction. its been an year now since this book started. author was new and used lot of AI at start. which im thankful for, as the AI gave author a starting point to put his thoughts into the story. now we are reaching chapter 350 and i kid you not, the story writing has improved so much. Great job author. ill say give it a try.

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BlyatxBlyat

A good Harry Potter fanfic which does have a different premise than most. The separation of Harry from his Identity as "The boy who lived" really allows for a different Harry to take shape. There are a few problems though, the beginning conflict (like early 1-20 chapters) feels quite forced, and no real people would act that way towards family even with some manipulations, it feels as if the author does not like Dumbledore at all without considering him as more than just a manipulative old man. I am all for Dumbeldore bashing but there has to be considerations of his personality as a whole, but this is more of a personal opinion as I believe that while Dumbledore is a flawed individual, he never had ill intentions for Harry. If ou can get past the first 30 chapters without seething (Most comments were of people complaining about the conflict) then you will probably enjoy the rest of the story. I have to give credit to the author, though the early conflict is a bit contrived, the way it sets up the rest of the story is handled decently.

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FairyCannon

Garbage made by AI.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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boy17
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This story is pure magic! The author perfectly captures the spirit of Harry Potter while adding fresh twists that keep you hooked. The characters feel authentic, the plot is exciting, and the emotions hit all the right notes. It’s a heartfelt, well-written story that any Potter fan will love. It improves the original!

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Palloma_Paula

Sensacional, continue a história muito bom mesmo...

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DaoistSyqmLo

Мне всё нравится. Всегда мало, жду ещё. Просят столько символов написать, ну это конечно прикол. Чего тут расписывать? Либо кайф либо нет.) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Tom_Lee

Slow start but it's gets interesting as the story progresses! Good and enjoyable read.

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Maico_Vazquez

Esta muy bueno lo único es que no tiene sentido que la jente de gindelwol se aliene con voldi ellos no son puristas sino anti mugles quieren a todos lo magos contra los mugles no les importa si son mestisos nacidos de mugles o familias nobles

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Agnideep_Goswami_4209

I want to tell you brother, keep writing I want to see the book finished on a good note...

2mth
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Xiaozero0

It’s a good book I loved it so far I got I’m on chapter 282, while the other review are very misleading many part of this book is rushed and some parts too slow and the romance before 282 was kinda rushed but I’m glad he found romance but the relationship is kinda no need it. Regardless I love this story I really need yall to read the story and not be afraid of the reviews of him losing his memory he lose his memory one for a short time. 🤣 this is a action book not romance so don’t expect romance in the first 200 chapters just enjoy the Harry potter world! There is some mistakes but it’s not that noticeable unless your looking for them. Tbh I wanted Dumbledore to at least question “the boy who lives” but 🤷‍♀️ mans never apologized at all either. But I hope yall really enjoy this book like I did!!

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Edgar_Hernandez_9079

One of the best Harry Potter FanFic's; if not the best, I have ever read. If you want a FanFic that only follows the original plot with an OP System than this is not for you. BUT if you want a story that has its own take where Harry Potter has a start worse than the original plot but rises from the ashes through hard work and immense world background that he can go toe to toe with the White mage(Puppeteer) himself. Then this is for you. Author keep up the good work, all my power stones are going to you!!!

3mth
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Crimson_guy

Well thought and well written story. One of the few fanfics which I read which stays close to original but builds anticipation on what happens next.

3mth
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DaoistkjQmi4

Очень слабо. Есть несколько вопросов к автору: В чем был смысл растягивать главы в начале без точек зрения персонажей (например лорда Блека? Очень сомнительно что пару абзацев пояснили мышление и приоритетов Арктура) Брат Гарри так вообще очень вафельный на этапе 2го года обучения... Я понимаю что фанфиков много и сделать "авторский" пипец как тяжело (я пробовал) Просто... долго и очень скучно-пресно, но я знаю что обязательно найдутся люди которым это понравится, так что автор не унывай, все ок, на каждого будет его аудитория. Удачи и совершенствуся.!

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dark_animegod_mvp

it start really slow but It starts to pick up later on even though it not the most unique story I find the story to be pretty good so far

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Pavanicks

The beginning of the story is a bit confusing, I think the author wasn't quite sure what he wanted to do. But he adapted well and the story stabilizes around chapter 40. The story is interesting and the protagonist is morally peculiar, he detests the concept of the greater good, but acts in order to find what he considers the best long-term outcome in the grand scheme of things. James and Lily act like they are shepherd Dumbledore's little lambs. The director is arrogant and slightly obnoxious when he decides to play puppet master. All things considered, these are not constructions that are too far from what is known about these characters in canon. There is romance, it starts around chapter 230, and so far the interactions have been natural and appropriate, nothing exhausting or that negatively affects the narrative flow. One thing that disappointed me a little is that the author promises to develop the magical world beyond Hogwarts, but he hasn't developed anything considerable so far, November 2024. I'm intrigued to think if the story will end with Voldemort's defeat or if the development will go further. I would enjoy following the protagonist traveling the world, dealing with politics and intrigue after Hogwarts. Anyway, it's a good fanfic. 8.7/10 is the rating I give it.

3mth
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Abhay_Adhikari_6709

I am disappointed with this novel, it feels like I am reading a story written by Chat GPT. The story and plot could have been nice if it was written well. There is so little character development, it feels like I am reading about the same Harry from chapter 1. Where is the growth? It just a bad novel overall, it gives HP fanfictions a bad rep, and the only reason it's a little popular is because of quick updates.

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Jaehaerys83

Love it................................................................................................................................................

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Kushagra_Raj

Great Novel. Proper description of House Black, Gryffindor and Peverell. Hadrian Ignotus Peverell really become a Silent Guardian. Hats off.

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1stSlug
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Welp, I've just finished read and here is my personal view/rating: BE WARNED SPOILERS! This was a solid 3.5/5, maybe a 4/5 if pushed. The story was well written overall and the plot had a lot going for it, that is, until the inevitable 'power creep' kick in. Hence why I suspect the rushed ending. The romance was a bit thin, but generally added to the story. Did suffer from the usual issue of the romance option being there simply because 'romance' and really had no real impact on the story. The fights scenes were good though, pretty detailed without going on and on about everything little factoid possible. But as mentioned above, the issues of 'power creep' kicked in and well, every battle was 'how can we force Harry enemies to seem more difficult this time?'. And then then there is the rushed ending. I had honestly expected this story to last muuuuch longer than this. Was expecting Grendle to pose more of a problem or the muggle government to suddenly want to stick their paw in the grinder and suddenly the seeds of a world war planted. But yeah. That didn't happen. So yeah, overall; A good solid read: 3.5/5 Thanks for the hard work and personally, I'm looking forward to the MCU fanfic you might create. Just be wary about the dreaded 'Power Creep'!

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cp0_officer

The story improves through out. Also a satisfying ending.

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Drew_Yarbrough

Absolute Peak fan fic Definitely worth the read

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Wizardlyllc

great story its sad that it ended but loved it when it lasted

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Pogmasta

The perfect book. Thank you for sharing this book with the world.

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pratikp1

It's often difficult to find a unique storyline when it comes to Harry Potter fanfics. This story has found itself among the best I've read in the genre.

7d
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Iska_kh

I read a lot of harry potter fanfiction and this particular one can confidently stay in top 5. Great job for an amazing journey author, I am waiting for your next work.

7d
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Vaibhav_Mundhra_1039

author literally made harry remember his past life and then made harry forget them using dumbles greater good. the book is shit and I m dropping it. don't read it it's trashy and if somehow iIlater reread it i hope harry doesn't like help his parents or dumbles as someone with a mind of atleast 30 years would never help someone of this betrayal even his 1 year old brother despite having nothing to do with it

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Hiddenuser1381

/.................................................................................................................................................................................................is this a translation

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md_rizvi

Shit at it's best. Every 2 chapter this story will make you shout "This is Shit!" again this is shit!

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blazor

Best iv read in hp fanfiction..................... ............................................................................................................................................

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Plonk_2314

Was fine until the romance. Why don't these motherfuckers add that tag?

29d
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Rak
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This book is written in AU HP world where harry has slowly become a one man army against baldymort, there is slight dumdumdore bashing. harry learns sword fighting and makes different friends(au). baldymort became smarter because of early hocrux destruction. its been an year now since this book started. author was new and used lot of AI at start. which im thankful for, as the AI gave author a starting point to put his thoughts into the story. now we are reaching chapter 350 and i kid you not, the story writing has improved so much. Great job author. ill say give it a try.

1mth
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BlyatxBlyat

A good Harry Potter fanfic which does have a different premise than most. The separation of Harry from his Identity as "The boy who lived" really allows for a different Harry to take shape. There are a few problems though, the beginning conflict (like early 1-20 chapters) feels quite forced, and no real people would act that way towards family even with some manipulations, it feels as if the author does not like Dumbledore at all without considering him as more than just a manipulative old man. I am all for Dumbeldore bashing but there has to be considerations of his personality as a whole, but this is more of a personal opinion as I believe that while Dumbledore is a flawed individual, he never had ill intentions for Harry. If ou can get past the first 30 chapters without seething (Most comments were of people complaining about the conflict) then you will probably enjoy the rest of the story. I have to give credit to the author, though the early conflict is a bit contrived, the way it sets up the rest of the story is handled decently.

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FairyCannon

Garbage made by AI.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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boy17
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This story is pure magic! The author perfectly captures the spirit of Harry Potter while adding fresh twists that keep you hooked. The characters feel authentic, the plot is exciting, and the emotions hit all the right notes. It’s a heartfelt, well-written story that any Potter fan will love. It improves the original!

1mth
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Palloma_Paula

Sensacional, continue a história muito bom mesmo...

1mth
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DaoistSyqmLo

Мне всё нравится. Всегда мало, жду ещё. Просят столько символов написать, ну это конечно прикол. Чего тут расписывать? Либо кайф либо нет.) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Tom_Lee

Slow start but it's gets interesting as the story progresses! Good and enjoyable read.

2mth
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Maico_Vazquez

Esta muy bueno lo único es que no tiene sentido que la jente de gindelwol se aliene con voldi ellos no son puristas sino anti mugles quieren a todos lo magos contra los mugles no les importa si son mestisos nacidos de mugles o familias nobles

2mth
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Agnideep_Goswami_4209

I want to tell you brother, keep writing I want to see the book finished on a good note...

2mth
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Xiaozero0

It’s a good book I loved it so far I got I’m on chapter 282, while the other review are very misleading many part of this book is rushed and some parts too slow and the romance before 282 was kinda rushed but I’m glad he found romance but the relationship is kinda no need it. Regardless I love this story I really need yall to read the story and not be afraid of the reviews of him losing his memory he lose his memory one for a short time. 🤣 this is a action book not romance so don’t expect romance in the first 200 chapters just enjoy the Harry potter world! There is some mistakes but it’s not that noticeable unless your looking for them. Tbh I wanted Dumbledore to at least question “the boy who lives” but 🤷‍♀️ mans never apologized at all either. But I hope yall really enjoy this book like I did!!

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Edgar_Hernandez_9079

One of the best Harry Potter FanFic's; if not the best, I have ever read. If you want a FanFic that only follows the original plot with an OP System than this is not for you. BUT if you want a story that has its own take where Harry Potter has a start worse than the original plot but rises from the ashes through hard work and immense world background that he can go toe to toe with the White mage(Puppeteer) himself. Then this is for you. Author keep up the good work, all my power stones are going to you!!!

3mth
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Crimson_guy

Well thought and well written story. One of the few fanfics which I read which stays close to original but builds anticipation on what happens next.

3mth
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DaoistkjQmi4

Очень слабо. Есть несколько вопросов к автору: В чем был смысл растягивать главы в начале без точек зрения персонажей (например лорда Блека? Очень сомнительно что пару абзацев пояснили мышление и приоритетов Арктура) Брат Гарри так вообще очень вафельный на этапе 2го года обучения... Я понимаю что фанфиков много и сделать "авторский" пипец как тяжело (я пробовал) Просто... долго и очень скучно-пресно, но я знаю что обязательно найдутся люди которым это понравится, так что автор не унывай, все ок, на каждого будет его аудитория. Удачи и совершенствуся.!

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dark_animegod_mvp

it start really slow but It starts to pick up later on even though it not the most unique story I find the story to be pretty good so far

3mth
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Pavanicks

The beginning of the story is a bit confusing, I think the author wasn't quite sure what he wanted to do. But he adapted well and the story stabilizes around chapter 40. The story is interesting and the protagonist is morally peculiar, he detests the concept of the greater good, but acts in order to find what he considers the best long-term outcome in the grand scheme of things. James and Lily act like they are shepherd Dumbledore's little lambs. The director is arrogant and slightly obnoxious when he decides to play puppet master. All things considered, these are not constructions that are too far from what is known about these characters in canon. There is romance, it starts around chapter 230, and so far the interactions have been natural and appropriate, nothing exhausting or that negatively affects the narrative flow. One thing that disappointed me a little is that the author promises to develop the magical world beyond Hogwarts, but he hasn't developed anything considerable so far, November 2024. I'm intrigued to think if the story will end with Voldemort's defeat or if the development will go further. I would enjoy following the protagonist traveling the world, dealing with politics and intrigue after Hogwarts. Anyway, it's a good fanfic. 8.7/10 is the rating I give it.

3mth
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Abhay_Adhikari_6709

I am disappointed with this novel, it feels like I am reading a story written by Chat GPT. The story and plot could have been nice if it was written well. There is so little character development, it feels like I am reading about the same Harry from chapter 1. Where is the growth? It just a bad novel overall, it gives HP fanfictions a bad rep, and the only reason it's a little popular is because of quick updates.

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